MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 26

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

waiting waiting waiting waiting

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome and lovely beautifully written i am glad the precap turned out to be nice

and not the three some i accepted🤣

i loved how u shortened things and did not drag them alot

please update soon and thanks for the pm

actually i should please update on my birthday😆 and alot of manveer doing what u know😉

i loved the dialogues and especially the manyata climbing the stairs slowly that was very original i loved manyata and her dialogues

please update soon i cant really wait

u know how greedy i am when it comes to manveer😆

at the end it was a lovely chapter😃

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Navi dear plzzz...update fast.

Originally posted by: swetsurati

wowww...woww...woowww...awsome, mind blowing, gr8 update...manveer scene was very nice...love that scene when uday saiid...

Please Princess, let me in. Besides...I've already seen everything anyway, he smirked. Uday- why don't u tell it louder- I'm sure some parts of India still didn't hear u.

awww...manveer eye-lock scene was sooo...romentic...

just love unnati and manyata scene...

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!!!, she exclaimed. Manyata stared at her in confusion. When Unnati finally calmed down, she whispered to Manyata: Bhabhisa' , Is that a HICKEY on your neck?

urghhh...that J is sooo...uday pe line marne ka ek chance nahi chhodti...

and last scene...jsut superb

No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked...now enough of my bakwas waise mera bas chale toh me comment me puri story hi likh dalun...

.love it...he navi dear ur a great writter...keep it up dear...plzzz...update soon...thanx for PM.

Originally posted by: pia.raha

Jaldi update karo na,wait nehi ho raha hai!!!!!!! okkay,on dis part of ur update,manyata in udays arms,soo lovelyy!!!!!!! m taking uday on a date,howw sweet,m bhi rajwade hai!!!!!!! and the part where uday tld her dat he has already seen everythng and m's answer,i was laughing cntinuosly!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: pia.raha

muaahhh to m!!!!!!!! thank god m ne uday ko drnk karne se bacha liya,akhir patn hi kaam aayaa!!!!!! andd the alstt part wa sbst uday saying dat 2gorgeous grls fighting over and him,and then saying when and where!!!!!!!! oh godd i fainted!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

it was superb Navina!! thank god J ke plans fail hogaye...please update soon...can't wait for the next part...:)

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

hey lovely update.. the precap was scary but d update was different frm wat i expected..
ur promo was a very good edit.. 👏 continue soon😊😊