Manveer FF ~death inside~ *note pg25 - 3May*

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

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very well written

the song merged in well with scenes

it was very emotional

this song is 1 of my favs and i was singing

along ( strictly only a bathroom singer)

cont soon

thanks 4 de PM

ps - sorry 4 de previous comment

it was supposed 2 b posted in Saira's ff but

dont know how it ended up here ?!!!

Edited by lilybabes - 13 years ago

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Riyu

@Devil.Gal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

wow anjie its awesome awesome awesome good work yar👏 do continue soon😍👍🏼

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anarox

@anarox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

awsome update anji
hope that maniyata will get his dream person soon😃
update soon
love you

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

woah this seriously rocked hey i have sent u a request to add in my buddy list...plz accept it and do pm me wen u update next part plz plz...

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

wow i just loved it this ff is totally different i feel sorry for manyata but i wonder y uday left manyata really waiting for the next part update soon and thanks for the pm

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--milli--

@--milli--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

nice one👍🏼

cont soon

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Killer

@.Killer.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Anjie baby u seriously ROCK...!!!

This was a marvellous piece of writing...!!!! btw I had already read half of it...but when I read it again , it seemed like I'm reading it for the first time...

The concept of the story is really nice and as I had said u earlier, I always waited for a Heartbroken story of this sort...so thanxx for fulfilling my wishes

The song was perfect for the scene...I felt like I'm watching it...everything was infront of my eyes...😍

Now I'm really very eager to know about Manyata n Uday's past and the reason why Uday left her

P.S. : Update soon and thanxxx a ton for the pm...and ofcourse a BIG SORRY for the late comment🤗

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

character sketch really nice good to see J in a positive really like it that way.. hmm manyata used to be a cheerful bubbly girl but changed as the fate chose to take someone else's side at that time sounds & uday left due to some prob brole her trust really interestin eager to know what would had heppened... haila griraj ko maar daala hehe😉😆.. hmm uday instructed unnati to keep her identity secret why would he do that.. interestin.. chappy1 fab.. it was really heart touching n emotional poor manyata really feel bad for her trying to look happy for her family so sweet.. like the sweet sister bonding manyata & J as loving sisters good... thn the walk to the park the song u chose fit so well really nicely chosen... loved the whole sequence nicely written👏... really felt for her.. "Someday she would be with him...cause that was her fate..." so right Fate & true love will bring em back togetha... really wanna know why uday left her...sorry for late comment & thnx for awesome update & pm🤗... lookin forward to nxt update.. update soon plz pm me when u do...
take care😊

Edited by CharmingAngel7 - 13 years ago

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757315

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: lilybabes
very well written
the song merged in well with the sword fight scenes
dining table scenes were too cute

Uday cooking for her was very sweet
their whole date was beautiful

i thought manveer wont return home whn M left for a hotel which was hours away
from de palace

wedding n8 was hawt!!!

precap

ohno wats gonna happen now
twist twist
i hope de scandal has nthng 2 do with M and UV s n8 @ de barn

eager for more
thanks 4 de PM

hey lily babes isn't this comment for my update of love comes again i think they has being a mistake because that is what i wrote the barn and hotel thing but anyway i am glad liked it loved the comment

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Ziva01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Hey anji awesome chapter ...very emotional ...bechari M 😭 she is trying her best to move on but her uncondiotional love for U is becoming a hurdle for her ...hope to know why UV leave her suddenly

plzzz jaldi update karona...waiting ...thxs for the pm anji🤗