MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Jaldi update karo na,wait nehi ho raha hai!!!!!!! okkay,on dis part of ur update,manyata in udays arms,soo lovelyy!!!!!!! m taking uday on a date,howw sweet,m bhi rajwade hai!!!!!!! and the part where uday tld her dat he has already seen everythng and m's answer,i was laughing cntinuosly!!!!!!!!

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

muaahhh to m!!!!!!!! thank god m ne uday ko drnk karne se bacha liya,akhir patn hi kaam aayaa!!!!!! andd the alstt part wa sbst uday saying dat 2gorgeous grls fighting over and him,and then saying when and where!!!!!!!! oh godd i fainted!!!!!!!!!!!😊

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

it was superb Navina!! thank god J ke plans fail hogaye...please update soon...can't wait for the next part...:)

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

awesome and lovely beautifully written i am glad the precap turned out to be nice

and not the three some i accepted🤣

i loved how u shortened things and did not drag them alot

please update soon and thanks for the pm

actually i should please update on my birthday😆 and alot of manveer doing what u know😉

i loved the dialogues and especially the manyata climbing the stairs slowly that was very original i loved manyata and her dialogues

please update soon i cant really wait

u know how greedy i am when it comes to manveer😆

at the end it was a lovely chapter😃

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Lovely update! Yeh J kabhi nahi sudhregi!😡 And thanks for the pm.

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

wowww...woww...woowww...awsome, mind blowing, gr8 update...manveer scene was very nice...love that scene when uday saiid...

Please Princess, let me in. Besides...I've already seen everything anyway, he smirked. Uday- why don't u tell it louder- I'm sure some parts of India still didn't hear u.

awww...manveer eye-lock scene was sooo...romentic...

just love unnati and manyata scene...

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!!!, she exclaimed. Manyata stared at her in confusion. When Unnati finally calmed down, she whispered to Manyata: Bhabhisa' , Is that a HICKEY on your neck?

urghhh...that J is sooo...uday pe line marne ka ek chance nahi chhodti...

and last scene...jsut superb

No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked...now enough of my bakwas waise mera bas chale toh me comment me puri story hi likh dalun...

.love it...he navi dear ur a great writter...keep it up dear...plzzz...update soon...thanx for PM.

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Singularity

@Singularity

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Res..will comment on both 2.1 and 2.2 after I've finished preparing for my exams...I'm really sorry for not commenting even though you've been such a sweetie and have regularly sent me pms...I hope you don't mind?

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

awww...last part was really sweet yar...

The party was ruined. Unnati took leave of the couple. Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
very very well written yar...

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#249

awesome update navina!!

Manyata shared her happiness with UV :D
Aww UV is so cute and respects elders

Party was entertaining *winkkii*

Cont soon

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#250

Fabulous update!! and OMG Jai is such a despo!
Fighting with the wife on why she slept with her husband while she wanted to get him drugged and in bed with her... DESPERATE!!

A very nice update... and yup Uday had a great b'day... 2 gals fighting over him... what more can a guy want?😆

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