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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

Navina when r u going to update
pls pls pls say it is today pls eagerly waiting for the update pls

Actually Andy - I was supposed to update yesterday (SATURDAY) , but I got very ill and even now I am still suffering with a migraine and fever. I PROMISE to update as soon as I feel better.
I wonder 🤔 if u will still say:
eagerly waiting
... when I tell u that the chapter has 80% of Akash in it😈!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...


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<font size="3">A<font color="#0000ff">ctually Andy - I was supposed to update yesterday (SATURDAY) , but I got very ill and even now I am still suffering with a migraine and fever. I PROMISE to update as soon as I feel better.</font></font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">I wonder 🤔if u will still say:</font>


eagerly waiting


<font size="3"> ... <font color="#0000ff">w</font><font color="#0000ff">hen I tell u that the chapter has 80% of Akash in it😈!!!</font></font>


navina take ur time
hope that ur feeling better
am still eagerly waiting for the update
atleast looking forward for 20% akash free update
hope u punisg him well
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

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k sorry sorry navi for this super duper late reply
i am sorry navi
i am glad u did not update yesterday otherwise it would be a shame on me
but today u have to update because i am editing my comment yay
k coming back to the chapter it was super duper
i loved the dialogues
can i copy paste the whole thing lolzz😉
i loved the gun part 😉😛
hats off to ur imaginations
haha sarah thought u were married right??
see how naturally u write
this update was too good
but a small doubt is rising in my head i am trying to push it behind my head but then with each update the doubt just worsens
in the character sketch u said that there will be uday's duplicate
veer malik who will come in chapter 4
and in this update u said uday transferred all his property to manyata
so now navi r u planning to get uday killed and veer maillik comes in the lead
as u also wrote manveer children
that means it is not supposed to be manyata and udayveer
it can also be manyata and veer
as veer is there is both see the connection
and everything can not be coincidence
this is very well planned
uday's twin and aksh the villian entering at the same time
and uday trasfering all his property to manyata right before the bad guy comes in action
something looks very very fishy
so navi how do u like my analysis on ur future track 😉😉

YAY ... Saira edited her comment .
No need to apologise - I knew u had other (MORE IMPORTANT) commitments.
I didn't update yesterday 😭 ... U KNOW WHY!!!
Can't update today either😲 ... my arm is still very sore & my head aches.
I'm so happy that u loved it😳. Putting together their dialogues , makes my brain very tired 😔.
THANK U FOR NOT copying & pasting the entire update😃.
The "gun" part became TOO naughty ... even for me😆!!!
Sarah wanted to know whether I was married ...
WITH THE WAY MY BRAIN WORKS ... MY POOR HUSBAND WOULDN'T STAND A CHANCE😈.
Okay ... coming to your assumptions:
IT WAS VERY INTERESTING WHAT U THOUGHT UP!!!
I won't say that u are right OR WRONG,
... U need to be patient and watch me unfold this story.
Veer Mallik is Uday's look-alike. Manyata will marry him. She will have 3 kids... a daughter & then twin boys.
AND THAT'S ALL I'M TELLING U.
My current story has 6 sub-chapters left . I will start another book where the story will continue. Manyata & Veer's love-story will be in that😳!!!
So ... In the mean time ... FORGET ABOUT MY CHARACTER SKETCH!!! ... because I already forgot about it😆. I'm going to make some changes there - RIGHT NOW!!! , so it doesn't confuse anybody😉.
this is very well planned ... thanx for the compliment😆.
THANK U SAIRA ... FOR THIS WONDERFUL COMMENT!!!
🤗 🤗 .
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Actually Andy - I was supposed to update yesterday (SATURDAY) , but I got very ill and even now I am still suffering with a migraine and fever. I PROMISE to update as soon as I feel better.
I wonder 🤔 if u will still say:
eagerly waiting
... when I tell u that the chapter has 80% of Akash in it😈!!!


Navi baby..Take rest and update when u feel better. I was wondering🤔 as in why ur not updating.u generally do on weekends.

