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Killer

@.Killer.

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Finally Finally I read it...That was just incredible...
How do u manage to write so well...!! I keep on wondering..!

Seriously dii that was an incredible piece of work...
Now I just cant stop myself from thinking about the next update...
So plzz its a request..plzz do update soon...
Waiting to see the reaction of the Rajgharana after they come to know about Udayveer & Moniya's marriage...

Do pm me as soon as u update..!!!

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Plzzz update soon Payal. Its been so long

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: dona86
update soon..

Dona my eyes are not at all fit for writing...Let my eyes get cured i'll update Maaneet and Manveer FF together 😊

Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago

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@ITV_Loverr

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: panchaali

<font size="4">Dona my eyes are not at all fit forwriting...Let my eyes get cured i'll update Maaneet and Manveer FF together😊</font>

oh no payel, what happend to your eyes? Are u ok?

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debaleenasaha

@debaleenasaha

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

When is the next release Payel...eagerly waiting for that😊...your control on language is very good...but I felt the story is little dramatic seems to be a ready to be aired script...but the starting was really good...the description was so good and detailed that I could felt everything was happening in front my eyes...but later when Moniya's part came and Udayveer was in a dilemma of what to do and not..there the pace was a little fast...and then Moniya and Uday's romance was good...I must say your detailing is very good... overall it is good...😊