the tailor manveer OS part 4 page 22 - Page 3

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

hehehehehe very hot os! bachaa's stay away itx adult stuff 🤣

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

uday is a hot handsome tailor

manyata is a self respected women but uday is too hot for her to handle😆

ha ha dont worry end mein sari property uday ki hogi🤣

Originally posted by: shana0127

money and sex is not life..its mental peace and satisfaction seems here M peace lies in ding dong Uday...

.btw good to know here M is self respected woman ...actually after reading i deduced something else😆

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

ha ha

this OS is a litle too grahic the next chapter will be hotter and the third even hotter and the fourth will be blasting and pg 17😆

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

ohh God saira how you write so adult stuff it needx alot of courage n brainx i cudnt evn write proper manveer kiss scene 😆🤣🤣

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

i am a very creative person when it comes to this😆

u wrote an awesome kiss scene

and the next part of this FF is dhamaka

i wonder how people will react

i will give a warning that it is PG 16 and everyone should keep there AC on or sit in the refrigerator while reading😆 🤣

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

omg yea seriously u r very creative m glad m 18 othervise i wud have been scolded by my mom lol kojes apart u r really great writer. As i writer now i understood wrting other scenes are very much easy but writing intimate scenes are very tough because u have to take care of evrythng it shudnt look vulgar or somthng!
yea i guess i literally have to sit in freezer to read da next part😳

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

the next part is not vulgar

but it too graphic

i wonder what people will say

i know mods will close my topic😆

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

lol they wont cox no one visits this forum now😆