MANVEER SS (YOU RRE THE ONE) c sketch/prologue - Page 6

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

hey that note solved all the problems so manyata and uday can get married and romance and their DNA is different too😆😆 it make more sense now and the story is even better please update soon and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: anarox

thanx vampi

the DNA was a big pangaa😆

Originally posted by: killerashish

hmmm nice idea ha aana lakin manyata fir kis ki beti ha agar B nay

usay adopt kia ha tou😕kitna baada twist daal diya🤣

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

i think i am getting to obsessed with biology 😆 and look your concept is so nice that the comments have reached 7 pages with only prologue

Hey DEAR, Nice concept:

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

Main tho note k baad hee tapki hoon ek dum police ki tarah sab ho jaanay k baad😉🤣 Chal koi nii... han back to SS... character sketch is good... koi mother mention ni hai aana kya uday manyata dono ki koi mother ni??😆 ab giri ki tarah brij b akela reh gya chalo koi ni ek doosre ka sahaara bnaingay😆 i like J as sweet sis😃... aur han manyata adopted ab uski b alag story past to b revealed suspense b add hogya aakhir beti kis ki cool😎 prologue sounds interesting looking forward to read it!!! update soon😊

Originally posted by: navinahun

Hey DEAR, Nice concept:

COUSINS MAKE DOZENS!!!!😆😆😆

Please PM me when u update...

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

lol wish briraj and giriraj ek doosre ka sahaara bnaingay🤣 (my mind is in the gutter 😆)

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

navi what do u mean by

COUSINS MAKE DOZENS!!!!?