RTL2 Black Roses : chap 2 part 1 pg 12 12/10/21 - Page 5

loving it to the corree <33

Omg Cham I loved the update. The first chapter itself was so fabulous I wonder how the rest would be. Damn now this was unexpected. Okay so from what I've understood, Manyata has lost her memory, Mini is blackmailing Uday to hurt her child if he doesn't reciprocate her love, and that child must be Uday and Manyata's, and then comes the mysterious rose. Does Uday send it to her every year? You never fail to surprise me Cham. This was really awesome. Can't wait to see what happens next.
P.S: I am seriously hating Mini. A LOT!
I don't know if she redeems later or not, but for now, I truly loathe her!

OMG mysteries, mysteries and more mysteries 😕 enjoying every bit of it
Just loving these interesting turns 😉 but as usual many "Whys" are crawling in my mind 🤣 answer them Mystery Buddy
Inspite of Rajgharh as the most powerful royals and controlling mahasabha
Manyata has been sent away "Why"
Mnayata and UV could no longer stay together "Why"
Minakshi is exploiting UV "Why"
Mnayata is also not with his son "Why" if in case he is...dont even know that 🤔
but loved reading it and my most favorite parts are when manyata felt strange being called as "doll" and manyata getting rose on her birthday every year and wonder who is he and thinking about him? 😉
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thanx for the pm dear 🤗and waiting for the next😊

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woww cham i read part 1 completely n nw part 2.u just manage to take my breath away.it was so beautiful i cant tell u hw muj i lovd it plz plz upd8 soon n plz do pm👏

Nice update! So Mini and NS must have done something to kill Manyata and Manyata lost her memory because of that. But did she and UV actually get engaged?

this was just so so awesum...update nxt soon...

Awesome update Cham.pliz cont soon n pm me if u can.

Nyc update dear...
Bt it has confused me
so i'm waiting for the mystery to unfold...

Originally posted by: shana0127

Now look chams answer my Q or I wont ever comment again

Q1. Tha little three year old child belongs to Uday and ...fill this blank

OK fine J gone Minakshi In as a witch ...good

Sword Fight Hailla So roylish...the scene so well written

I like this Manyata monologue way of writing u can write so much by being Manyata ur self Cham😉

25 age to be yuvraani ????Hailla Yuvraniship of Devgad is so time taking

So M and UV often talk though not much in love ...humm so its all falling in love once again...

Good I am gonna love this Merry Go Round 👍🏼

This was the first time someone seriously threatened me and I am scared, 😆😆
Q 1 THe little three year old child belongs to uday and his queen ha ha ha...
How can someone being a witch could turn good?😕
Sword fights are my personal favorites I've learned a little bit and love the royalty it can represent, such a royal thing,
I wanted to write write in M's POV because she herself is a messed up character at the moment and doesn't know half the truths about herself.
I picked that age from BR saying in the show that he was 25 when he was given the royal sword of devgar so at that time I thought they might turn 25 to be a yuvraj or yuvrani is a good idea, so responsible in that age than in a very young age aren't they and of cause different riyasatts may have different customs too,
That's the whole point of losing your memory,. you can relive each moment😊
I'm glad that you love merry go rounds or else this one's going to drive people including me crazy,
Now that I almost answered your question correctly you will comment in future I believe?
I really love to see your comments on my work, it sort of encourages me you know😃