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THIS IS AN OS...I HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT...

I DONT KNOW WHY AN OS ON MANVEER...

IT WAS THE FIRST DAY OF HER SCHOOL...SHE WENT TO 9TH GRADE...SHE WAS SCARED AS IT WAS HER FIRST DAY IN A NEW SCHOOL...THEN SHE WENT TO THE CLASS AND SAT ON A SEAT NEXT TO HIM ...HE SAW HER AND SMILED SHE LOOKED AT HIM AND SMILED BACK ...HE SAW THAT SHE LOOKS SCARED...AND ASKED HER WHY U LOOK SCARED? WHAT HAPPENED? IS EVERYTHING ALRIGHT?U R NEW? TODAY IS UR FIRST DAY?HE KEPT ON ASKING HER QUESTIONS AND SHE WAS LOOKING AT HIM WITH ALOT CONFUSION ...

THEN HE GAVE A SIGH OF RELEIF AND SAID...I AM SORRRY U WERE ALREADY SCARED AND LOOK AT ME I CONFUSED U MORE BY ASKING A MILLION QUESTIONS...SHE GIGLED AT HIS WORDS AND SAID ITS OK...I AM FEELING MUCH BETTTER NOW ...SO WTS UR NAME(SHE ASKED)?...

INTRODUCTION...

MY NAME IS UDAYVEER AND URS?

MY NAME IS MANYATA...

SO CAN WE BE FRIENS HE ASKED N GAVE A SMILE

YES OFCOURSE SO WE R FRIENDS FROM NOW SAID MANYATA...

TIME PASSED LIKE WIND AND NOW THEY WERE IN 11TH GRADE WITH THE PASSAGE OF TIME THEIR FRIENDSHIP GREW MORE STRONG INDEED THEY BECAME BEST FRIENDS...

IT WAS 14 FEBRUARY THE DAY OF LOVE IT WAS THE DAY WHEN UDAY DECIDED TO CONFESS HIS LOVE TO HER BEST FRIEND MANYATA...HE WAS VERY HAPPY WHEN MANYATA RUNNING CAME TO HIM...

UDAY: ARAM SAY KIA TUFAAN KI TRHA A RAHI HO ABHI HUM GIR JATE TO...

MANYATA:GIGGLING TO KIA HUA UDAY IAM UR BEST FRIEND TUM MERAY LIYE GIR B NAI SAKTE

UDAY:OFCOURSE SWEET HEART APKE LIYE KUCH B...

THEN HE WAS ABOUT TO TELL HER THAT HE LOVES HER ALOT...MANYATA SAID ACHA CAHA MERI BAT SUNO BOHAT IMPORTANT HAI...

UDAY:OK...HUME B APKO KUCH BTANA HAI...

MANYATA:KIA KIA BTAOOO?

UDAY:NAI PEHLAY AP BTAO...

MANYATA:NO FIRST U

UDAY:NO U

MANYATA:NO NO NO U FIRST...
UDAY:GIVING A SMILE NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO U FIRST GOT IT NOW TELLL ME...

MANYATA:UURRRGGGHHH UR TO IMPOSSIBLE

UDAY:I KNOW THAT BABY WINKING AT HER...AB BOLO B KIA HUA..?

MANYATA: BLUSHINGLY SAID I LOVE HIM...

UDAY:SHOCKINGLY SAID WHO?

MANYATA:RAJ THE ONE IN 12TH GRADE HE GAVE ME A RED ROSE AND I AM SOOO HAPPY I LOVE HIM HE TO LOVES ME ALOT...

UDAY:(WAS HEART BROKEN) HE WAS VERY SAD AND CRUSHED THAT RED ROSE WHICH HE GOT FOR HER...BUT STILL GAVE HER A SMILE AND SAID THATS GREAT IA AM HAPPY FOR U..

BUT INSIDE HE WAS SHATTERED N WANTED TO CRY HIS HEART OUT...BUT COULDNT BECAUSE HE WANTED TO SEE A SMILE ON HIS LOVES FACE...

HE SAID TO HIMSELF..."I WANT TO TELL HER THAT I JUST DONT WANNA BE FRIENDS

BUT...

I AMTOO SHY AND I DONT KNOW WHY"

MANYATA GAVE MORE AND MORE TIME TO HER LOVE BUT VERY LESS NOTICED HER VERY OWN BEST FRIEND UDAY WHO LOVED HER ALOTTT...

NOW THEY WERE IN GRADUATION...

ONE DAY MANYAT CAME TO HIS HOUSE SHE WAS CRYING ALOT...

UDAY:WHAT HAPPEND MANYATA?TELL ME I CANNOT SEE U CRYING PLESE TELL ME...?

HE WIPED HER TEARS AND MADE HER LOOK AT HIM...AND SAID LOK AT ME AND TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED I CANNOT BEAR U IN THIS STATE...

MANYATA:UDAY HE LEFT ME HE LEFT ME...

