MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 61

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Hey Navina 🤗, the update was so amazing and eventful, loved it 👏👏. It had everything in it, hot manveer romance thanks to Manyata's baby making andolan😆, cute manveer nok-jhok on the foal naming ceremony😉😳😳, and dhamakerdar climax with my prince getting shot 😒


The whole climax scene was so magnificently articulated👏, they way he got shot, and still was only bothered about Manyata's safety was so AWWW 😳. And uv knows to fly too 😳😳😳I know mera hero mar raha hai, but I'm like a pathetic maniac still drooling on him , but kya karo yaar tumahar UV hai hi aisa.

Now Navina, who was that bas**** who first had to guts to spouil our manveer's private moment and see it😡, and secondly, he planned and shot the prince of Jaighad😲😲. I have a feeling it was Aryan urff that Akash/Pakash 🤢.

Please save my prince .


Was an amazing update Navina👍🏼, but felt it was smaller than ur other updates,thanks for the PM

Thanx Chitra ⭐️ . I'm so glad u loved it . I really thought my life would be in danger after that chapter. Hey - I actually didn't think of it as an andolan😕; But u are absolutely right!!! The christening of the horse was quite cute ( if I do say so myself😳😆 ) . Last part was action-packed ... maybe a bit too much.
Thank u for saying that - I really appreciate it. Uday is a true hero - always concerned for the next person. I even turned him into a pilot ... NOW HE IS THE PERFECT MAN .😉 ( not that he wasn't before this 😳 ) ... Chitra, I know exactly what u mean - even I fell in love with him❤️ ,all over again☺️.
Well my Dear, there is only 1 villain 🤢in my SS - & your guess is RIGHT 👏.
Okay - if you're pleading so much - I'LL SAVE HIM!!!
Yep ( right again ) - the update was a bit shorter than my usual.
Welcome for the PM😊.
THANX FOR SUCH AN AWESOME COMMENT 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hey Sarah ... Had to put in a twist, something which nobody would've expected. ( because I had to make sure that all my readers will come back for the next part😆😉).
I am not evil Dear - I'm not gonna let him die. I ❤️ him as much as all the girls here love him.
Thanx for the lovely compliment 🤗.
Will TRY to update soon⭐️.

lol navi trust me if you didnt updated fast i wont mind it cox i now how much time this UPDATE THING consumes😆 i can feel your pain
it
screws your head completely😉
but still ill say update as soon as you can lol
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved reading your SS..read all the chapters at a stretch..you are great in making plots.. waiting to see what will happen next. Pls update soon and PM me if possible.
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Posted: 12 years ago
comment reached on pg 75😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
navina plsss update soon plsss...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

lol navi trust me if you didnt updated fast i wont mind it cox i now how much time this UPDATE THING consumes😆 i can feel your pain
it
screws your head completely😉

but still ill say update as soon as you can lol🤗

Lo alll writers are in one team to not to give updates soon

Sarah and navi...me still here...don't even think about late updates...

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi. your action sequel was awesome never read action sequel as good as this one it reminds of shoot-out at lokhandwala. damn thrilling😳👍🏼
please pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Awsomeee...and scary update navi dear...hume toh title dekhate hi dar lagane laga tha...lolzzz...manyata is too much kya kya naam suggest kiye...chamiya and chammakchallo...
Hawww...woh kamina ok ntha jo manveer ko dekh rha tha?hum toh fir bhi padh rahe the...kamina kutta kahin kaa my poor uday...kahin ye sab majnu ka karnama toh nahi hai?ush majnu ki toh me...update soon and thanx for PM.

Thanx Sweta
U are right the title came out very scary - especially with the blood dripping. Awww - give Manyata a break ; this was the first time she had to name a horse😆 .
Kamina is YOU KNOW WHO😡 . He was watching them - BUT, WHY WERE U READING😲??? Didn't u say u are a shareef child 😳 . Don't worry about Uday or Akash - I'll take care of them in my way😉😈.
Next update - this weekend.
Welcome for the PM😊
THANX 4 COMMENTING 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

comment reached on pg 75😉

... Finally😆

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

res😉

So here I come...lollzz😛

Terrific and fantastic update👏👏

full on romantic and action packed with a touching end scene...mind blowind navi⭐️

hmmm so start was very romantic and too cute..😉☺️

Manyata's antics I found very funny yaar...donno why...lolzzz😉😆😆

and the action part...you wrote it beautifully...I mean the bang thing...I literally like visualize the scene with that sound...👍🏼

but UV is indeed a brave and strong man...can bear any pain when it comes to save his lady love😳

Navi you ended on such a scene that I literally can't stop thinking about whats gonna happen now...

Whats gonna happen now????🤔 ...lolzzz

gotta have update soon...I am waiting impatiently

and thanx for the pm deary...love ya🤗🤗

Thanx Rubaa - for so many compliments😃. I tried to put in everything : a little bit of romance , a bit of nok-jhok, a drop of comedy and finally some violence - Really glad all enjoyed it.
Uday will do anything to protect Manyata Embarrassed - here too, he risked his life in trying to get her to safety - He is a TRUE HERO!!!Day Dreaming.
Well, as for what's gonna happen next - u need to stay tuned 😉. I think the next update will be weekend - BUT I CAN'T PROMISE ANYTHING!!!
Welcome for the PM😊.
Love U 2 Dear 🤗 ... THANX 4 COMMENTING 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aliya666

navina it was sgreat update loved it awesome ... THANK U!!!

great update ... Thanx a lot.

love manyata and uday ... Me too , me too😳

so uday junior is on his way i guess so ... It might be Manyata junior😉

but uday got shot thats terrible ... Yeah - that's so sad😭😭😭

hope everything will be ok and uday will be fine ... He's STRONG - he'll survive

and he get its culprit soon ... Hmmm - I hope so too / LET'S SEE!!!

loved the update ... thank u , Dear😃

thanx for pm and ... U are Welcome😊

cont soon ... I will 😉

THANX 4 COMMENTING ALIYA 🤗

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