MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

BEAUTIFUL update Navina

i loved it

UV's special tuition vala idea

toh rapchick rapchandus tha

thanks 4 de PM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: mrs_kapoor
navi u r awesome writeramazing update👏

Thank you Ria .

I do appreciate it😳.

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: Futbol_queen
I know I haven't commented for a while, and so sorry about that, been catching up on reading all my favs! Loving everything!! Oh and Everyone calls me Gurr, sorry I didn't reply to earlier comment, just saw it now!

Oh no Dear ... No need for apologies.

Actually when u didn't reply to that comment ; I asked Saira - WHAT YOUR NAME WAS & she told me . (VERY NICE TO MEET YOU , GURR😉)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva
awesum loved it nd plzz dont s stop giving long updates ...

Okay - I will continue with the long updates. Don't complain if I start 2 bore u!

Originally posted by: zil1111
A really nice update manyata and udayveer are so cute

Yes Dear ... Manveer are cute ... & absolutely adorable😳!

Originally posted by: sirjee
Waooo superb specially driving part...plzzz continie soon

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Originally posted by: milhan
fab fab fab...plz don't do anything to uday it'll rip my heart out!!!

If anything happens to Uday ... it'll rip my heart out too 😭.

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
lovely update, can that person please stop watching them? Hope Udayveer stays safe

In the next chapter, u will come to know why "THAT PERSON" is always watching them😡.

Originally posted by: san.gar
nice updatet loved all the scenes with core of the heart.

You're TOO kind😳 .

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To : Vrinda , Zil1111 , Sonia , Milhan , Shonali & Sanya

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#825

reserve🤗

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hey navina...🤗

its me... finally mai aa gayi...😆

m sorry for commenting late yaar but kya karein got busy with some stuff...

coming to ur update...

do i really need to tell u?????😕

tht the update was amazing nd awesum as always...

great 👍🏼 ,,,,,,u r a ⭐️ yaar...

i just love ur ss like hell,,,,,, i just keep waiting anxiously for u to update it as soon as posible which u post after literally tadpoying us very much😔😆

well i just love everything in ur chap,,,,frm the beg ill the very end it was just...AWESUM

specially all theese scenes...😉

Who could refuse that gorgeous face, dreamy eyes, perfect nose, high cheek bones and kissable lips? Oh do go on , Princess , he smirked. That perfectly sculpted body, sexy wash-board abs, bulging biceps , not to mention that big , fat ... ... Big , fat ... WHAT? Big, fat ego of yours,

man,,,this dialogue nd scne,,,,, u really took my breath away...😆

thn their romantic moment gt disturbed whn manyta saw that scar...aww...poor me...😆

thn this scene...i really liked it

What I don't understand is : Why were u interfering with me when u were out on a date with Jai? First of all Princess - I wasn't out on a date with Jai. Secondly - u intrigued me when we met at the beach, that's why when I saw u at the club - I just had to get to know u better. U didn't want to know me better ... u only wanted to get ME TO BED WITH U! Uday smirked. You're right Princess, & guess what : I EVENTUALLY DID!!!

nd thn i just really fell of my bed laughing crazily as soon as i read this sentence...🤣🤣🤣.

If Jai & i got married ... she might have been happy, but I ... I WOULD BE EITHER HAVING AN AFFAIR OR I WOULD BE IN THE ASYLUM.

thn came the most fav scene of mine of this update nd tht was whn UDAY thought of giving special tutions to his princes...myomyo my,,,, haaye tht was so ☺️ ...so romantic yaar...

nd this sentence of manyta literally killed me yaar ,,,,,,, i went completely☺️ reading it...

Uday - that better be your gun I feel against my behind. He leaned in towards her ear & whispered : So, IS THAT WHAT YOU'RE CALLING IT NOW?

haaayeee...☺️.

trust me navina,,,tht driving lesssons scene was really mindblowing yaar...it was great

,,,kaash even i could gt such haindum nd dashing tutor like uday who could teach me driving like tht...😉

never mind...vaise mine so called tutor is also not tht bad😉,,,he is also kindaa goodlooking☺️😉but uday se toh kam he hai...😆

newys...

wht i dont like in ur update was tht majnu spying on manveer nd tht too at very wrong timing...😡🤢 wth is his problem man,,,,is he sleep deprived or what...jab dekho manveer ke private moments ko live tv ki tarha dekhta rehta hai...😆

now i m really looking forward to read ur next chapter...as u said its gonna be very "HOT",,,,cant wait it yaar...

nd u better make it hot ok...like the chapter u posted "heaven nd hell"...tht was the most hottest update tht u had given uptil now ,

i m alreday having goosebumps thinking about tht scene...

but this time plz dont make majnu spy on manveer such intense , intimate nd personal moments yaar...

nd the rest of the update was MINDBLOIWNG"

love you navina🤗

fr giving us all such a wonderful ss to read nd

plz plz plz try to update next part soon

yeah always remeber tht i can never get bored of ur story,,,i will always be interested in reading ur story till its last chapter as it has become one of the most fav story of mine...

love u...🤗

Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Navina that was an awesome chapter..and specially i love the way you give even the minute details of evrything..Last time the info of Horses and this time the driving lessons...And I loved the SPECIAL TUTIONS😳...WAISE KOI MUJHE IS TARHA SIKHATA TO MEI ABHI TAK SIKHCHUKI HOTI...

and the last art was emotional and scary...with that Akash looking at their love making..I feel like blowing him up with an atom bomb..Uske liye to woh bhi kam hota..😡..

Thanks for giving such an entertaining chapter and making my weekend delightful👏🤗

Thanx Gargi ⭐️ . I give TOO MANY details - that's when the chapter becomes so long ... But if u enjoyed it ; THEN I'M HAPPY😃. Hum sab ke nasseeb mein Uday jaisa teacher nahi hein😔.

Atom-bomb on Akash😲 ... Gargi Dear - u are a very violent person!!!😈

Thank you for the lovely comment 🤗 🤗

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#827

Originally posted by: sweetshab
awesome update navina!

I love it when princey gets childish and stubborn *winkkii*
Hmm yuvrani manyata's spl driving lessons :P
Loved it

Cont soon :)

Thanx Shab⭐️.

When our Prince gets into 1 of his moods ... IT'S TOO CUTE😳!!!

Don't u wish , U WERE IN HER PLACE😉.

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#828

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx
Gr8 job navina di 👍🏼
Yuvraani manyata k driving lessons toh rapchik the 🤣
Loved the update❤️
Thanxx fr pm di

Thanx Sweety⭐️.

Haan nai toh!!!! Waise, asli instructor to main hi hoon😆.

😳😳😳

Welcome for the PM😊.

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#829

Originally posted by: -Tannu-
lovely update

aww cute ManVeer... <3

cont soon :)

Thank u Dear 🤗

Originally posted by: psp.pari
awesome, loved it
continue soon

Thank You 🤗

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: pia.raha
wowww,aisa rmntic drving tuitions aj tak kisi ne bhi nehi paya hogaa,veryy much rmnticc and intrsting!!!!! udayy,u r veryy naughtyy!!!!!! and i love their romnce!!!!!! uuff yeee stalker kaun hai,peeche pada hai!!!!!!! hmmm will be waitng for ur next update!!!!!!!😊

Pia ... aisi romantic driving lessons sirf mere SS mein milegi 😉!!!! he is mischievious - BUT WE LOVE HIM LIKE THAT❤️!!!! 😳😳😳😳😳!!!! Stalker bohot jald saamne ayenge😡!!!! Next update - Saturday!!!!

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