UDAY;WHO?

MANYATA:RAJ ...HE LEFT ME FOR SOMEONE ELSE...I HATE HIM ALL GUYS R SICK THEY USE US AND WHEN THEY FEEL ENOUGH THEY LEAVE US LIKE A USED PAPER...

UDAY:I WONT SPARE HIM FOR DOING THIS TO U...

MANYATA:NO NO UDAY U WONT DO ANYTHING LIKE THAT PLEASE FOR ME...

UDAY:BUT MANYATA(INTRUPETD)

MANYATA:NO PLEASE FOR ME PLEASE UDAY

UDAY:OK MANYATA NOW STOP CRYING AND FORGET EVERYTHING

SHE HUGGED HIM AND SAID...

MANYATA:UDAY UR MY BEST BUDDY...AND GAVE A KISS ON HIS CHEEK

HE LOVED HER FROM THE BOTTOM OF HIS HEART BUT ONE THING WAS STUCK TO HIS MIND THAT IF HE TELLS HER SHE MIGHT LEAVE HIM AS HER VIEWS ABOUT GUYS HAVE CHANGED...(THINKING)."I WANT TO TELL HER THAT I JUST DONT WANNA BE FRIENDS

BUT...

I AMTOO SHY AND I DONT KNOW WHY"

THERE GRADUATION ENDED WITH AND NOW IT WAS THE TIME HE HAD TO GO TO UK FOR HIS MBA...IT WAS LAST DAY OF COLLEGE..

UDAY:MANYATA I HAVE TO GO TONIGHT

MANYATA:WHERE UDAY?

UDAY:UK

MANYATA:WHAT UR GOING TONIGHT AND NOW UR TELLING ME

UDAY:IAM SORRY I DIDNT EVN KNEW THAT MY DAD JUST CALLED ME AND TOLD THAT I HAVE A FLIGHT FOR TONIGHT...

MANYATA:CRYING HUGGED HIM I WILL MISS U BUDDY...

UDAY:I WILL MISS U TOO...

AFTER THAT HE LEFT...

THEY DID NOT KNEW LIFE WILL DO SUCH A THING TO THE BEST FRIENDS...

TOW YEARS HAVE PASSED...ITS VERY RARE THEY TALK...

SOMETIMES THEY EMAIL EACHOTHER...

TOW MORE YEARS PASSED...NOW THEY DONT TALK AT ALL NO EMAILS...

HE CAME BACK TO INDIA AFTER 5 YEARS BUT DID NOT FORGET HIS BEST BUDDY AND HE STILL LOVED HER WITH THE DEAPTH OF HIS HEART...

HE CAME BACK AND WAS SHOCKED TO KNOW THAT SHE GOT MARRIED LAST YEAR AND NOW LIVES IN CANADA...

UDAY WAS ONCE AGAIN HEART BROKEN HE THOUGHT HE WILL TELL HER ABOUT HIS FEELINGS BUT WAS TOO LATE FOR NOW

TWO MONTHS LATER UDAY GOT A CALL...AND WAS SOO HAPPY TO HEAR HER VOICE AGAIN..

MANYATA:UDAY TUM KITNE BEWAFA HO UK JA KR MJE BHUL GYE...

UDAY:HUM TUMHE KAISE BHUL SKTE HAIN UR MY BEST BUDDY...OR TUM KITNI BEWAFA HO SHADI KRLI OR MJE BTAYA B NAI...

MANYATA:YE SHADI BHT JALDI MA HUI KISI KO BTANE KA TIME NAI MILA MERAY PARENTS KO BHT JLDI THI...

UDAY:THEEK HAI...ACHA MJE BTAO KB MIL RAHI HO OR INDIA KAISE AE?

MANYATA:HAN MA AJ SHAAM MILO GI TUM SAY MA INDIA SHIFT HO GAI HU...

UDAY:THATS GOOD..SO SEE U IN EVENING...

MANYATA:OK BYE

UDAY:BYE...

THEY MET...HUGGED EACHOTHER AND WERE VERY HAPPY TO MEET AGAIN...BUT UDAY THOUGHT THAT MANYATA DOSENT SEEMS TO B HAPPY WITH HER HUSBAND...

SO HE ASKED HER...

R U HAPPY WITH UR MARRIGE?

MANYATA:HMMM YES

UDAY: DOSENT SEEMS SO

MANYATA:NO UDAY I REALLY LOVE HIM AND HE LOVES ME TO I AM VERY HAPPY...

UDAY:MANYATA U CANNOT LIE FROM ME TELL ME THE TRUTH...

MANYATA:(WITH TEARY EYES)MY PARENTS WANTED ME TO MARRY HIM I WAS FORCED TO DO IT...MY PARENTS LOVE HIM ALOT AND HE TO RESPECTS THEM THATS WHY I HAVE TO STAY HAPPY IN ANY CASE I DONT WANT TO HURT MY PARENTS...
UDAY:NO MANYATA ITS FORCED HOW CAN U(INTERUPTED)

MANYATA:I KNW ITS FORCED BUT I AM HAPPY HE RESPECTS ME ALOT AND WHAT ELSE I WANT...

