SS: I never knew its You ...(Ch 2: pg 4COMPLETED) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey wendy i loved it.continue plz.
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Superb prologue and awesome character sketch Wendy...It seems very fiery👍🏼

Continue soon and pm me when you will update...waiting to read more😊

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Welcome back Wendy!!!! 😃 Awesome pologue!!!! 👏 Connue soon! 😊
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great prologue😊 continue soon
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amazing prologue and chracter sketch
can't wait for this SS to start
thanks do the PM
do continue soon
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love the character sketch..definitely sounds like our halkat udayveer...love him though..lol
do add me to your pm list plzzz..would love to read your updates..
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suprbbb prologuee,cant wait mree!!!!!!! pm me plzz!!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you, thank you thanks a lot for your awesome comments

I have decided to continue it and here i am posting first part but this is not complete one!

so here its goes




part 1



Sun was at horizon, bidding good bye to everyone with a promise of coming back tomorrow with a new ray, new hope to enlighten the world.

But humans are free, they are not binded by commitments. They think they are whole in themselves flawless, independent and strong. Somewhere in this world some one's whole world was about to fall in darkness. A heart skipped its beat but no one was able to notice it in the sweet melodious sound of high waves ringing in nearby brine. This was her first encounter to the word PAIN.

"So when is your flight?" she said trying hard to gulp down hurt in her voice while putting on her silky night robe covering her bare soft milky white shoulders

"Most probably within a month" He said while continuosly gazing her like she is some sort of puzzle and trying to figure out her expressions.

"Are you OK manyata" he said feeling that something is going wrong with her as he had never seen her so off after their night out. It was strange for him.

"Why whats gonna happen to me ? if I clearly remember you are the one who is going to jump in death well called matrimony Mr yuvraaj" she asked with sudden change of expressions faking up a huge broad smile on her pristine face.

UV came slowly came closer to her with serious expression noticing the sadness in her big brown and deep eyes which can never lie to him and she was trying hard to not let her eyes meet his by focusing on the knot of her gown which was all of the sudden seems to be so hard to tie.

He calmly remove her hands from the ribbon and took them in his hands and started tying it. "I am not kidding Princess, lying is difficult job specially for them whose eyes reflects the truth" he said after finishing his task.

Why the hell it is happening, she thought while watching straight in his deep intense eyes who she thinks know everything. She has never experienced this emotional attachment and desire of never letting go some one in her whole life then why now? Why this man always do this to her? Why.?

"Fine as you are so stubborn then listen

I am feeling bad, terrible "she said in most sad, depressed and emotional way

"For Ananya, poor girl has to bear you for all her life" with that she burst out into laughter seeing the confused and fear expression formed on UV's face.

"Manyata" this time he said it with high intensity with rise in his tone.

Seeing those deep intense eyes who has anger and flick of irritation mixed in it , she shifted to the serious mode and stopped laughing.

Understanding that's there is no point of lying to him, she spoke not meeting his eyes

"Yes Uday I am not OK How any one can be ok when some one's best friend going so faraway from them. I know this day has to come one day but never knew it will come so quickly or I hadn't realized it "while walking towards window and staring at the full moon whose rays were falling on her face making her divinely beautiful.

"Trust me Uday I am very happy for you and Ananya. I am sure you would have awesome married life. You know I never knew I will say to YOU some days but you have given me some of the best memories of my life, it was the great time we had spent together, I know uday responsibility is above every relationshipand I am glad you are choosing responsibility over me You was always rocking friend and boyfriend so if you think our this stupid mutual breakup will free you from me then you are wrong. I always gonna trouble you but like a FRIEND." She said with a small smile on her face "Don't worry dude , I will get over it and I am sure you will also" with that she winked at him and give a huge smile..

Uday while constantly observing her each and every expression, movement of her lips and listening carefully to her can't help but notice that how serene and pure this 20year old vivacious young woman looks. He notices how beautiful she looks. She had grown up a lot with her thoughts. He couldn't able to believe that the is hearing these words she is the same, immature, stubborn and lively girl he had met 2 years ago who slowly turned into inseperable part of his life. No girl has had this kind of relationship with him. No one in the world has been able to understand him this well. He saw a flick of tears in the eyes of girl who has given a new direction to his over ambitious life. She came as a breath of fresh air for him. After being his best friend, girl friend, bed mate,he doesn't seems to have enough of her. Both of them never understand their relationship status No one can took them as boyfriend-girlfriend, the way they behaves with each other sometimes. till now their relationship was undefined After pending many nights with her she is capable to invoke same adrenaline rush in him, yes its adrenaline rush,not feelings, he know he can't fall in love. Manyata has taught him how to feel but for feeling love he thinks he has long way to go!

He knows she is hiding her actual emotions.

He slowly came close hold her by waist and took her in his warm embrace resting her head on his chest!


updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


so you have made it!

now please tell me how is it? BAD, TERRIBLE,GOOD OR MIND BLOWING

This plot has been erupting in my mind since many time thats why i penned it down. Please give your honest views!

constructive criticism please. like if you like it but please do comment!

rest of the part will be up next week for sure!





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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX


chapter 1: pg 3

chapter 2: pg 4




Edited by wendy25 - 12 years ago
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oh my god
this is awesome
manyata and uday share everything
and he is leaving her for his responsibility
and she is tying to be cool about it
when they will separate they will realise each others value
and we have a little more of romance and how their life was
beautifully written i loved how u portraited that uday does not understand what love is
please update soon
i beg of u
i loved this chapter u are in my top 3 writers now
Edited by vampire12345678 - 13 years ago

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