*~*Forcefully Yours FF*~* PRECAP OF CHAP 9 PG 127

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1111

Originally posted by: mrs_kapoor
🤣🤣one moreager bila bili ki setting rhi tu a sakte hain🤣

hahaahah i think i should name my FF now biliyon ka romance adda😆

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1112

yes sarah i agree with that, but u know is the USP of sehe-e zaat it is the depection of pain of falak that stand out and the beauty in which they show her breaking down and then rise like a phoneix. and that is hwat I expect from ur ff too,not right in teh next update but later on. sarah show the pain, of UV's life unnati getting destroyed, show his pain that he is going through seeing his most loved person going through hell.show how it feels for a yuvraj with all the money in the world, but still has no power to save his sister from her heartbreak Show Manyata's breakdown on knowing the truth of her brother,on knowing that her super hero is not exactly what she thinks him to be. make her rise like anphoenixfor what is right, make her ight for what is right.give that detailing to ur charcters. because I know u write well and can do it😊o God i loved your comment chitz yea thats how exactly its gona be but you have gaved me a really great idea of explaining their pain! i will try my best to write uvs and manyatas part as good as i can

Yeah agreed...Sarah that pain should be explicit that everyone can relate it to its rude and wild behavior to Manyata and her breakdown makes her realize what UV felt and makes her understand things from his pov...

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1113

Originally posted by: mahi0809
@Sarah: I'll update my FF after a few hours (by tomorrow the latest)... do give me a review on it after you read it!

Yay mahi i would love to i m so excited finally you r updating tomorrow 😊 do update soon i cant wait more now😊😊😊