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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANKS EVERYONE FOR WONDERFULLY COMMENTS . THANKS FOR ENCOURAGING . THANKS FOR ALL WHO POSTED COMMENTS ...THANKS A LOT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update puggy. ur ff's are really interesting.
cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arna753

<font color="#660000">nice update puggy. ur ff's are really interesting.</font>

<font color="#660000">cont. soon.</font>


thanks a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5

GEETHA CHOPRA - DIVYA wat happened beta, ur looking disturbed from 2 weeks . Ur so depressed y beta

DIVYA - She doesn't tell her mom da reason. Mom am fine , nothing new place na trying to adjust

GEETHA - it doesn't look so beta . If u tell then it's ok . She kisses her forehead. She knows about uday and divya but have never seen uday . Also she knows his name as uv . She doesn't know that it's uday .

UDAY - unnathi knows about divya and uday's past. So uday goes to unnathi n tells about wat all happened. He tells " choti I want to tell MANYTAH but couldn't , donno how she reacts . Also she is pregnent now . I don't wanna give her emotional stress .

UNNATHI - don't worry dada . I understand it . U did good thing not telling it to manyatha. Iss haalath mein teek nahi rahega ..

MANYTAH - she was passing through da room and over hears da conversation .uday doesn't see her and leave da room .

UNNATHI - she is shocked to c manyatha

MANYTAH - pls tell me truth unnathi , I wanna know about divya

UNNATHI - now its no use of hiding . So unnathi narrates da whole past

MANYATHA - she listens silently

UNNATHI - trust me manyatha now dada is totally changed . He loves u a lot and cannot leave without u . Ur in his every breath manyatha.

MANYATHA - unnathi don worry I know about it . I know my uday very well . He loves me a lot . I have got nothing to do wit his past.

UNNATHI - she hugs MANYTAH . Thanks MANYTAH ur da best . Pls keep my dada happy through out da life . Trust him like this only in every situation . Be with him. He cannot live without u Bahabisa .

MANAYTAH - don worry unnathi , I'll always b wit uday . He is my life . She leaves.

UDAY - he is in da office room

MANYTAH - she goes to uday and looks at him

UDAY - u should have made a call princess . Y did u come down . Am coming 5 min .

MANYATHA - I need to talk to u uday

UDAY - he looks at her . Now he is worried , wat manyatha tell me

MNAYTAH - not here uday . I'll wait in our room . Jus come there .

UDAY - after Attending da call he goes to room . Manyatha is near da window lost in deep thoughts .he comes and hugs her from behind and place his chin on her shoulders . Princess now tell me .

MANYATHA - she turns around , " uday r u k wit me working wit divya "

UDAY - princess y ur asking about it all of at sudden

MANYATHA - uday I know everything about u and divya

UDAY - he gets shocked . Princess!!!

SOMEONE KNOCKS DOOR AND MANYATAH OPENS .

BRIJRAJ - beta how r u ? He hugs her . She hugs him back and tell am good dad . He goes to uday and hugs. But uday's total concentration was on manyatah .

MANYATHA - so how was ur trip dad ?

BRIJRAJ - it was good baby . Am happy wit that chopra's deal . Good work beta .uday beta r u ok ? U look disturbed

UDAY - no uncle brijraj am fine

A MAID COMES RUNNING TO THEM TELLING THAT RAAJMATAH CAME TO CONSCIOUS . ALL 3 together rush up to ds room .

DS - she wakes up slowly and slowly opens her eyes and finds everyone around her . She finds Komal menaka unnathi and j in front of her , she finds vijay brijraj and giriraj on her right side . Her eyes are searching for manyatha and uday , now finally she turns to her left side and finds manyatha and uday standing together .

EVERYONE - everyone is happy and all have happy tears in their eyes .

DOCTOR SAAB - he comes and sees da sight

DS. - she looks at MANYTAHA and holds her hand tightly . Uday and MANAYATHA both bend down . She places her hand on uday's chin . Her eyes are getting closed now . MANYTAHA starts crying , uday holds her .