Even if Akash is there in 80% of it, chalega😆..atleast after that m sure in the next updtae he will be thrown out to 90%!!🤣
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesoem Update Navina

Sorry for commenting late..
aweee Romantic Update
Hayyee!! wat a Driving class ... super hot n Romantic <3

i hate tht AKASH fellow a*s.. ye Hamesha wrong timing par hi kyun spy karta hai ???Stalker kameena

soo should i connect this Driving class for the Coming updates ?
Over superb Update Navina.. cute romantic Scnes matched perfectly with the Dialogues.. big fat ago haha :P.. loved her Description for Uday

but Navina i hav a soft corner for J..
ek req karron ? J ko le aao.. i miss her.. but make her Grey not black..
i knw acanak nahi sudhregi woh dheere dheere thik hojayegi..

I Love J .. ;;)

ahan next update is a night to remember :P *naught naught?*

Oye saturday bhi chala gaya..

wen r u updating the Next Update ??
maien late cmnt kiya it dsnt mean u should delay ur Update :P (ahha kidding)

do cont soon
muuuah!



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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey navina was curious wen u gonna update? Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a


navina take ur time
hope that ur feeling better
am still eagerly waiting for the update
atleast looking forward for 20% akash free update
hope u punisg him well

Thank you Andy for those very kind words,
... U are already making me feel better😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: thejazzgal

Awesoem Update Navina


Sorry for commenting late..
aweee Romantic Update
Hayyee!! wat a Driving class ... super hot n Romantic <3

i hate tht AKASH fellow a*s.. ye Hamesha wrong timing par hi kyun spy karta hai ???Stalker kameena

soo should i connect this Driving class for the Coming updates ?
Over superb Update Navina.. cute romantic Scnes matched perfectly with the Dialogues.. big fat ago haha :P.. loved her Description for Uday

but Navina i hav a soft corner for J..
ek req karron ? J ko le aao.. i miss her.. but make her Grey not black..
i knw acanak nahi sudhregi woh dheere dheere thik hojayegi..

I Love J .. ;;)

ahan next update is a night to remember :P *naught naught?*

Oye saturday bhi chala gaya..

wen r u updating the Next Update ??
maien late cmnt kiya it dsnt mean u should delay ur Update :P (ahha kidding)

do cont soon
muuuah!



Thank u Dear 🤗 .
Actually I am late in updating the next part ... SO YOUR COMMENT IS NOT LATE (IT IS RIGHT ON TIME😃). Manyata is very fortunate to get a driving instructor like Uday😳 ... IT WAS BOUND TO BECOME ROMANTIC!!!! The driving lesson is very important especially for the next part!!!
We all HATE Akash😡 ... but he's a very important character in my story. BUT - don't worry ... he only has 3 more chapters left😈.
Big , fat 😳😉 (cough, cough, cough😆).
I only have 6 more chapters left for this story ... so there's not enough time for Jai to return (GOOD OR BAD) . SORRY TO DISSAPPOINT U😔.
Next update was SUPPOSED to be : A NIGHT TO REMEMBER!!!☺️. BUT - I just remembered that something more important has to be shown first😲. I know that Saturday has passed & I haven't updated😕 ... THAT'S BECAUSE I WAS VERY ILL DURING THE WEEKEND. I will post the next chapter on Tuesday @ mid-night.
THANX FOR THIS WONDERFUL COMMENT😳
🤗 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi


Navi baby..Take rest and update when u feel better. I was wondering🤔 as in why ur not updating.u generally do on weekends.

Even if Akash is there in 80% of it, chalega😆..atleast after that m sure in the next updtae he will be thrown out to 90%!!🤣

Thanx for the well-wishes Gargi. I felt terrible about not updating on Saturday especially after promising to do so.
Even if Akash is there in 80% of it, chalega😆... So glad u feel that way😳 & let's not forget that 20% will be MANVEER 😉!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Khawaunju

Hey navina was curious wen u gonna update? Update soon :)

Hey Anushka😊. I will post the next part on Tuesday ( mid-night ) , SO LET'S JUST SAY : when u wake up on Wednesday morning ... the update will be in !!!
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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