'I DONT KNOW WHY' OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: sonam2801

Zain don't tell me it was your first try.😲 😲 Zainu I was so shocked after reading this yaar.😳

Really I've no words to praise you n your OS.👏 Just like Sixer in the first ball yaar, 👍🏼Just too too good. 😊Amazing, fantastic n superb work.👏 👏 👏

I read many OS in DEK Forum but I think this one was the best OS of DEK Forum.👍🏼 I read many OS with happy endings but after reading this sad but superb OS, 😛I was feeling so touched with this story. Ya right it's not necessary that All love stories've happy endings. You described UV's feelings for Manyata so so beautifully. 🤗He loved Manyata from childhood & loved her till the death.😭 This is the real n true love yaar. ❤️

& What the end of the OS. 😲I mean Manyata also loved UV but never confessed to him.😭 That Graveyard scene when UV confessed his feelings to Manyata on her Grave that was so touchy n emotional part of this OS. 😳

HATS OF TO YOU ZAINU COS ANYONE WRITE A HAPPY ENDING OS BUT YOU WROTE A SAD ENDING OS SO BEAUTIFULLY..👏 👏

I can't write this type of emotions so beautifully.😳

Thank you so much for this beautiful n fabulous OS Zainu & thanks for the PM dear.😊

Now I want to read more OS from you but now this time a happy one k.😉

HUGS FOR YOU DEAR.🤗 🤗

thanks aaalllott sonam...😃i am glad u like it alot...and i made it sad cz every os has an happy ending so i made it different...😳

Originally posted by: aliya666

it was really most emotional os i have ever read it almost made me cry

thumps up to you 👍🏼

you wrote it so beautifully

loved manyata from beging to end

freindship is first step towards love you gave full justice to this proverb

loved it no words to appreciate it speachless

thanks buddy...i am happy that u like my work though it was my frst and lil silly attemp😳

Originally posted by: Gowri05

That was so different and lovely!! loved it!

thanks alloott...
i tried my best to make it different...!

Originally posted by: princess_T

Hey Zainab..😃It was a fantastic OS😳It was like a first match mein hee century😉It was perfect👏I don't have words to praise your work😳OMG we're getting some very very good writer's on the forum😃It had emotions and leaps Lolzz😆Perfect OS! Bas that's it... Perfect is the word😃

thanks aloot princess...
ur words mean alot to me...
thanks...

Originally posted by: Swini01

U left me speachless.I mean it waz mindblowing.Hatz off buddy.Keep up the great work.N next time pliz pm me.
Swinipriya

aww...thanks alot swini...yes i will pm u if i write more...

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Fantastic OS Zainab...there is no hint that you are attempting to write first time...waise tumne muze rula diya..it was too emotional but i love it...
Thanks for the pm

hehe...thanks alot...i am happy that u like it...

Originally posted by: pia.raha

<font size="3">thank u for the pm!!!!!!!! it was veryy touching!!!!!!!! i was feleing soo hurt seeing uday hrtbrken!!!!!!!! nice os!!!!!!!!!!😊</font>

thanks alot buddy...

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Lovely os dear! Do write m0re :)

thanks...will surely write more waiting for a unique story that hits my mind...

Originally posted by: snowdream

gr8 story da and a more greater thought...whn u dnt feel shy to love...y do u fear to confess

thanks buddy...
and thats what i wna convey from this os...
and if u love someone its better to confess no matter what happens in result...may b thats ur true love and if it isnt that u will get to knw it by its reaction... :)

Hey Zainab...It was really wonderful yaar..But the last part made me really sad😭 and its still paining my heart but its soo realistic...Keep up the good work!😊