SS: Soul mate..Sab Mera Tu..Chap 1 pg.11+Vid pg.12 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow just lovely MAHI
You are too good
Welcome to the category of writer
Of DEK
Now we are gonna eat your head to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow mahi!!! That was awesome!! The prologue was really good!!! Loved it!!
Welcome to dek forum writers categories!!!
Love ya!!
And pls try to pm me when u update!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous prologue Mahi. ...very cryptic indeed! Can't wait to read more... Please start it asap! Please PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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M i dreaming??? Let me pinch myself OUCH no m n0t😃
YAY mahi m so so so happy to see ur FF. Congo jee!
The prologue was awesome if u r writing s0mthng it wud b perfect! M eagerly waiting to read more so please do continue😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonam2801

Yes, Yes, Yes. My wish, goona be true. I'm so happy & dancing like Madhuri Dixit.

My X Saut, my first Forum friend & a good friend MAHI also in the DEK Forum's writers category. 🥳
WELCOME MAHI.
Prologue was superb n Character sketch of MANVEER was very very nice Mahi.👏 UV is rebellious too.😉 Thank God No Chawlwali Moniya.😆Loved the character sketch n Prologue.👍🏼 Now I'm waiting for the first update. Please PM me when you'll update the first chapter. Already hit the like button on PM List.
GOOD LUCK MAHI FOR YOUR FIRST FF.
HUGS FOR YOU.🤗 🤗



Thanks a bunch for the kind words😃, but this is NOT my first FF... but on this forum it is😆. So lets see what I do with the story... and thanks for introducing me in the writer's category of the DEK forum.. My FF will mostly be in english but sometimes will incorporate hindi as well... M is a leader here so she commands respect but still has a bit of jhalli-ness which comes out only between her friends... gonna update my first chapter soon.😊

And hailaaa... Madhuri ko competition diya ja raha hai... khuda khair karay!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jarin04

EDITED. Hey mahi first of all congrats on your first ff in dek forum. I'm really happy for my mahi bhai. Now i'll get a chance to read her work. About the prolouge it seems Clash of the leaders. I'm really excited for manveer clash. Awesome prolouge. Do continue soon. Pls pm me when u update. I hitted the like button too



Aww thank you Jaru bhai🤗, Munna bhai aapki baatein sunke bahut khush hua and YES, this FF is gonna be 'Clash of the Leaders' as you rightfully put it.👍🏼... M is gonna be the janta (students ki awaaz)... and Uday on the highest echelon. There will be a fire and irresistability but M will not give in to Uday's love too easily... she is stronger than that!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Havvii

Wow Mahi thts very great intro. Awww 7 years uv abhi se aisa no wonder after 16 year he ll be an enigma for everyone. I ll luv to see an educated nd mature Manyata. Cntn. pls



Thanks Soumya for reading and appreciating the prologue 👍🏼... Yes, Uday is already seeing so much in life (the realities of it) that he's maturing faster than boys his age. And in his later years, he will be an ICON for all😎... I'll continue soon and will PM you like you've asked me. Stay tuned till then!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shana0127

Nice start ...my first Q .is manyata princess or not ???.

No other Q rest i understood looking forward to Mahi Bhai style of story 😆...two leaders collide...lets see the results ...I am on and full on to see how these two neck to neck embrace each other





Yes, Manyata is a princess like the original DEK and has been kidnapped in childhood and is being raised somewhere else... but M's truth will take time to come out! Thanks for checking my prologue and CS out!... Luv ya!... tc🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pia.raha

justt loved ur plot!!!!!!! and ur charter sketchh!!!!!!!! would love to see wat happens wen two born leaders,true rajawdas collide!!!!!!!! plzz do cntinuee and pm mee!!!!!!! and one reqst,endingg sad mat karna plzzz...



Hi Pia!🤗.. I also wanted to see a situation where 2 leaders fall for each other and will explore it here in my SS...people of 2 different backgrounds/ upbringings yet destined to be together. I'll defo PM you soon about my update😊.. Your request regarding the ending has been noted, and will definitely consider it and can't promise anything because I want to keep all options open😲.

The thing with love stories is: It can take any sort of turn, they are that UNPREDICTABLE😳!.. Everyone wants a love story to be full of happiness, love and eventually a happily ever after but not everyone gets it... but I'm not turning you down👍🏼. I'm keeping that option open... My warriors will fight till the end for everything they believe in, and will surely fight for their love when they've accepted that they ARE in love but it'll be a rocky/ bumpy road till then and afterwards too as they are not some ordinary lovers!... but in the end whether they unite forever or not... that remains to be seen!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: machinegun

nice concept😊continue soon.waiting to see collision of two born leaders



Hi there!🤗
I'm happy my concept intrigued you and you wanna see two headstrong people/ leaders's journey and what happens when they collide?... Its gonna be a surprising ride, at least that's what I'm hoping for!... and lets see how good I'm able to make it!

Thanks for showing your appreciation, it means a lot!👏

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