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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Dae_drmer

tfs..

its nyc epi...
i am dreaming manyata in dat dress...๐Ÿ˜

PAKR LIA PARI TUJE AJJ MIL HI GAI TU
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
m's dress was lovely!!!!!!! uday to fida ho jayega total!!!!!!!!! waitng for 2day episde eagrly!!!!!!!! and uday teasing linesss were out of the wrld!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Loved it man LOVED it!! Thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ Although have to say it was a filler update because the actual dhamakas are happengin tomorrow ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰ This is exactly the reason why I love you so freaking much Ranju. Yes it was a filler update and I'm glad you said it out loud too because in this chapter, I basically wanted to show Jay's redemption track and a build up for the ManVeer date. I felt that all characters need to be given equal importance because DEK was not all about ManVeer only. Yes we are obsessed with the couple, but I didn't want to make it an overdose of mushy romance between them because ManVeer are not all about that. There romance is not mushy, it's hot ๐Ÿ˜‰ . So it's better if we keep the readers wanting more, instead of throwing more and more ManVeer scenes which might get boring after some time ๐Ÿ˜•

Oh man, Manyata is so cute that she's trying to impress UV adn yes there isnt a bigger shock than wearing a dress for him, that too such a black, hot sexy dress..adn UV is also in a black suit! YES! You chose my colour ๐Ÿ˜‰ Hahahahah I deliberately chose the color black for her, since it's a hot and sexy color but very graceful too. And I chose that dress for Manyata because the moment I saw it, I felt that it is perfect since it was sexy, but decent too at the same time ๐Ÿ˜Š . Lol how can I NOT make Uday wear black when I know that my friend loves him the most in it ๐Ÿ˜‰
You're going good with J's redemption ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ and Im sure if show didnt have to end so fast it would be like this. :) Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š . I really felt that Jay's redemption should be show simultaneously too since she is a very important character and I actually really like her before the CVs butchered her character and turned her into a psycho obsessed girl.

Without you my life has no meaning

My dreams have no reality

And my aims have no focus

You make me feel loved

You enrich my soul

You complete my life with your love

Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh, please give me the honor to grace myself with your presence tonight at 8:00 pm at the pool side gazebo at Starwood Hotel.

Yours and only yours,

Yuvraani Manyata.


Did you write that? Or even if you didnt the idea to include it in the letter was brilliant and its just soo damn adorabel adn cute! ๐Ÿ˜ I am going to admit, this wasn't entirely written by me ๐Ÿ˜ณ . Hahaha you caught me ๐Ÿ˜‰ . Well I had read something similar along the lines of this in various novels and stuff where the author describes the feeling of love, and you know how some stuff just gets stuck in your mind? Yea well that's what happened with me. So I added some of my own thoughts in it and merged the two. Glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜Š Starwood? ๐Ÿ˜† Hehe I will be the first to admit that I hate having to come up with hotel/club names. Nowadays I just go straight to google and search up typical names. ๐Ÿ˜† Hahahaha I hate coming up with names. I googled this too ๐Ÿ˜†


"Hmm so my Princess is in a romantic mood today. Not bad. I will definitely take advantage of that sweetheart" , smirked Uday. He kissed the note and left it on the table and went to take a quick shower.

And I cant wait for him to! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† Jeez, those kind of lines get us way too excited, we're such bad girls! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Ranjana at this point, I think the word "bad" would be an understatement ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

"Choti, agar ab tumne hamari taang kheenchi na to phir bhool jao Vijay banna se dobara milnay kay baray main. Choice is yours" , winked Uday. Unnati's face fell instantly.

๐Ÿคฃ This made me laugh out loud as I found it so unexpected! You go Uday! ๐Ÿ˜Ž Lol well Uday has to be unpredictable ๐Ÿ˜‰

"Manyata Bhai tum? Lagta hai aaj Jay ki tarhan tum bhi pant pehanna bhool gai ho" , Vijay teased Manyata.

Hahahhaa!! Loved Vijay bhai-M scene! Oh man, this update was so similar to the show DEK and seriously brilliant job with keeping it so consistent! Hayeee I loved their bond in the show, which is why I just had to add this scene.

"Soch lo Princess, jitna zada wait kerwaogi, utni he penalty paray gi. Ab yeh mat poochna kay kaisay" , flirted Uday.

