A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: pia.raha

itsss really nicee... Thanx wnder wats manyata is going to say abt the proposal!!!!!... Hmmm waitng for the nxt update!!!!!😊😊

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#92

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Nice update Nitya. Thanx a lot😊 The song was really good😃. Thanx again😊 Manyata is gonna reject the proposal right? For tht u have to wait for the next udate😉 Continue soon, Sure😊 thanx 4 the PM😊. U r welcome⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Awesum...👏 Thanx😊
Loved all d chaptrs...👍🏼 Thats gud... Thank u😊

Plz do pm me... Yes sure😊
N do cont soon... Afcourse😊

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#94

Originally posted by: fireroad99

i loved ur lyrics Thanx a lot... I love them too😉 and i hope that manyata say yes to uday Deary for that u have to wait for the next chappy

i love aditi and karan jodi remined me of dmg Yes...😊 But I think u r mistaken in the name... its aditi and raj... If u r confussed please have a look og the cs..
old memories are back I know... I did it on purpose bcos they r the ideal jodi for manyata's bhai and bhabhi...

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Originally posted by: KINGKHANFAN

nice update.. Thanx...😃

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nice written ... its awesome loved it
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Nice update thanx fr pm cntinue soon
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Originally posted by: priyash..

nice written ... its awesome loved it

Thanks a lot😊
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Thanks to all of u who liked chapter 4 and to all those who commented
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 5
Hey guys I am back with another update. I updated this today only because of my friend aneesha (annabh). She was very eager to read it. But I am really sorry aneesha I told you I would update it yesterday. Now read and enjoy.

Seeing his father and brother walk away Unnati too starts leaving the place...

J: Unnati tum kaha jaa rahi ho...

Unnati: Tumne suna nahi J Manyata ne kya kaha... Who tum sab se akele mein baat karna chahti hain...

J: humne theek tarah se suna Unnati... par hum apni jiji ko ache se jante hai.. who ye sab achanak sunkar bahut shocked bhi hai aur irritated bhi... Aur is waqt unhe apni friend ki zaroorat hai... Toh kyat um apni dost ka saath nahi dogi..

Unnati looks at J with an astonished look...

J: Haan Unnati hum chahte hai ki tum bhi yahi ruko... magar Uday ki behen banker nahi balki jiji ki dost banker... Aur hum jante hai jiji bhi yahi chahti hai...

After hearing J Unnati stays back...

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Manyata (In an angry tone) : Dad yeh sab kya hai... Aur aaj achanak yeh meri shadi ki baat kaha se aa gayi...

Brij: Beta yeh sab achanak nahi hua hai... ye toh pehele se planned tha... Aapko bataya na aapka aur Uday ka roka bachpan mein hi ho gaya tha... Aur aapki shadi bhi tabhi the kardi gayi thi...

Manyata (Not able to understand) : Yeh kya keh rahe hai aap... bachpan mein roka... bachpan mein shadi.. .. agar aisa kuch hua bhi hai... tab bhi mujhe kyu nahi yaad...

Brij: Beta bachpan mein apko khelte khelte sar pe chot lag gayi thi usi wajah se aapko apne bachpan ki kuch kuch baate yaad nahi hai...

Manyata (Not ready to believe) : Agar aisa hi that oh aap logo ne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya...

Brij: Beta hume laga jab sahi waqt aayega to hum aapko bata denge...

Manyata (In a very irritated and angry tone) : Sahi waqt dad... sahi waqt... aapko kya lagta hain... ye sahi waqt hain... aap mujhe ek insane k sath shadi karne ke liye keh rahe hai jisse main naffrat karti hun... jo insane aurto ki respect karna nahi janta... aap chahte hai ki main ek aise insaan ke saath shadi karu...

Till now everybody (Vijay, Unnati, J, Aditi and Karan) was listeing patiently to the father- daughter conversation. Suddenly J spoke..

J: Mama sa Bhai (J calls Raj bhai) ne aapse kaha tha... ki jiji ko sab bata dijiye...

Manyata (wiping off her tears, which had started to flow when she was busy describing Uday's character) : Dada... Humein dada se baat karni hai abhi...

Manyata quickly checked the time... and realized he must be there on skype at this time... She quickly opened her laptop... and then skype and sent a request of video call to raj... Thankfully he accepted it...

Raj (Happily) : Aur chotti bata mili Uday se... Kaisa laga...

He was going to say more but then stopped when he saw her face and faces of all the others sitting beind her..

Raj: Kya baat hain chotti tu itna pareshan kyun hain... Aur dad aap bhi bahut depressed lag rahe hain... (Worriedly) Kya hua hain... sab theek toh hain na...

Manyata (Emotionally) : Dada aap jante the na mere aur Uday ke roke ke bare mein toh aapne mujhe kyun nahi bataya...

Raj: Chotti main tumhe batana chahta tha par... (Interrupted by Brij)

Brij: Par maine use batane se mana kiya tha...

Manyata: Dada aap jante hain aaj yaha kya hua...

Manyata tries to tell him the whole story but he interruptes..

Raj: Haan hum jaante hai... Uday ne hume phone karke sab kuch bata diya...

Manyata: Bahut achi baat hain dada agar aapko sab kuch pata hain toh... aap samjha dijiye dad ko kin a toh hum usse shadi karnge na dosti...

Brij: Beta hum tumhe shadi ke liye force nahi kar rahe par usse ek baar dosti toh karke dekho... Uske saath thoda waqt toh bitao... ho sakta hai tumhe who pasand aa jaye...

Manyata: Dad use jaanne ke liye mujhe uske saath waqt bitane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... ye toh main usse milne ki pehli mulaqat mein hi jaan gayi thi ki who kaisa hai... Haan Nahi Toh..

Raj: Chotti main yeh bilkul nahi keh raha ki tum usse shadi karo... par haan main is baat mein dad se sehmat hun... tum atleast usse dosti toh kar hi sakti ho na... aur agar aur kuch nahi toh tumhe ek acha dosti hi mil jayega... Please chotti mere liye.. aur apne dad ke liye... please...

After a more of 10 minutes emotional blackmail... Manyata agrees...

Manyata: Hum aapko bata de hum usse sirf dosti kar rahe hain... aur who bhi sirf aap dono ke liye...

Brij: Theek hain toh kyun na is dosti ki shuruwat kal se hi ki jaye... kal aap Uday ke saath hi college jayengi..

Manyata knew it was not easy to spend almost all her day with That Mr. Attitude whom she considered her sworn enemy.

Manyata's POV: Sure it would'nt be easy for me.. But I'll make sure it isn't easy for him either... (With a wicked smile over her face)

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Everybody stayed at Uday's house or "Uday Niwas" that night...

Uday was standing near the window thinking about what Brij hat told him... That tomorrow he has take Manyata along with him to the college...

Uday's Pov: I know princess... You are surly gonna create many prolems for me but don't forget I am YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH.. I have the solution to every problem... And regarding you... its gonna be fun... U would create challenges for me and YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH loves challenges... And u'll be the biggest and the best challenge of my life... (with a smirk on his face)...

Precap: Car race...
I know guys there is no manveer but in the next update they will surely be there...
Edited by nityatandon - 12 years ago

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