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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx all my dear friends there are so many excellent writers here...that I never tht some of u guys will like my such a simple and dreamy ss...this is dedicated to all of you my dear readers...I never tht this ss would be missed amidst so great FFs and OSS here...thanx aggain...

CHAPTER 3
Recap: Both uv and manyata are in the pool...completely wet...waist deep in water and discussing who
Looks hotter...but innocently...like kids though their bodies have started showing symptoms of grown ups... 😉

M whistles checking him out...uff let me call j uday...she's gonna be crazy seeing u...she laughs seeing uday blushing...uday- lets go manyata...u r wet...yeh plan humari outing mein nahi tha...lets get going princess...M-"plzz uday ..teasingly J ko call karne de na...I want to see her pakoda face...she's full on teasing uday now noing how much uday hates J...
U- achha to AAP bhi come delicious nahi lag rahi hai princess...believe Humein lagta hai hai aapke bf aakash ko bhi yahaan bula liya jayenge...let him also see ki u look so hot in this wet avtaar...he us devilishly smirking now seeing change of her expressions...
M- ahhh ...uday uday uday...how dare you...ab mai change kisme karoongi and it's getting late now...Humein thand lag rahi hai...har baat par akash ko kyon beech mein laatey ho...sare mood ka raayta kar diya...she is making faces...she can't blive that she is faking anger and really akash name is irritating her for the first time...his name is building shackles and for once she wants to be wild ..feel free...
Uv- hold on princess don't insult me...u r with such a hot prince...aur aapko thand lag rahi hai...u know what..actually u r right...jab koi ladki mere saath hoti hai na woh suddenly cold feel karne lagti hai coz meri hotness Jo chahiye...hota hai hota hai manyata...ab mai hoon itna hot and dashing...
M- shut up vede...aya bada hotness ki murgi...my foot...Teri hotness nahi,meri hotness hai Jo tumhe hot Bana rahi hai...tu mere jaisi hot princess ke saath hai na issliye...jaise ladkiyan tujhpe Marti hai na...tere jaise kai mujhe bhi mar sakte hain...bus mera ek Sharma kaafi hai..haan nai toh...aur dusre kya...tu khud mere aage control who dega...smjha ghamandi prince udayveer...
Manyata stares in his eyes and sees him smirking...no uday AAj toh tu gaya...she actually wants to wipe that smirk and arrogance of his face.. She holds his collar tightly and pulls him towards her,without moving her eyes from his face..she moves a lock of wet her from his forehead...she sees water dripping from his wet hair and is smiling ...she traces his face contours with her finger tips very lightly...moving from his forehead to his nose..on his cheeks towards his eyes and then finally his lips... She stops there and stares at it and his eyes...she is lost...the darkening of his eyes was telling their own story...I love it...manyata thinks...gosh why am I loving his feel..it'it's as if am watching him for the first time...as if the time is still...it feels so good so right...as if it's gonna be turning a new leaf inmy life...she was mesmerized by the intense beauty...in front of her...she had lost the battle of mind to heart the moment she came nmoment she pulled him towards her to prove her point...her hands were moving in accord with their own...the eyes were drinking their own things on his face...she had lost total control on herself and her wild thts... His wet body was doing things to her own which she hadn't felt ever. His chest was glistening with water in his now open necked shirt whose buttons had been broken by her ferocious pull...ohh..umm how my fingers r itching to remove those damn fro drops of water. She removed her gaze from his chest back to his little nervous but still smirking lips.oh I am gonna do something I never dared do.slowly she started tracing his wet lips and moved her hand from his colcollar to inside his hair and slowly bent his face towards her...still one hand on his collar...oh damn look my freaking wild thts...here the seducer herself is seduced...how her heart was beating erratically...she was about yo do something...which she never knew the side she possessed..was making her do...she was feeling hot wet ecstatic...adventurous and most of all a woman in true sense for the first time in her life...her lips were just a breath away from his...she could smell him alright...she was drowning un his smell..the smell of his sexy wet body...the minty smell of his breath...it was chrning her belly...ohh boy they were so close...she. Closed her eyes...the music was still playing making me more treacherous...I could do clearly hear and feel the words

KUCH KHAAS HAI
Kuch baat hai
Ek ajnabee esehsaas hai

Kuch duriyaan nazdikiyaan
Kuch has padi parchaiyaan
Kuch has padi tanhayeeyaan

Kya yeh khumaar hai
Kya aitbaar hai shaayad yeh pyar hai pyar hai shaayad
Kya yeh bahaar hai ya intezaar hai
Kya yeh pyar hai pyar hai shaayad

Manyata is lost all fights and she could feel his hot breath all over her face...
Yay

UDAY POV PART 2 COMING SOON...WILL THEY WONT THEY...SO WHAT HAPPENS NOW KEEP GUESSING TILL
Edited by dreamyjennice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys updated chap 3 part 1... This is mainly manyata pov...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i wanna be the first commenter. so in 3 much advanced reserved. sorry if my comment interrupts ur update. i just didnt mean to do so. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

i wanna be the first commenter. so in 3 much advanced reserved. sorry if my comment interrupts ur update. i just didnt mean to do so. :)


Hey not at all...dear would love to read your comment...as for uday pov.. .u will have to wait for a while.. By the way do coment on this one plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update dear
update udays pov soon
pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
this SS is sooo good
Loved M POV
eager For UV POV
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
jenn baby... aaawww... it was adorable. i luvd how manyata's heart played wid her. it was ova welming...waiting for wat uday is thinking. stitch their lips fast babes. cant wait for that bliss... u make it all so beautiful. the different thing- they are still in pool... dripping all wet with water, shivering. theres always sumthing new in store wen it cums to ur story. interesting nail biting and suspenseful rather than new... luv u dear... do update fast. i am ready to wait.. ;) u rock...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww wooww!!!!!!! loved the way they bth were teasing each othr!!!! and the lats partw as soo soo romnticc,heyy do update soon,cant waitt!!!!!!! and dear i jst love ur updates and wait for it!!!!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

Lovely update dear
update udays pov soon
pls


Thanx and yupp will update udayveer pov soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome I have a question dose manyata and akash still hangout or they broke up
And dose manyata like akash or not
And dose she like udayveer or not
????
Srry a little confused
But it was a great update

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