FF:fantasies of the world tocome!! chap11.2 pg 87

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hamra

@rocker12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: showstealer
are u updating now ???

in 5 mins :)

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

it was super awesome loved manyata and her jungli behavior with J i loved the dialogues and manyata and unnati convo loved the bar scene stupid akash😡 again but manveer was just awesome thanks for the pm and please update soon

Edited by vampire12345678 - 13 years ago

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showstealer

@showstealer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: rocker12

in 5 mins :)

yeppi yup

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showstealer

@showstealer

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

great update i just loved manyata's attitude towards j

it was truely awesome but the last line stabbed me why she said this ????

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

Amazing Part Haz

I hate J in this ff she is still after Uday when will she learn😡 dont like Akash either... luved Manveer convo.. towards the end she goes i hate you I'm sure it's meant to be opposite i love u😆

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

Read both chaps togetha... chappy5 was awesome... ahem ahem ahem😉 super hot!!☺️ Chappy6 was fab loved it... Unnati Manyata part was sweet😳... Manyata realized she loves Uday not that akash😡 oh that Akaash on tv DS misunderstood😲 really like the way Manyata confronted J n talked her off... Unnati giving her the right advice to go to uday first & thnk fully Manyata got there in nick of time to confront J... loved ManVeer convo in the end bt i thought at the very end she'll say out cuz I love u bt instead she said i hate u surprised me again😉 bt i know u'll fix that soon.. plz keep akaash entry as far aways as u can 😆... updates were really awesome Haz... thnx for fab updates & pms🤗lookin forward to nxt part update soon😊

Edited by CharmingAngel7 - 13 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Wonderfully built chapter
Loved it to the core :)

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mandy61

@mandy61

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

superb work just hate j i just hate her but the chap was really awesome loved it

by the way are u mistaken with the last line ???

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Singularity

@Singularity

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Thanks 4 the pm!!🤗 LOVE the way jungli billi Manyata handled J!!👏 Wish I was there 2 see bheegi billi J's face!!😆 Her expression must hav been like d one in d epi where Unnati held d candle near her!! PRICELESS!😃

Ughhh, I just hate that Aakash😡...but he has one excellent attribute⭐️..how does he manage to make us LOATHE him all the time we come across him, so effortlessly??❓ Manna padhega, usme kuch toh baat hai!!🤣

Loved ManVeer convo😉...but the last line got me confused😕...why did M tell UV that she hates him? My guess is that she's still too scared 2 reveal her true feelings, or UV's close proximity made all her neural connections go haywire!!😆 If he were that close 2 me, I sure would hav been tongue-tied, or even if any sound came from me, it would be all gibberish!😳

Edited by FireNIce - 13 years ago