DOCTOR SAAB - he comes and checks ds and gives injection . Tells everyone not to worry and she is out of danger. She she came out of coma she is still weak . She will wake up in an hour ,I gave injection.

EVERYONE - all are happy and hug each other and wait for n hour in that room only for ds to open her eyes .

KOMAL AND BRIJRAJ - they come and hug manyatha and j . All the family members are happy , out of world . Giriraj and brijraj hug each other .unnathi and vijay hug each other . Menaka hugs manyatha .

MANYTAHA - she is so happy . She hugs uday and places her head on his chest . Uday holds her by waist wit one hand and in da other hand holds her hand .

DS - she wakes up and whispers MANYTAHA MANYTAH

BRIJRAJ - he rushes to ds and calls maa sahib

DS - she slowly gets up and sits , Komal helps her to sit . Brijraj and ds hug each other . Komal and menaka hug ds .

VIJAY - nani sahib , v r so happy to c u like this . Telling this he hugs ds.

DS - she calls out for manyatha , everyone looks at manyatha .

MANYTAH - she comes and sits beside ds .they both hug each other and stay like that for 5 min .

DS - ds breaks hug immediately and wit an confused expression exclaims manyatha !!! Telling this she touches her tummy wit tears in her eyes . Everyone looks so happily at this scene . Manyatha ur ...

KOMAL - huh maa sahib she is pregnent

DS - now ds clearly looks at MANYTAH , sindhoor in her maang and mangal sutra in her neck , n uday beside her . She feels so happy . She hugs uday and say " am so happy beta , it's da best gift of my life "

UDAY - we all are happy to see u like this ds . Now pls I think u should take rest now .

EVERYONE - ya u should take rest . U jus came out of coma pls don stress ur self

DS - now anything won't happen to me . Am so happy .

MANYTAH - ds Am so happy . She hugs her again . Pls take rest now . Even doctor uncle is telling u to .

DS - k ur highness

EVERYONE SMILES AT HER COMMENT . ALL LEAVE DA ROOM AS DS HAVE TO TAKE REST . DOCTOR GIVES INJECTION AND ALL LEAVE.

IT'S NIGHT TIME . ALL GO TO THEIR ROOMS .UDAY IS A BIT TENSED NOW THINKING ABOUT MANYATHA.

UDAY - he is waiting for manyatha in his room restlessly , unnathi comes and tells that MANAYTAH is wit Ds and will come in 10 min

UNNATHI. - what happened dada u look tensed?

UDAY - he tells everything

UNNATHI - now she tells what all happened

UDAY - he is so happy to hear it ang gets relieved .unnathi leaves saying gn

MANYTAHA - she comes inside room . As soon as she comes uday go and hug her .

UDAY - thanks for everything princess . Thanks for understanding.
He breaks hug and tells " trust me princess ,I thought of telling u but ..." MANYTAH stops him

MANYATHA - u need not give me explanations. I love u uday .am not bothered about ur past . I simply love u uday . I can't leave without u . Ur my life . I trust u more than myself uday .

UDAY - he will get tears in his eyes . MANYTAH wipes them and kisses uday on his forehead .

MANYATHA - am da happiest girl in da world today uday . Ur wit me,my love is wit me . Also ds came out of coma . Am so happy .

UDAY - princess u forgot one thing

MANYATHA - only me n ds , u forgot junior .telling this he bends down ,touches her tummy . And kisses tummy .

UDAY - he gets up and hugs manyatha tightly

MNAYTAH - uday ahaaa

UDAY - sorry princess I was so hard . Sorry , he touches her tummy and tell " baby did papa hurt u and mamma , sorry baby .love u so much " sorry princess

MANYATHA - uday now thats k .

UDAY - princess I have a doubt

MANYATHA - now wat is it Yuvraj ji ?

