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Posted: 12 years ago
thankoo everyone 🤗 and sorry for the delay 😛 will update soon now...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

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very well written
the song merged in well with scenes
it was very emotional

this song is 1 of my favs and i was singing
along ( strictly only a bathroom singer)

cont soon

thanks 4 de PM

ps - sorry 4 de previous comment
it was supposed 2 b posted in Saira's ff but
dont know how it ended up here ?!!!

😆
thnxx dear
lolzz thts grtt
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no probzz

lol its ok 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

Anjie baby u seriously ROCK...!!!

This was a marvellous piece of writing...!!!! btw I had already read half of it...but when I read it again , it seemed like I'm reading it for the first time...
The concept of the story is really nice and as I had said u earlier, I always waited for a Heartbroken story of this sort...so thanxx for fulfilling my wishes
The song was perfect for the scene...I felt like I'm watching it...everything was infront of my eyes...
Now I'm really very eager to know about Manyata n Uday's past and the reason why Uday left her
P.S. : Update soon and thanxxx a ton for the pm...and ofcourse a BIG SORRY for the late comment🤗

frstly thanku fr the lambu post 😛
aww thnx a lott ria sis...glad u liked it 😳
lol then ur wait is over...i guess 😆 😳 will update soon...
aww no probzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gowri05

That was beauty!!!!

Loved it!! ty for pm!!
Btw who is the singer of the song!???

thnx gowri...😳
glad u liked it...no probz 😆
its avril lavigne
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot for all the comments and likes guys 🤗. i dint reply to all the comments because im already very late 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey everyone . This chapter might not be very good but from next chapter it will be better ...do read and comment if you are still interested in this ff...if not please let me know n i will stop writing it 😊

Manyata's home came first so they dropped her and went to meera's house next . Manyata pretended to go inside her house as the other two waited for her to go inside . She waldked inside the gate and waved a bye . They waved her back and drove away slowly .

Manyata stood there for some seconds and then went for a walk . She wanted to go somewhere...where she sould stay alone . She went to the nearby park . It was a very beautiful one . There was green grass everywhere , small bridges and a pond with fishes was made there too . It was looking beautiful as manyata walked in the park alone...no one at sight...this was what she really needed , sometime alone to think about whatever was happening . She needed to progress and forget about him .


She walked ...confused and lonely...and stared singing...







Vijay and Jay were waiting for Manyata since two hours . They were worried so decided to call sameer and ask him . jai called sameer...

Sameer ' hello

Jai ' hello sameer when will you all come back ? its already so late...

Sameer was shocked as he had dropped her at home an hour ago

Sami ' we will reach there in a few minutes...you don't worry...can i talk to vijay bhai for a minute ?

Jai ' ya sure...she called vb and gave him the phone

Vijay bhai ' sooo sami how was your date hun ?...he said teasingly

Sam ' vijay bhai not now...i have to talk to you about something very important

Vb understood that it was something very serious...

Sam ' vijay bhai i had dropped manyata 1 hour ago...i think she went somewhere alone...she wanted to be alone for sometime...vijay bhai im very worried now...dont tell anything to jay ...tell her anything and come outside...i'll come to pick you up and we will search for her...

VB ' okk...he stood there shocked . Jay ' " vijay bhai what happened ?"

VB ' "nothing jay...i got to go somewhere...i'll be late so you go to sleep " he tried to look calm but failed..

Jay knew he was hiding something " vijay bhai what is it ?"

VB "nothing...okk good night cya "

Jay came and stood in front of him "first tell "

Vb wasn't able to hide it and blurted everything out . Jay went running outside and ran towards her favourite park . 'she got to be there...im sure ' she thought.

Manyata sat on the bench lost . She stood up and started walking but suddenly stopped .

Manyata ' jay...i...

Manyata felt pain on her left cheek as jay slapped her . Both were in tears .

Jay ' " why manyatajiji why are you doing this ? you have made everyone else sad why are you doing this to youself and your own family ? you know everyone is so worried for you but you don't care about anyone . why can't you forget everything ? why cant you leave your past behind and move forward ? "

Manyata " i...i am sorry jay..."

Jay - " forget it " she said and ran towards the entrance .

Vijay bhai had followed Jay and seen everything . He came towards manyata .

VB ' " lets go home now " he said wiping her tears .

Manyata started walking with him . He stopped as his mobile rang . It was sameer .

VB ' " hello "

Sami ' " where are you VB . we have to search for her . "

VB ' " no need ...jay found her . sami you go home and sleep...you can talk to her tomorrow " he said understanding what he was going to say .

Sami sighed " okk ...good night "

VB "good night "

They kept the phone.

Manyata " vijay bhai i disturbed you all a lot na sorry about that..."

VB " its okk "

They reached home . Jay was in her room . Manyata wanted to talk to her but VB told her that she needed some time alone...

Jay thought about something and called Meera and told her everything which happened that day and told her about her plan.

Meera ' " jay are you sure it will work ? If it is so then i will talk to DS and sami tomorrow "

They said their byes and got ready to sleep .

Jay felt a bit better now and hoped that everything would go well .

Im the morning '

Meera and sami came to meet manyata today . Sami went in her room to talk to her while Meera went to meet DS .

In Manyata's room '

manyata was sitting on her bed and reading some book . Sami went to her and sat near her . She looked at him and started reading her book again not being able to face him . He took the book from her and kept it down .

Sami ' "manyata we need to talk "

Manyata looked downwards.. "im sorry sami i shouldn't have gone there at that time without telling anyone . "

Sami sighed . "please manyata don't do this...everyone becomes worried when you do these kinds of things . "

Manyata's eyes became teary . She had no explanation for yesterday .

Meera came inside the room and saw them talking . She went near sami and manyata and kept her hand on manyata's shoulder .

Meera " we are going..."

Sami and Manyata looked at Meera shocked .

Sami " what are you saying Meera ? going where ? "

Meera sighed " London "

Manyata " what but why ?"

Meera " because we all need a break...especially you manyata...we will complete our final year there "

Sami "okk so im coming too "

Manyata and Meera looked at him and both hugged him .

"Thanks sami " Meera said

Sami " huh do you think id leave you both alone so easily ? you have to try a lot harder " he said smirking

Meera punched him on his shoulder slightly "stop smirking stupid "

Sami looked at her and then smiled sweetly making a puppy face .

Meera "okk stop it . You both get ready ...our flight is tomorrow and we need to do a lot of shopping "

Manyata " but..."

Sami " no buts manu ...this time im with meera "

Meera smiled and said " now get ready...we are waiting downstairs.."


Jay - Unnati meeting 😆


Edited by Anjalika13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome dii 👏 👏 👏
Loved it to d core ❤️
OMG!!! I feel sad fr manyata 😭 y uday left her
would love to read further and do pm me wenver u update nxt 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome chapter anji very well written.... I felt bad for manyata. Let's. See how the story unfolds.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the concept and the storyline. brilliant, love jays character here, so caring and can feel manyata's pain. thank goodness 4 gr8 friends like sam and meera. update soon, wait 4 story 2 unfold.



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Posted: 12 years ago
omg really loved this chapter to gd oops j slapped manyata please update soon

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