THE BABY CUPID PART 2 PAGE 5...

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HI GUYZ THIS MUST BE THE FIRST TIME I'M POSTING IN INDIA FORUMS...I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...THIS IS MY FIRST MANVEER OS...😉😉PLZ LEAVE YOUR PRECIOUS CUMMENTS IF U HAVE TIME...😛
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GUYS MY FIRST OS'

PLZ DO CUMMENT'..

THE BABY CUPID PART 1'.

The bright rays of sun pass through the window pains disturbing her beauty sleep'

She twists and twirls on her bed'

She felt as is she hadn't slept so peacefully for ages'.

She feels something move next to her'

She gets up lazily rubbing her eyes'

And looking at her side her eyes shot open'

Fuming in anger'

What the F*** is he doing here'in my bed, she thought..

Trying to remember what happened last night'

Her so called husband was sleeping with her'

Husband my foot, she thought'.

They were married for the world but inside the walls of their room'

They were enemies'at least she considered him to be'

She never considered this marriage'.

Never wore her mangalsutra nor did put any sindoor'

He never objected'

Nor did she consider him to be his husband'

He was guilty'

Guilty of killing her love'

Killing the person she loved the most'

Though by mistake but he killed him'

She used to be rude to him'

Sometimes even slapped him'

But he dared not utter a word'

Allowing her to torture him as much as she wants'

She had made his life a living hell'

He loved her with the core of his heart'

But she thought she was forced in this marriage'

She got of the bed'

Gathered her clothes scattered on the floor'

Stormed out of the room'

Ran straight to her room closing the door and falling on her knees crying'

She remembered that they had drunk too much last night in party'

She was shattered..

While he was sleeping peacefully as it was his best night with his wife'

He loved her a lot'.

Always hoped that some day he would win her heart'

Someday will accept his love'

Someday will forgive him'

Someday will love him back as much he loved him..

But the only answer his mind gave was'

A big NO'

That hope too was disappearing as days passed'

He thought he was fighting a battle he had already lost'

Days passed'

He used to leave for office early'..

Before she woke up'

Though he could do his work from her'

He used to avoid her'

His strength to handle her blame was over'

He was weak'

Not physically but morally'

He came home late'

After she slept..

Sometimes heavily drunk'

Sometimes partially'

Sometimes they would end up together'

At dinner or breakfast'

But he was never ever able to finish his food'

As mo re than food he had to gulp down her blames'

She used to say him'that

How can a person eat after taking somebody's life'

Hurt by her accuses he usually leaved half his food'

But today, today it was different'

He was late for office'

They ended up together after many days'

It was silent'peaceful..

She finished her breakfast silently'

And got up'

She was about to move but feels dizzy and falls'

He was shocked'

Ran towards her'.

Pats her cheek'

Takes her head on his lap'

He says: princess kya hua??manyata get up..wake up plz'

She was in no state to reply'

He rushed her to the room'

The doctor came'

Examined her'

She had gained back her consciousness'.

He was standing out of her room'

Doctor came out..

He asks him: doctr kya manyata thik hai??

Use kya hua??

Doctor: dekhiye mujhe lagta hai ki ye baat agar who khud apko bata de to acha hoga'

He gets more worried'.

Rushed inside room'

Saw his wifey resting her head on the edge of bed'

Looking tired'

He whispers: princess'

Listening that word after 2 years of marriage made her heart skip a beat'

She opened her eyes and smiled'

Maybe in 2 years this was the first time she had smiled at him'

He goes near her and is about to touch her cheek but stops'

He was about to move his hand away but she caught his hand'

He was stunned'

He thought maybe he was dreaming'.

Then he word three words which gave him a big shock and the biggest happiness in world'

"Uday I'm pregnant.."

Uday at first wasn't able to believe it'but it was true'

God gave him a new hope'

A hope that could bring his princess close to him'

A hope that could make his living hell a beautiful heaven'

A hope which was the last thing he could have expected GOD to give him'.

~mahi~

LAST PART : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/67556785

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really awesome dear
very well written
great job
i loved it👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessmomo

its really awesome dear

very well written
great job
i loved it👏


THNKS YAR...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its very nice ...concept is striking ...its new n wonderful idea ...because of baby they r gonna unite...u mean da baby tries to get parents together?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG, OMG😲 It's Superb Mahi. 👍🏼Great-great OS.👏 👏 👏
Really very nice concept n so simple, beautiful n lovely OS.
Awesome work Mahi,😊 Very well written.👏I read your first OS, You write so beautifully dear.😛
I just loved your work.😊
Please write more this type of OS.😉
Thank you so much for the fab. OS n PM also.😊
It was the first part 😛 now I'm waiting for the next one.😉
Pls update ASAP.😊
YOU ROCK MAHI.😉
HUGS.🤗 🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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come baby come ...welcome to our world of OS FF and SS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS Mahi
Very simple and sweet really luved it
Do write more OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very beautifully written i loved it thanks for the pm and please update soon and u rocked this update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome when r u putting da next one

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey a very good start 👏 continue soon😊

are you the one who writes the ss without pain no love in facebook??
ie story where manyata is anya😊 i love the story..

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