MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: aliya666
loved it loved it loved it ...AWWW😳
navina awesome update ... Thank u 🤗
no words i really love manveer in your ff ... U are too kind, Aliya😃
uday is such a sweetheart ... Manyata is NO LESS 😉
thanx for pm ... You're Welcome 😊

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

updated my comment on page 109...

plz do read it...

thankyou😳

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

Hello Navina!!😃

i am so sorry for being late this time...actually i am badly stuck with my studies as half of the session is complete so loads of assignments and tests...God i hate them...i am gonna be active in some weeks as i am have half session exams...but will read all your updates!! ok now i will stop my chatar patar!😆

now coming to the update it was so so so so awesome aww...i just loved it to the core Thank God this one was also a complete ManVeer update...!

all the things were written so nicely! 👏

i loved the way manyata described uday...i too agree with her 10000% he is such a hawwtiiee yar! i keep on falling when i see him my vision goes blur my heart beats with the speed of light...ans so on!😆 but where did she actually stop THAT BIG FAT!!😛 ahunnn...!

so jay is a full to mad now! but that is what she deserves! manyata right i too feel sorry for her and that is the only thing i feel👍🏼 that scene was just so cute🤗 when she lying over him and caressing the scar...he marked her his right from childhood!😳

LOl manyata dear u found the right time to learn driving!😎 3 in the night...so she is having special driving classes from her husband😳 woops ye gari chalate chalate kia kr rahe hain dono!😆 wow LIVE PYAAR IN THE CAR!🤣 not bad i love it still!

navina it was an extra ordinary awesome, lovely, mind blowing, and manyata ki zuban ma rapchick type update! wohaaa precap is so interesting the NIGHT TO REMEMBER!!☺️ waiting for it eagerly

love u

😊

Zina

Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago

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huma

@huma12.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

i m sooo sooorrryyy niviii i read the day u updated but i forgot tooo commenttt itsss awsssmmm keep it up and update soonnn

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#835

Originally posted by: MsLuscious
OMG navinaa it was the cutest update ever! i loved every bit of it... 😃 it was a light romantic update which was penned down beautifully...

Manveer car scenes were beautiful😳 Your story is getting interesting with each update... one thing which is annoying me is kameena jakaash...😡 i don't want him to enter and ruin their happy married life but somewhere i know villains are necessary to spice up

the story so i would avoid his part...

...

Lol you know sometimes i feel like you yourself are

married because you always bring something very

refreshing and romantic... 😉

So you better dont hide it from

us if you are married? Or if you arent you should tell

me the source from where you get so epic ideas...😳

You better not say its your brain i will surely steal it

away from you😆

This was one of my favourites uptil now very welk written...👏👏👏👏

Thank You Sarah 🤗 . I'm so glad u felt it so!!!😳

The driving scene was very important , because Manyata NEEDED to know how to drive for the next chapter. ... But then things got a bit TOO HOT there☺️. Akash is a VITAL part of this story. I tried to delay his entry for as long as I could - BUT IT'S NOW TIME FOR HIS ARRIVAL😲!!

No Sarah - I am not married. Neither do I ever plan to marry😕. The "epic ideas" (as u put it) does come from my brain. I have an extremely OVER-ACTIVE IMAGINATION😈. Perhaps 1 day - I WILL BEQUEATH IT UNTO U IN MY WILL😆!

I appreciate your kind words & I love your comments,

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: puggyy

👍🏼 GREAT JOB !!!👏 👏 👏

Very cuteee update ❤️ 😳

Manveer scenes were awesome 👏

It was also emotional Uday writing will 🥱 , I felt it so real and got tears😭

Wow n climax was hot I guess😛 This time she will get pregnent for sure 😉😆

Thanx Anisha ⭐️. Manveer are ALWAYS awesome😉 ( ESPECIALLY WHEN I MAKE THEM "NAUGHTY" .) Awww

... SORRY Anisha - I didn't mean to make u cry

. If she didn't get pregnant there ... SHE WILL DEFINATELY BE AFTER THE NEXT CHAPTER .

🤗 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: anushruthi
BEAUTIFUL update Navina
i loved it

UV's special tuition vala idea

toh rapchick rapchandus tha

thanks 4 de PM

Thank you Anu 🤗 . Those kind of innovative ideas can only come for him😳. Welcome for the PM😊.

Originally posted by: huma12.
i m sooo sooorrryyy niviii i read the day u updated but i forgot tooo commenttt itsss awsssmmm keep it up and update soonnn

Please don't apologise Dear😲. I understand😃. Thanx a lot ⭐️. Next update will be weekend 😉.

🤗 🤗 .

