FF:fantasies of the world tocome!! chap11.2 pg 87

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--milli--

@--milli--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

chap3

just missed out on it last time it was great update ohh thanx it was uday it was really well written loved the nokjhok bw them contsoon 😊

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--milli--

@--milli--

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

chap4

it was truely out of the world manveer in air 😍

then the song was beautiful is the same tune in background ????

it was beautifully written cont soon

and add me to your pm list 😊

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mandy61

@mandy61

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

great update truely loved it love in the air ohh youu why u had too stop it was going beautifully plz update next part soon now i cant wait 😛

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mandy61

@mandy61

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

ohh just forgot when are u updating guard of honour ????

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Singularity

@Singularity

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Totally loved it!! Your idea of having the song in the bg was pure genius!👏👏 At first I was shocked😲 at the song suddenly playing out of nowhere...but then I continued reading and found the lyrics of that song. I could totally feel the scene playing out in front of me!⭐️

P.S If it is possible to do so, could u PLEASE pm me when u update next?😊 It would save soo much of time not havin 2 search 4 the SS/FFs I read regularly!😃 I have my class X boards this year n, as drilled into my brain by my mom, have to follow a particular schedule...but I just can't, I'm that obsessed with this forum and ManVeer!😳

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showstealer

@showstealer

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

fabulos update tremendously written just loved it !!!

eid mubarak to u to 😃

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Swinipriya

@Hawa.Hawai

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Awesome update rocker.ughhh majnu ka aj name aya n kal majnu ajayega.anyways loved it yaar.Acont soon:)

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hamra

@rocker12

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7
Yay I m the 1st one!!! superb update haz loooveeed it i was wondering what he wants to show her i thought it may b some surprise he arranged for her bt he wanted her to win over her fear so sweet😳 sky diving part was really nicely written manveer in mid air togetha😍.. sweet manveer hug.. Rain dance sequence so nice.. btw which song is that? Ooo u stopped the update at sch a point cant wait for nxt update.. update soon thnx for update & pm🤗🤗
PS: new name of the FF is good 👍🏼
Eid Mubarak to u again🤗 hve lotz of fun & get lotz of eidii 😆

Take care

thanx dear glad u liked it 😃

yup i wanted something special and unique and mostly all the ideas that came through my mind were already been written up by much better writters than me

and though decided to use the skydiving one and yaa i stopped it becoz have to go meet some relatives who were here will even update tonight or tomorrow and yaa that song i s zindagi se from raaz 3

and thanx for ur beautiful comment😃

Edited by rocker12 - 13 years ago