MANVEER SS (YOU RRE THE ONE) c sketch/prologue

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hy gys
be ready with your slippers and rotten tomatoes as i m going to write an SS i was so confused should i write it or not as we have pearl like writers on DEK forum this is going to b my first ss ever so pls forgive if i do mistak
here is character sketch
  • Udhay veer Bhatiya A successful business man a multi talented person son of G bhatia and has joined his fathers business as an M D in Bhatiya empires
  • Maniyata khanna she has completed her studies and want to do job daughter of B Khanna
  • Giriraj Bhatiya who established Bhatiya empires
  • Brijraj Khanna friend of G Bhatiya who is a landlord and in order to look after his land often has to visit country side
  • jay younger sweet sis of maniyata
  • vijay elder bro of maniyata and jay
  • unatti yonger sis of udhay
  • Mrs komal Khanna caring mother of M J and V
  • Mrs pooja Bhatiya sweet mother of UV
  • Minalini devi the grand mother of Khanna family
this is going to be a story of two families I .e Bhatiya and Khanna family Mr Khanna came 25 years ago to dehli after the birth of vijay Khanna and settled down their in the neighborhood of Bhatiya family with the passage of time both families established deeper relations Maniyata and jay took birth in Dehli
so Maniyata and Udhay are the child hood friends and know each other very well
wish me luck also gys that i may come up to your aspirations
hope you gys like it please hit the like button and give your comments if you want me to continue
love you all

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Posted: 13 years ago
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arrey yaar main kya kahoon!!
manyata aur uday ko bhai behan bana diya😆😆
cousin bro hai fir bhi😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely but MANVEER are siblings😲 that too real hey get married 😕 u cant fall in love with your brother😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

arrey yaar main kya kahoon!!
manyata aur uday ko bhai behan bana diya😆😆
cousin bro hai fir bhi😆


lol😆even i am speechless sunshine
manveer cousins😲
abh unke romance kya hoga
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aray wah aana puttar bi writter ban gya 👏chalo koi nhn may bi ban

jaon gi 🤣

nice character sketch 👍🏼hmm yeh bhatiya family story ha rajwada

family ki nhn 😆uday or manyata bhai behan kun 😕 aana puttar sab

kay naam kay spelling galat kr diay 😉lakin theek humay samaj a rha

ha cont soon ab jaldi say first chapter bi update kr do🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678

lovely but MANVEER are siblings😲 that too real hey get married 😕 u cant fall in love with your brother😆

hy vampi m is daughter b BHATIA and uv IS son of G bhatia they are cousins 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

arrey yaar main kya kahoon!!
manyata aur uday ko bhai behan bana diya😆😆
cousin bro hai fir bhi😆

bro nhi sirf cousin hy🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678


lol😆even i am speechless sunshine
manveer cousins😲
abh unke romance kya hoga

well vampi cant cousins make romance🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahara23

loved it continue it

thanks dear😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anarox

hy vampi m is daughter b BHATIA and uv IS son of G bhatia they are cousins 😆


but cousins cant get married😲 they kind of have the same blood so if they get married and mate(descent language😆) and there DNA will cross and that will cause problems to their kids
p.s: i study biology and it is all around my head sorry
Edited by vampire12345678 - 13 years ago

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