UDAY:HMMM OK BUT IF ANY PROBLEM U CAN ALYAS TELL ME...UDAY (TO HIMSELF)"I WANT TO TELL HER THAT I JUST DONT WANNA BE FRIENDS

BUT...

I AMTOO SHY AND I DONT KNOW WHY"

THEY WERE BEST FRIENDS AND NO ONE CAN SAPERATE THEM...

THEY REMAINED BEST FRIENDS FOR THE REST OF THERE LIVES...AND EVERY LIFE COMES TO AN END...THEY BOTH WERE VERY OLD NOW...AND EVERYONE HAS TO DIE ONE DAY...

...DEATH...

MANYATA DIED...

UDAY CRIED ALOOOTT THAT DAY ALOT...HIS BEST BUDDY HIS LOVE LEFT HIM...AND THE WORST PAIN WAS THAT HE DID NOT TELL HER IN HIS ENTIRE LIFE THAT HE LOVED HER...

HE WENT TO HER GRAVE AND SAT BESIDE IT...

WHILE CRYING HE SAID I LOVE U I LOVE U...HE WAS CRYING WHILE A HAND TOUCHED HIS SHOULDER...IT WAS MANYATAS HUSBAND...HE GAVE UDAY A DIARY AND LEFT...

HE OPENED IT AND TEARS FALLING DOWN FROM HIS EYES MADE IT WET...ON EVERY PAGE IT WAS WRITTEN...

I WANT TO TELL HIM THAT I JUST DONT WNNA BE FRIENDS BUT...

I AM TOO SHY AND I DONT KNOW WHY...

HE CRIED AND CRIED...

WHY WHY DIDNT I TELL HER I LOVED HER WHY...

HE WANTED TO DIE OR HE ASKED GOD TO BRING BACK HIS LOVE SO THAT HE COULD TELL HER HOW MUCH HE LOVED HER...

HE GOT UP AND SAID I WILL CONFESS MY LOVE NOT IN THIS LIFE SO I WILL WAIT FOR NEXT...BUT I WILL...

AS TRUE LOVE NEVER DIES...OUR LOVE EXISTS AN WE WILL BE ONE SOON...

...I LOVE U...

HE SAID AND LEFT...

THE END...
HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT...I KNW ITS NOT AT ALL GUD LIKE EVERYONE ELSES...ITS MY FIRST TRY...DO LIKE N COMMENT...

REGARDS ZINAYRULES AKA ZAINAB...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx for the PM dear

Lovely OS

Keep writing dear

Tumhare OS ne rulaa diya bt

True love never dies

I'm sure ki woh agle janm mein zaroor ek honge

Edited by afreshbegin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: afreshbegin

Thanx for the PM dear

Lovely OS

Keep writing dear

UR WELCOME...
n thnks for liking😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zain don't tell me it was your first try.😲 😲 Zainu I was so shocked after reading this yaar.😳
Really I've no words to praise you n your OS.👏 Just like Sixer in the first ball yaar, 👍🏼Just too too good. 😊Amazing, fantastic n superb work.👏 👏 👏
I read many OS in DEK Forum but I think this one was the best OS of DEK Forum.👍🏼 I read many OS with happy endings but after reading this sad but superb OS, 😛I was feeling so touched with this story. Ya right it's not necessary that All love stories've happy endings. You described UV's feelings for Manyata so so beautifully. 🤗He loved Manyata from childhood & loved her till the death.😭 This is the real n true love yaar. ❤️
& What the end of the OS. 😲I mean Manyata also loved UV but never confessed to him.😭 That Graveyard scene when UV confessed his feelings to Manyata on her Grave that was so touchy n emotional part of this OS. 😳
HATS OF TO YOU ZAINU COS ANYONE WRITE A HAPPY ENDING OS BUT YOU WROTE A SAD ENDING OS SO BEAUTIFULLY..👏 👏
I can't write this type of emotions so beautifully.😳
Thank you so much for this beautiful n fabulous OS Zainu & thanks for the PM dear.😊
Now I want to read more OS from you but now this time a happy one k.😉
HUGS FOR YOU DEAR.🤗 🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so different and lovely!! loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
wonderful
fantasitic
great
outstanding
astonishing
magnificent
facinating
marvelous
incredible
miraculous
stupendous
impressive
brilliant
suprising
exhilhiarating
exciting
electrifying
phenomenal
cool
spectacular
wonderous



this update was awesome the whole thing was beautifully writen i have no words
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8 story da and a more greater thought...whn u dnt feel shy to love...y do u fear to confess
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U left me speachless.I mean it waz mindblowing.Hatz off buddy.Keep up the great work.N next time pliz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gowri05

That was so different and lovely!! loved it!

thanks...😊
it was my first attempt

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