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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am thinking of writing an ss its my first try so tell me if you like the character sketch.
Character sketch
Yuvraj Udayveer: yuvraj of Jaygarh heart throb of many girls, is hot, handsome and sexy number 1 eligible bachelor of india and is head over heels in love with manyata
Yuvrani Manyata: Yuvrani of Devgarh wise, intelligent, modern and beautiful also known as mats all boys are crazy over her including yuvraj udayveer many girls are jealous of her but she doesnt care in my ss manyata wears western
Princess Jaynandini: short for jay manyatas sister loves her sister and family alot
Prince Vijendra singh: known as vijay son of menaka (brijrajs sister) loves his both sisters
Princess Unnati: udays sister very mature and loves her brother a lot
Maharaj Giriraj: father of uday and unnati loves manyata more than his own children
Maharaj Brijraj: father of manyata and jay loves both of his daughters
Maharani Anjali: mother of uday and unnati loves her children a lot
Maharani Komal: mother of manyata and jay
Rajmata Mrinalni Devi: Rajmata of Devhargh and grandmother of manyata, jay and vijay
If you like the charactrer sketch then i will post the first chapter.
Chapter 1
There is a lot of hussle bussle going on in the devgarh palace as manayta is returning back from london after completeing her education. Yuvraj udayveer is handling everything to make sure nothing goes wrong in the welcome of his dear friend and love of life manyata everyone in the family except manyata know that uday loves manyata.
Komal: uday beta dont worry everything will be fine you just go and get ready to go to the airport
Uday: ji aunty komal
Jay: jijusa dont worry everything will be fine
Uday: i am going to get ready
Uday goes to his palace to get ready
Komal: manyata is so lucky to have uday in her life
Uday with unnati jay and vijay goes to pick manyata up
At the airport
Uday: where is she whats taking her so long
Unnati: dada sabar ka phal meeta hota hain
Uday: choti
Unnati: sorry dada
Jay: jiji is here
They all look towards manyata uday is stunned to see manyata in a short blue knee length dress
Manyata: how are you guys i missed you guys so much
Unnati: we are fine
Uday: wow manayata you look hot
Manayata: its mats uday
Vijay: do you want to talk here or do you want to go home aswell
Manyata: yes lets go
Jay: jiji we are giving a party for your welcome and uday is looking after the arrangements
Manyata: wow party i love parties

Precap: manayta wearing a baby pink gown and all boys staring at her and a jealous uday
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lz plz continue it i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Nice CS Buddy. 😉 Do update first chappy soon dear.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Nice update...but its too short update next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
awesome lovely it
beautifully written
please update soon
loved manyata and uday's charatcers but there was no bomb dhamaka meeting of manveer but i know u will cover that up
please please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice CS 👍🏼cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice👍🏼do continue

and pm me also🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note

Sos cant update yet but will try to update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great CS and first chapter!⭐️⭐️Love manyatas character and luv it that Jai is positive in this one! 😛Continue soon and a great precap, i love da jealous Uday!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept
awesum chapter 1
uday head over heels 4 manyata
gud gud
do cont soon
n do pm me if possible...

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