SS:COMPLICATED FRIENDS Chap:4(pt-2)+Chap-5(pt-1)PG:15(pt-2)PG:16 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmmm so u finally update !!
nyc update

Vicky flirts wid M to make UV
jealous and i must say UV toh
bohot Jal raha hai
intersting update

its good 2 knw de happenings in deir
past


Edited by lilybabes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

abhi tera bhi res karna shuru 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hawww...kamini u called my uday bas**d how dare u?aur tujhe time mil hi gaya...ye toh sirf flash back tha...ye bata manveer ki shadi kaise hue aur ye shivam kaun hai jis ke bare me pichhale update me bataya tha?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome wonderful beautifully written i loved uday's point of view and the description u gave swini u are turning into a very descriptive and imaginative writer
please update soon
and longer longer part
please i loved this part
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Posted: 12 years ago
itss supbb!!!!!!!!!! updatee soon!!!!!!!!!!! lovedd uday's feeling!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Recap:Guys pliz cheack pg:15 .There was a new update(part-1)
Chappy-5(part-2)
"Hey tiny you better put that back inside your mouth before I do something with it"He gave her an arrogant smirk.
Even they're now collage students,Manya's still really naive,"Like what?"a little confuse and really wanna know what he would do,she stuck her tongue out again.
"If u do this again then I will cut it."he said and smirked.
Manya quickly put that back inside her mouth and give a worried half smile to Vicky.
Vicky smirked,happy with her worried expression.He decides mess her hair up a little chukling at her expression.
"Hey"Manya said screamed and start hitting Viky's hand away from her messed haur.She smothen her hair out,running her fingers through them.
"KAMINA(actually in their group everyone call Vicky a kamina),Dont dare,a voice came from behind.
After few seconds
Pria is beating Vicky n now Vicky is actually in the floor.
"Stop it Pria,calm down.We're just talking nothing else.Uday say something na."Manya yelled.
"Kamina kaha tha na tu pitega"Uv thought n then he said"well Pria give him four punched more from my side pliz"He smirked and everyone in the class laughed except Pria,Vicky and Manya.
"Dude what r u saying?Dost kab dushma ban gaya pata hi nahi chala"Vicky said worriedly.
"Nahi humarey kumb keh meley mei bichrey huye bhaia ko chordo pliz"Manya said in a dramatic tone.
"Thats better.Ok i will leave him but now stop flirtingin front of me idiots.I dont feel like throwing up my breakfast."Pria said as he leave Vicky.
"Pheww thanks yaar,nagin seh bacha liya bachey ko"Vicky said n Pria glare at him which make him shut his mouth.Vicky just thinking what would happen if he dare to kiss or cut Manya's tongue now.Pria would definitely chop him in peices and sell his body parts to make a profit.But the question is that who whoukd buy him or his body parts,he smirked.
"Manya you're getting better n better.I couldn't read ur mind anymore.Not even when u r sleeping.Vicky said.
"Oh really?thanks for the compliment"Manya smiled,happy knowing her controll over her mind has gone better but when she think over what he said"Hey u were trying to read in my dreams"She said n started chasing the now laughing Vicky.
While they were chasing around in the classroom with Manya trying to throw chalks at Vicky,Uday wis reading his comic as usual,though he is quite pissed about what happened between Vicky and Manya awhile ago.
While everyone was doing their own things,Manya was still chasing Vicky n was about to jump onto him though she had long fogetting tjat why she was chasing him.Vicky moved just in tim to avoid been to the ground.
BUMP!Manya was epecting to tackle nothing but air and met cold floor with pain.but when she opened her eyes from her fall,she found herself falling into uday's lap for a minutes,everything seemed to have frozen untill Uday broke the eyes.
"How long do u want to stay on my lap for princess?"he glared at her for ruining his reading.
updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome work swini the whole thing beautifully written
the last scene were manyata ends up on uday's lap was super duper man
glad u updated this longer
loved the writing
u rock swini
Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago
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"So..sorry...,Manya quickily get off his lap,but accidentally putting one of her hands too lose to his male part on his thigh without knowing it.After she pushed off him,she quickly hit Vicky on his head for dogging her attack than ran back to her own sit,just in time ms.D(dass guptap)to come in and start the lesson.
Avicky saw what happened and leaned close to his best friend,"lucky u,need to go to the bathroom?"he leaned back to his own seat giggling,teasing Uday.
"Shut up"Uday said harshly,using all his power to force the blush down.
"what's wrong with this polka dots!And what the hell is wrong with me?Why the hell i m blushing,i dont blush.Talking about male and their pride.
PRECAP
'Manya'a husky voice called out from the doorway.
Everyone turned their attention towards the voice only to find an extremely hot'...'
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"Ah yaar i just about to go find u"Manya walked towards him.
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"Uday,what r u going to do about it"Vicky asked.
"Nothing,i m not interested.And its none of my business too"Uday said coldly.
"Liar liar burns on fire"Vicky said.
Uday looked at him smirked and then Vicky also smirked.
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Shivam said cheerfuly,giving her a kiss on her cheek and left.
Manya was almost shocked.He then smile a bit totally unware that Uday standing right behind her.He had seen the scene where Shivam kissed her.
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"ARGHHH PERVERT"Manya said angrily.
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Manya was too shock to think or do anything,She later on got back to the real world when she felt his lips pressing harder towards her and starts licking lower lips.
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"Will u be my GF princess"Uday asked.
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"I m sorry Uday,really sorry but i cant"Manya said.
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So hope u guys like my all updates.Pliz pliz do hit the like button n do comment.N dont forget to hit the like button in my previous update if u like it.The next chappy is specially for u Vamp...Thanks to Avika for the caraecters n there names except Manya/Manyta,Uday n Vicky.Thanku yaar.I will give u guys the caracter skeatch later.N sorry if i waste ur time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsomeee...hayooo...rabba kya kya likhati hai yaar manyata ne kahan hath rakha tha...u dirty dirty girl...
Urghhh...and that shivam and plzzz...dnt tell me k precape jis ne manyata ko kiss kiya woh shivam hai...hawww...kamini manyata she refuse my uday' praposel ush ki itni himmat...shayd ivam ush ka BF hoga issi liye mana kiya hoga...ab jaldi se next part ane de.
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Posted: 12 years ago
this other part was also super super
i loved the scene were manyata by mistake puts her hand on the wrong place without even realizing
and vicky tells uday where or not he wants to go to the bathrom that was so funny i wish uday would have said yes the expressions of vivky would be a ,million bucks
and then the precap scenes i hope the one kissing manya is uday
i am looking forward to shivam please make him someone really handsome so he can give uday competition
and manya refused uday's proposal or that was the next scene because u had kept 3 dots in between
never mind i know how much u keep suspense
please update soon this chapter rocked
thansk will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter

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