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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: princessnia
Awesome one yaar.n the poetry waz mindblowing.Loved it.Hatz off man.Cont soon Payal dear.n dont forget to pm me:p
Trishika(Nia)

Thanks trishika for your support 😊

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candy08

@candy08

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

bhot detail mai likha har cheez ko sahi sahi describe bhi kiya hai very nice work interesting and historical ff love it akahir kisi sahi cheez ko parhne par time lagaya fantastic yaar

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: candy08
bhot detail mai likha har cheez ko sahi sahi describe bhi kiya hai very nice work interesting and historical ff love it akahir kisi sahi cheez ko parhne par time lagaya fantastic yaar

thank you yaar candy..par tune mujhe teri biriyani ki recepie batayi nahi!!! 😭

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

OMG😲 I'm awestruck Payel😃 I just cannot get over it! I read it twice already😉 The poetry's you've written are fantastic👏 Every word has the emotion in it😳 I just loved every single word in your FF😳 People fall in love with people but I fell in love with your FF😳 Everything has the tinch of Royalness in this one😳 It has the glory of God and even the emotion called love😳 This is a ROYAL FF in every sense.😃 The story itself is different and Royal😃 How the hell can you write so freaking brilliantly?😃 I have to say.. I LOVE THIS FF TO THE CORE😳 I just love it😳 Can't get over it!😉 Please please update as soon as possible 😃 And last but not the least you already have given us some of the ManVeer passionat scenes😃 But I want more!!😉

Edited by princess_T - 13 years ago

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Hey payel loved ur update its really difrnt c0ncept and itx realy amazing! U r realy talentd writer i hav read all 3 of ur 0ne sh0tx and l0vd all of them! Please update da next part asap :)

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Hey payel loved ur update its really difrnt c0ncept and itx realy amazing! U r realy talentd writer i hav read all 3 of ur 0ne sh0tx and l0vd all of them! Please update da next part asap :)

oh love you sarah darling!!!

ha update karna parega!!!

par us ke liye thoda mehenat karni paregi

wish me luck!!!

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: panchaali

oh love you sarah darling!!!ha update karna parega!!!par us ke liye thoda mehenat karni paregiwish me luck!!!

Best of luck payel i kn0w ur next update wud be as awes0me as ur 0ther work:)

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Best of luck payel i kn0w ur next update wud be as awes0me as ur 0ther work:)

Baap re itni tareef...

mujhe hazam karne ke liye hajmola khana parega!!! 😊

Ha mujhe toh ab achi likh ni hi paregi...

waise is update ke liye main 1 week theek tarase so nahi payi...need mein story ki dialog yaad ya jati thi!!!

Ab aap logo ne itni taaref ki to mujhe aur zada mehnat karni paregi!!!

Edited by panchaali - 13 years ago

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

ur style reminds me of my childhood days when i used to read fairytales...u know I had a book called Sixteen tales of |Shakespear ...and i still have it and love reading it ur style is very much the same

Plus i just found myself roaming around in sixteenth century where prince loves a girl comes to meet her by lake marries her and promises her all happiness...u have sent me in my childhood days dear ...it has been long since i read this style...feel like taking out that book again

Update soon and yes do maintain this mythological aura ...I love it