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#838

😭 so so so sorry dear for the late comment

had exams so i couldn't read the update

loved the update especially the driving lessons

Princess - just sit on my lap ... then , you'll see. She got on his lap but continued protesting. Nobody teaches driving like this! Yeah well Princess - YOUR HUSBAND IS GIVING U SPECIAL TUITION.

this was my favorite scene

now its time u punish that stalker properly

death would be too small a punishment

pls pls punish him really bad or i wont read the story(just jocking😉)

pls pls update soon

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

res😉🤣

Originally posted by: vampire12345678
Res

Waiting!!!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira
updated my comment on page 109...plz do read it...thankyou😳

Thanx Nira😃.

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira
reserve🤗

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hey navina...🤗

its me... finally mai aa gayi...😆

m sorry for commenting late yaar but kya karein got busy with some stuff...

coming to ur update...

do i really need to tell u?????😕

tht the update was amazing nd awesum as always...

great 👍🏼 ,,,,,,u r a ⭐️ yaar...

i just love ur ss like hell,,,,,, i just keep waiting anxiously for u to update it as soon as posible which u post after literally tadpoying us very much😔😆

well i just love everything in ur chap,,,,frm the beg ill the very end it was just...AWESUM

specially all theese scenes...😉

Who could refuse that gorgeous face, dreamy eyes, perfect nose, high cheek bones and kissable lips? Oh do go on , Princess , he smirked. That perfectly sculpted body, sexy wash-board abs, bulging biceps , not to mention that big , fat ... ... Big , fat ... WHAT? Big, fat ego of yours,

man,,,this dialogue nd scne,,,,, u really took my breath away...😆

thn their romantic moment gt disturbed whn manyta saw that scar...aww...poor me...😆

thn this scene...i really liked it

What I don't understand is : Why were u interfering with me when u were out on a date with Jai? First of all Princess - I wasn't out on a date with Jai. Secondly - u intrigued me when we met at the beach, that's why when I saw u at the club - I just had to get to know u better. U didn't want to know me better ... u only wanted to get ME TO BED WITH U! Uday smirked. You're right Princess, & guess what : I EVENTUALLY DID!!!

nd thn i just really fell of my bed laughing crazily as soon as i read this sentence...🤣🤣🤣.

If Jai & i got married ... she might have been happy, but I ... I WOULD BE EITHER HAVING AN AFFAIR OR I WOULD BE IN THE ASYLUM.

thn came the most fav scene of mine of this update nd tht was whn UDAY thought of giving special tutions to his princes...myomyo my,,,, haaye tht was so ☺️ ...so romantic yaar...

nd this sentence of manyta literally killed me yaar ,,,,,,, i went completely☺️ reading it...

Uday - that better be your gun I feel against my behind. He leaned in towards her ear & whispered : So, IS THAT WHAT YOU'RE CALLING IT NOW?

haaayeee...☺️.

trust me navina,,,tht driving lesssons scene was really mindblowing yaar...it was great

,,,kaash even i could gt such handsum nd dashing tutor like uday who could teach me driving like tht...😉

never mind...vaise mine so called tutor is also not tht bad😉,,,he is also kindaa goodlooking☺️😉but uday se toh kam he hai...😆

newys...

wht i dont like in ur update was tht majnu spying on manveer nd tht too at very wrong timing...😡🤢 wth is his problem man,,,,is he sleep deprived or what...jab dekho manveer ke private moments ko live tv ki tarha dekhta rehta hai...😆

now i m really looking forward to read ur next chapter...as u said its gonna be very "HOT",,,,cant wait it yaar...

nd u better make it hot ok...like the chapter u posted "heaven nd hell"...tht was the most hottest update tht u had given uptil now ,

i m alreday having goosebumps thinking about tht scene...

but this time plz dont make majnu spy on manveer such intense , intimate nd personal moments yaar...

nd the rest of the update was MINDBLOIWNG"

love you navina🤗

fr giving us all such a wonderful ss to read nd

plz plz plz try to update next part soon

nd

yeah always remeber tht i can never get bored of ur story,,,i will always be interested in reading ur story till its last chapter as it has become one of the most fav story of mine...

ok

love u...🤗

Hey Nira 😊. No Dear - u are not late. At least u edited your comment before the next update😉.

Thanx for such kind words Nira. I said all along that I'll update once a week , THEN HOW CAN I BE TORMENTING YOU'LL

. AHA - u liked Manyata's description of Uday

... WHY AM I NOT SURPRISED???😉 Luckily Manyata saw that scar & stopped what she was doing ... otherwise u poor readers would have got another "purple" paragraph to read

!!!!

True ; "HE EVENTUALLY DID" ... because Yuvraaj UdayVeer Singh ALWAYS gets what he wants 😆.

Oh God Dear 😲 - I didn't mean to drop u off your bed ... JUST FOR SAFETY SAKE , A tip for u ; WHENEVER U ARE READING ANY OF MY UPDATES ... KEEP OFF THE BED 😈

!!!!