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fabulous dear.
Cont.
Thanx 4 pm.
Love u
pari

Read my comment on pg 7😉

Originally posted by: princess_T

OMG😲 I'm awestruck Payel😃 I just cannot get over it! I read it twice already😉 The poetry's you've written are fantastic👏 Every word has the emotion in it😳 I just loved every single word in your FF😳 People fall in love with people but I fell in love with your FF😳 Everything has the tinch of Royalness in this one😳 It has the glory of God and even the emotion called love😳 This is a ROYAL FF in every sense.😃 The story itself is different and Royal😃 How the hell can you write so freaking brilliantly?😃 I have to say.. I LOVE THIS FF TO THE CORE😳 I just love it😳 Can't get over it!😉 Please please update as soon as possible 😃 And last but not the least you already have given us some of the ManVeer passionat scenes😃 But I want more!!😉

Originally posted by: shana0127

ur style reminds me of my childhood days when i used to read fairytales...u know I had a book called Sixteen tales of |Shakespear ...and i still have it and love reading it ur style is very much the same

Plus i just found myself roaming around in sixteenth century where prince loves a girl comes to meet her by lake marries her and promises her all happiness...u have sent me in my childhood days dear ...it has been long since i read this style...feel like taking out that book again

Update soon and yes do maintain this mythological aura ...I love it

wow bhabi saa u shoul bea writer

Originally posted by: DAPS

wow bhabi saa u shoul bea writer

omg kasam i really like ur this ff plz continue

ur ff is like m reading some shaks pears book

yaar tu to chupi rustam lnekli kiya lekti ho

wow im shocked

any way panchi what does (abhinashwar means)?

DEAR FRIENDS ABINASHWAR MEANS INDESTRUCTIBLE...

Hi dear,

Excellent start yaar...😊😊😊

Eagerly waiting for the story to unfold...

Pls update soon dear

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

payel khub sundor .. beginning is really good n ur writing style also

I loved those chants n everything

n the picture of Ardhanariswar is so beautiful

cont soon