MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 113

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsome update dear. its was so emotional😊

sorry couldn't comment earlier as i was so tired that i felt asleep
got up some time back and the first thing that i did was read your ss
then i typed a reply in my phone and then it didn't get posted so iam trying with my laptop
enough of my nonsence
the update was sooo emotional
the scene wre udays will was read and manyats emotions was so touching
the way she sat in udays study and remembered him😭
why did you bring akash mother here?😡 uday may be kind but
i am just like manyata i just cannot tolerate akash or his parents
i loved the scene were manyata gave sound scolding to that maharaj
i couldnt continue to read the sub chapter as i was so sad
but i did the memories of manyata made me cry literally- her wedding saree , his gifts etc
the cd scene were uday tells that Hey Princess - Hi Beautiful. If you're watching this - it means I'm not here anymore.
it was so heart breaking
the attitude of the media persons irritrted me . how could they think they could make money taking the pic of the young widow
since you had already told that the update would be emotinal i was prepared for it but i never ever expected she would commit suicide
but iam sure she will survive as you need her in book 2
do start book 2 soon
thanks for the pm and sorry for boring you with my comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
Navi... Soo sad and tragic! U made me cry:-( Its very cruel to all of us to read manveer story ending like this... But then I saw ur comment of book 2. I hope you are continuing that from where you left off in this book.

Pls continue and start ur book 2 soon... Like right now!

I really liked the way you tied up all the loose ends.. Unnati n yudaveer, murari out of jail and that pakaash mother as well.

Pls let book 2 be continuation of this book.. Else it will be a heart wrenching. Pls let uday be back and manyata be fine. Pls pls pls pls!

Adored your story! My fav!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Navina i don't have words to explain how iam feeling right now...😭God it ws so so so heart wrenching update... my eyes are literally teary...i never thought i would ever say this but for the first time your writing maked me really sad...I am very sentimental i can never read or listen sad stories cox i can't digest it😕This update aas sad but written PERFECTLY trust me no body could have done justice with it except you... Man every single line maked my heart beat slow... The way you explained to which extent manyata misses her soul mate was remarkable...but the most emotional scenes were the study one where she touches everything which uday touched n the suicide scene was ahhh... I donno when will uday be back but this update was a well written one... Ur amazing writer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no...poor maanveer...please continue with book 2 soon yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
drip drip drip ...and my comment will continue 😭

Now my UV will come in all new avatar 😎

and M be ready to swoon at his first look and then fir a new love story...drip drip drip
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg it was so sad I really hoped that uday is gunna cum back please bring manveer back
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Posted: 12 years ago
really loved it really loved it :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all, congrats for completing book 1. Start book 2 soon please. And please bring uday back. It's really a very lovely story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
no no no u cant do this pls bring back manveer..bda emitonal update tha..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved, loved, loved the update!! Can't wait to read the next part so do continue soon n thanks for the pm :))

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