Again I shouldnt be so excited and definitely not be blushing! โ˜บ๏ธ I think it's safe to blush ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†


Precap: His fingers travelled on her back brushing her exposed skin every now and then in search for it's destination. He finally found it and started slowly undoing the zipper of her dress. She clutched his shirt tightly waiting nervously for the moment as her heart skipped a beat.

Hawww!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Are they married yet? ๐Ÿ˜† OKay I joke, whatever you do with them, I honestly cant wait to read it! Hahahahaha no ๐Ÿคฃ . But who cares? ๐Ÿ˜› . Lol. Don't worry, they won't do anything that they shouldn't before getting married ๐Ÿ˜‰
Once again AMAZING job, I really loved it and am even more excited for tomorrow and I seriously cant wait for tomorrow to come!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thank you so much baby ๐Ÿค—



Thanks a lot for such a beautiful comment Ranju ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Edited by fia21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Thanks a lot for the lovely comments guys ๐Ÿ˜Š
I have written today's episode too so stay tuned. I am sure you guys won't be disappointed.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

I'm soo sorry Marwa...because of my idiotness u had to face lots of problems...I'm really sorry for that...
Actually I should had checked my outbox...but I was quite sure that u had got the full epi...plus there was a lot of network problem yesterday...
I couldn't come online at night, so I did not see ur pms...!!! I know u had tried very much to contact me but I was unavailable...I'm really very very soory to u Marwa
And Sorry to all the readers...Sorry for the inconvenience created...I'm really a bad bachha๐Ÿ˜ญ

With regards n lots of Sorry
Ria
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Oye daku apology accepted as a reader. Yeah yesterday Marwa was really worried even sonu sent pm to u. Anyways it's ok daku
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jarin04

Oye daku apology accepted as a reader. Yeah yesterday Marwa was really worried even sonu sent pm to u. Anyways it's ok daku

Thanxx for accepting :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWW CHOTU BEHAN TOU TENSN MAT LAY๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: AKlover-16


I'm soo sorry Marwa...because of my idiotness u had to face lots of problems...I'm really sorry for that...
Actually I should had checked my outbox...but I was quite sure that u had got the full epi...plus there was a lot of network problem yesterday...
I couldn't come online at night, so I did not see ur pms...!!! I know u had tried very much to contact me but I was unavailable...I'm really very very soory to u Marwa
And Sorry to all the readers...Sorry for the inconvenience created...I'm really a bad bachha๐Ÿ˜ญ

With regards n lots of Sorry
Ria

Princess don't worry. It's not your fault.๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— We all love you.๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: fia21



Thanks a lot for such a beautiful comment Ranju ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Fia man..why are you so frikken adorable! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yea i know thats your line and you're thinking thats the last thing anyone would describe me as ๐Ÿ˜† But seriously I had to say that caz ur like making me smile so widely with your cute reply!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
In reference to your reply, here's my reply.
1. I am actually really happy that you made us sit on the edge of our chairs and wait for two reasons. First its more realistically like how actual daily soaps are like..you gotta make the episode good but hint that the next one will be even better to keep the readers hooked on which you did really well! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Second, you're right. And I follow this rule too - when there are a bit too mnay romantic scenes adn that too without the right climax and build-up, you dont get the same satifaction when you read it! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Hence that explained all the torture in my SS I make you guys go through even before putting in a kiss! ๐Ÿคฃ You have to value it! ๐Ÿ˜‰
2.Awww!! โ˜บ๏ธ Yea theres just something about the black on UV - makes him look even more smoking hot than he already is. Eeekk!! No joke I can feel my cheeks getting red just thinking about how he used to look in the initial episodes when he used to wear a lot of black shirts! โ˜บ๏ธ
3. Yes Im happy you focused on J. And rightfuly so as she was even in the beginning days always and important character and to the end I didnt even like ever thinking of her as the so-called vamp either because I always saw her as the jealous sister who was flawed because of the way she was brought up. I mean many times I think how different Manyata may hvae been (in a bad way) if she didnt get kidnapped. I mean angels like Unnati arent that common especially when you ended up getting every which thing that you put your finger on! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
4. Loved the letter..really happy you included it! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
5. Yup...we're really bad ๐Ÿ˜ณ Its all Uday's fault! ๐Ÿ˜ก
OKay now I have to totally run and read todays episode all over again caz it was so amazing and leave my comments on it! ๐Ÿ˜‰ But before that I have other annoying tasks to attend to so will be back but promise as soon as I can do them, youll have update and pm replies! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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