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Killer

@.Killer.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Havvii
Yup i also like Shritama she was amazing specially in begining of show.

exactly..but CVs ruined her character

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

u r such a good writer ...hey dear if u really want to try different then bring some other girl other then J or Manyata for Udaiveer ...a totally new character which has all goods that M and J dont have and bads that that too different form J and M

second option may be...that u carry on the way u want but then change the name from Jaiveer to udayveer where both girls J and M stand equal chance to have or have not Udayveer ...all same but a balance

Why I gave aforesaid advices well cant bear J how so ever good and angel she may be...u may say i have a some psycological problem 😕...so wont be able to read !!!!

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Killer

@.Killer.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: shana0127
u r such a good writer ...hey dear if u really want to try different then bring some other girl other then J or Manyata for Udaiveer ...a totally new character which has all goods that M and J dont have and bads that that too different form J and M

second option may be...that u carry on the way u want but then change the name from Jaiveer to udayveer where both girls J and M stand equal chance to have or have not Udayveer ...all same but a balance

Why I gave aforesaid advices well cant bear J how so ever good and angel she may be...u may say i have a some psycological problem 😕...so wont be able to read !!!!

Dii I dont have any problem in changing the names..but I've written this SS on a special request by Roze. She wanted an OS or SS to be written on Jaiveer.
And as for the show, I dont think it has any relation with the SS, but the characters do have, I agree...!!!
But would not be able to change it. I'll try to end it soon and start another SS on Manveer..
But tab tak u have to bear with this ..I'm sorry..!!!

Maybe I can try for the second option but then the story wont be based on Jainandini which I want.

So maybe I'll try something better next time...
This SS is not only for tryng something different but also because I like Jaiveer n its on a request.

btw Thanxxx so much for such a lovely comment😊

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Andrea Marie Villegas Baid

@diorslik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

Aisa mat bolo...Jai yaha achhi wali J hai

I dont hate j dear its just that
Jaiveer dosen't have that IT factor for ME
But i aporeciate your hardwork but
Jaiveer SS is a no no for me
Srry if o hurted but baby i really didnt want to
Naraz may hona 😊

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Killer

@.Killer.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: AndreaBaid

I dont hate j dear its just that
Jaiveer dosen't have that IT factor for ME
But i aporeciate your hardwork but
Jaiveer SS is a no no for me
Srry if o hurted but baby i really didnt want to
Naraz may hona 😊

no probs..waise bhi bohot logo ne mana kiya hai..!!!

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Andrea Marie Villegas Baid

@diorslik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

no probs..waise bhi bohot logo ne mana kiya hai..!!!

Aww dont worry u will get reader
Jesus christ u sure will baby 😉

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

i always feel that J character was brunched up by the CV's badly..

i liked J sometimes..

well jab show main M kuch zyada hi bhao kha rahi thi main jaiveer ki full support main thi...🤣

i mean that beautiful girl deserve someone much better than jaggu!!🤢

and seriously J ho ya M humary liye UV kafi hai...😆

i liked manveer bcz in the show uday loved manayta,aur mujhy bas yahi tha UV ko lead hona chiye not that AAkash...🤢 UV zayda acha i guess as a couple J ky sath lagta tha that's my personal opinion 😆😆 shritima did a great job as J and her character was classy..i loved her dressing style that too sometimes😆 actually in my case dressing does matter..😆 i just want u to do one thing if u r taking J's character then don't change the essence of that character i mean like how should i say this ummm like don't make her all evil n rude which she was a vamp but a girl with not so perfect qualities i mean aj kaal kaun 'perfect' hota hai everyone is selfish and selfish hona buri baat nahin hai..😳but i guess we all should respect you and your writing,and u should go for it..kya pata ye kisi manveer SS sy bhi zayda acha ho..😛

i am defiantly gonna read your story.. go for it..😊

so will read this story for sure..do PM me!!😳if u can...

for the first chapter i loved it riya..your first try was amazing

do continue this SS..

update soon...

Edited by -JEHAN- - 12 years ago