UDAY - in coming days I think I can't hug u

MNAYTAH - confused ...wat uday !!!?

UDAY - he looks at her stomach and shows her .

MANYATHA - obviously uday , stomach will grow n u can't . U should have got it then u would know

UDAY - princess!! How can I baby ? Funny ... He takes manyatha in his arms and keeps her on bed and lies beside her .

MANYATHA - they both look at each other .

UDAY - he places his hand on her tummy " junior so ur not allowing papa to hug mamma . Baby do u know one thing , today ur great grand mother came out of coma after a long time .she came out only for u to c u n play wit u . So pls baby come soon " . He moves her Saree aside and kiss her bare stomach . Love u baby . Love u princess

MANYATHA - love u uday

UDAY - MANAYTH in this week it came 3 more inches out . Wow it's so cute , I can c my baby growing . Nicely junior is enjoying inside

MANYATHA - she smiles at uday and tells " ur acting like a child uday " I think I have to take care of another kid

UDAY - ya a grown up kid😉

THAT NIGHT PASSES BLISSFULLY . NEXT DAY ALL DA MAHAL IS DECORATED . PRESS MEET IS ARRANGED . MEDIA COMES . IN ALL NEWS CHANNAL THEY SHOW ABOUT RAJ MATHA COMING OUT OF COMA . DS TALKS TO PRESS . ALL THE FAMILY MEMBERS SPEND DA WHOLE TOGETHER AND HAPPILY SPEND TIME .

5 DAYS PASSED SINCE DS CAME OUT OF COMA...NOW EVERYTHING IS BACK TO NORMAL AND EVERYONE IS HAPPY. NOW ONLY 11 DAYS LEFT OVER FOR UNNATHI AND VIJAY'S MARRIAGE . ALL THE PREPARATIONS ARE GOING ON .

BRIJRAJ - he tells manyatha that they r arranging a party to night for ds' s recovery . Everyone is happy to hear it.

GIRIRAJ - also 2 days later v all r leaving for jaigad for Pooja . It's our kaandaani Pooja which is for da health of baby And mother .

KOMAL MENAKA - beta uday don't worry now , doctor told that ur princess can travel . So no worries

Everyone laughs at their statement . Manyatha gets embarresed and starts blushing .

DIVYA - she starts drinking daily Nd go out of control . She again gets into. Depression .her mother donno exactly reason. Divya thinks about uday only . Unknowingly she gets negative feelings for MANYTAH and starts hating her .

CHOPRA's - they get invitation for da party at devgad palace .

MANYATHA - in her room throwing all dresses on her bed . Uday comes and looks at her

UDAY - princess what is this y r u throwing dresses like this

MANYATAH - because nothing fits me , she catches her head and sits ther son bed

UDAY - he comes and sits beside her n hugs her and kisses . Ithni is baath hamari princess ko pareshaan karre

MANYATHA - it's not a simple thing uday . I became fat now c , nothing fits now especially in this region pointing towards her tummy.

UDAY - he smiles at her innocence and tells " my chweetu don worry , jus wait for 5 min ur new ward robe is coming "

MAID KNOCKS DA DOOR AND GETS BUNDLE OF DRESSES AND LEAVES THEM NEAR MANYATHA

MANYATHA - uday I love u honey . She jumps like a kid and hugs him

UDAY - k princess now select a one from these for da party to night

MANYATHA - u help me out baby

UDAY - k u wear this long blue and maroon anarkali dress

MANYATHA - wow uday it's so beautiful

UDAY - I don't accept it

MANYATHA - wat?!!!!

UDAY - not beautifull than my princess

MANYATHA - udayyy , she hugs him and kisses on his chest .

