MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#811

OMG navinaa it was the cutest update ever!i loved every bit of it... 😃it was a light romantic update which was penned down beautifully...

Manveer car scenes were beautiful😳 Your story is getting interesting with each update...one thing which is annoying me is kameena jakaash...😡i don't want him to enter and ruin their happy married lifebut somewhere i know villains are necessary to spice up

the story so i would avoid his part...
...
Lol you know sometimes i feel like you yourself are

married because you always bring something very

refreshing and romantic... 😉
So you better dont hide it from

us if you are married? Or if you arent you should tell

me the source from where you get so epic ideas...😳

You better not say its your brain i will surely steal it

away from you😆

This was one of my favourites uptil now very welk written...👏👏👏👏

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Riyu

@Devil.Gal

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#812

navi u r awesome writeramazing update👏

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puggyy

@puggyy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#813

👍🏼 GREAT JOB !!!👏 👏 👏

Very cuteee update ❤️ 😳

Manveer scenes were awesome 👏

It was also emotional Uday writing will 🥱 , I felt it so real and got tears😭

Wow n climax was hot I guess😛 This time she will get pregnent for sure 😉😆

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#814

comment edited on page 105😊

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#815

wowww,aisa rmntic drving tuitions aj tak kisi ne bhi nehi paya hogaa,veryy much rmnticc and intrsting!!!!! udayy,u r veryy naughtyy!!!!!! and i love their romnce!!!!!! uuff yeee stalker kaun hai,peeche pada hai!!!!!!! hmmm will be waitng for ur next update!!!!!!!😊

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@.maleficent.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#816

loved it loved it loved it
navina awesome update
no words i really love manveer in your ff
uday is such a sweetheart
thanx for pm

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sonia

@sirjee

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#817

Waooo superb specially driving part...plzzz continie soon

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#818

Originally posted by: fia21
Another fabulous update. Gosh I just keep falling in love with this SS over and over again. Special driving lessons by Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh. I bet every girl would want to have one 😆 . Both Uda and Manyata have evolved so much as a husband and a wife in their relationship. And I am loving the way you're portraying that. Amazing chapter Navina. Update the next part soon!

Thank you Fia . I would've loved to have tuitions by Yuvraaj UdayVeer Singh😳 , unfortunately I had a very khadoos teacher🤢 (at the driving-school) - who constantly screamed at me😭 ... up to this day I still wonder how I actually managed to learn driving from him😕.

Thanx for the compliment. I'll probably update on Saturday!

🤗 🤗

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#819

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll
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Thanx 4 informing me😃

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll
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hey navina loved d chapter..

Of-course! Who could refuse that gorgeous face, dreamy eyes, perfect nose, high cheek bones and kissable lips? 😳😳

That perfectly sculpted body, sexy wash-board abs, bulging biceps , not to mention that big , fat .. 🤣🤣🤣 poor uday he got shocked..

uday getting irritated n manyata trying to seduce him was so funny..

U didn't want to know me better ... u only wanted to get ME TO BED WITH U! Uday smirked. You're right Princess, & guess what : I EVENTUALLY DID!!! Lol

I WOULD BE EITHER HAVING AN AFFAIR OR I WOULD BE IN THE ASYLUM.🤣🤣

lol... this is so true.. poor uday got saved...

YEP! Clutch is most important. 🤣🤣
Poor uday.. but it was nice he soon managed to find a way to teach his wife..
HUSBAND IS GIVING U SPECIAL TUITION.☺️☺️

Uday - that better be your gun I feel against my behind. He leaned in towards her ear & whispered : So, IS THAT WHAT YOU'RE CALLING IT NOW?

🤣 ROTFWL 🤣

Next update : A NIGHT TO REMEMBER ☺️☺️☺️

Cant wait.. update soon pls😊

Hey SOW ⭐️ ... I'm so happy that u loved it

Uday did get stunned , BUT DID YOU??? Lucky, Manyata covered that up very well.

Had to make the scene in the study a bit humurous. Then only can it be called a masaledaar update😉!

Yeah ... he eventually did!!! ... because Yuvraaj UdayVeer Singh always gets his way.

If he married Jai - the show's name would've been : DEKHA EK NIGHTMARE!!!😡

She's so lucky to get a lesson like that , from a guy like that

. I would kill to be in her position🤢 !!! (I'm sure all the girls here would agree with me).

The line about the "gun" was MY PERSONAL FAVOURITE

😉!!!

Next update ... is adult-natured!!!

DO U STILL SAY : cant wait.. update soon pls😊.

Thanx for such awesome comment 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#820

Originally posted by: swetsurati
Navi dear that was fabulous,amzing,awsomeee,mindblasting update...manyata describe uday's body very well...hawww...what did she mean by a big fat...opppsss...jai ho guruji uday ki car driving ki kya class li hai wah wah...hats off...mujhe aisi tution chahiye but teacher uday hona chahiye...love manveer convo between...last scene was awsomeee...awww...uday is sweet apni sari property manyataa ke naam kardi...urghhh...kamina majnu halkat veda yeda...logo ke bed room me tak jak karta rehata hai shameless...ab firse iss kamine ka moniya jaap suru ho jayega...egarly waiting for next part...update soon thanx for PM.

Thanx Sweta for all 4 compliments⭐️. Her description was very accurate. Do I really have to tell u what she meant by "big ,fat ..." ??? 😈 . Guruji & all ...HUH? ... Actually Dear - U AIN'T SEEN NOTHING YET!!!! 😉 (haan nai toh). Unfortunately not all of us are lucky enough to get driving lessons like that , from a person like that 😔.

Uday is making sure that his wife & child will never be short of anything - that's why he has rewritten his will.

You better get used to Majnu 😡 being around - because he will make his appearance in the next chapter.

Welcome for the PM😊.

Thank u for the sweet comments 🤗 .