UDAY - shall I kiss u back at da same place princess😉

MANYATHA - chii udayy , besharam ho thum

UDAY - agar mein besharam nahi hotha na , telling this he places his hand on her tummy and tells " agar mein besharam nahi hotha tho shayad junior yaha nahi aatha thumari stomach ke undhar "

MANYATHA - she hits uday's chest and tells " ur jus impossible my HALKAT VEDA "

J. - HA NAHI THO , she comes and tells it from behind.

MANYATHA - she pushes uday and tells " j wen did u come"

J - wen uday became besharam 😉

MNAYATH - jjj

J - jiji don worry I didn't c anything .

MANYATHA - k j that's k, she looks relieved . Uday excuses and leaves them .

J - so jiji r u guys making out ?😉

UDAY - he comes to room to take his cell and hears j telling that and gets shocked and stays there to listen MANYTAHA's reply .now he is standing and hearing their conversation

MANYATHA - j jus shut up , nothing like that

J - don tell me jiji , oh god ur blushing . U both are jus impossible , look at u ... Wit this pointing at her stomach , ur making out

MANYATHA - j now am gonna kill u

J - k jiji now show me ur dress

UDAY - he gets shocked and think " seriously girls r crazy, this j tho oh my god , he comes and takes his cell

J - uday one minute

UDAY - oh my god wat has she got to talk to me ...regarding make out or what , it didn't even happen and she is behind us

J - ur a Yuvraj , going out wit such shirt aap ko shobha nahi detha

UDAY - he looks at his shirt , he finds MANYTAHA 's lipstick mark on his shirt n on d chest , he gets embarresed .

J - she excuses and leaves

UDAY - he looks at manyatha and both burst out laughing.thank god princess if working staff or someone had seen it I would die out of embarrassment

MANYATHA - that's true uday

ALL GET READY AND COME DOWN FOR DA PARTY


PRECAP :

UDAY - divya control ur self and jus leave my shirt

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DIVYA - manyatha I hate u , mera uday ko mujse cheerilya

MANAYTAH - divya jus try to understand da situation , don make a fool out of u

DIVYA - shut up u bitch , u don have right on uday . He can't be urs . U don't have right to be mother of uday's child . I have right on uday , even I have right on da baby in ur womb ,it's mine...I'll take both of them from u ... She drags MANYTAH and trie to push her

MANYATHA - ahaaa


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Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice...but itna short short update kyun karti ho bada karo naa...okkk...update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hawww...that bitch kamini divya...manveer scene was superb lolzz...J is too much...update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Puggy awesome, superb, amazing update yaar.👏 👏 👏 Seriously I'm your fan now jus wow. It's so simple n so beautiful FF. Loved it.
Thank God Manyata knows about Divya n Uday's past so no chance of misunderstanding. 😉
Yee DS came out from coma. n when she saw Manyata's tummy n Uday with Manyata she was so happy.🤗 I liked it.😊
Than J-anyata scene when she was teasing Manyata n Uday.😆
Uday n Manyata's scenes always great😉 Amazing update.
Precap was scary OMG Divya bimbo'll try to push Manyata.😲
Now I can't wait for the next update, It's getting so much interesting day by day.😛
Do update soon Puggy, thanks for the wonderful update.😊
🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
waooo superb..hope nuffin happnes to manyata n da junior uday..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hope someone comes along to save Manyata
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

Puggy awesome, superb, amazing update yaar.👏 👏 👏 Seriously I'm your fan now jus wow. It's so simple n so beautiful FF. Loved it.

Thank God Manyata knows about Divya n Uday's past so no chance of misunderstanding. 😉
Yee DS came out from coma. n when she saw Manyata's tummy n Uday with Manyata she was so happy.🤗 I liked it.😊
Than J-anyata scene when she was teasing Manyata n Uday.😆
Uday n Manyata's scenes always great😉 Amazing update.
Precap was scary OMG Divya bimbo'll try to push Manyata.😲
Now I can't wait for the next update, It's getting so much interesting day by day.😛
Do update soon Puggy, thanks for the wonderful update.😊

🤗 🤗 🤗


THANK U SO MUCH,THANKA A LOT DEAR . I'LL UPDATE IN 3 days dear .

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