MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1111

Res 😊
Edited 😉
Navi di u made me cry 😭 Dat ws so damn emotional 😭
Poor manyata ifeel sad fr her 😭
Awe dat first kiss scene ws so cute 😃
And the disc 😲 Uday already knew dat aryan ws behind all this and dat heis going to die 😲
W*F this is so not done uday manyata alag nhi ho skte
Or ye akash ki family kamino ko abhi bhi paise chahiye
i thout manyata would be preggy!!! 😉
And navi di ye galat baat hai i just said ki hero kbhi nhi marta or apko lga ki mai nhi chahti ki uday vapas aaye 😔
Manyata yudaveer ki kya jhaand kri dat part ws awesome 😆
It ws an awesome,superb,minblowing,Emotional,phenomenal,fantaboulasly fantastical update 👍🏼
love uh navi di🤗

Edited by Sanarasheedroxx - 12 years ago

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puggyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1112

I cried like hell 😭 😭 😭

Pls navi don't kill 😭

In next thread continue it ...get uday back

I expected MANAYTAH to be pregnent atleast ...

Pls atleast give her hope to live ...if she is pregnent she atleast feels happy I think ...that she has udays child

Wat must have happened to UADY ???

Pls dear I want happy manveer ...3 updates were fully tragic ...not anymore 😭

Am addicted to ur ff ...,

Pls baby try to get uday back soon ...in next update ...

I can't wait pls update in 3 days

Plsss

Am going mad navi

Plsss

Plsss update

Uday back

I want UADY back soon 😭

I felt as if I lost my boyfriend ...(touch wood ) aft reading ur uodateb

That childhood pic literally made me cry

I got reminded of my pic

Don't kill MANAYATH

Naviii

Am going mad literally

Help me ...I want ur update in 3 days pls

Manveer back

Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago

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huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1113

awsssmmm niviii its tooo emotinol

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puggyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1114

I know there is story ahead about manveer

I have rechecked ur index

Verr Malik entry n stuff

Oh my god ..ur killing me navi

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Sonali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1115

that was so sad please save Manyata and bring Udayveer back!

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malikmehreen95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1116

awww..i started crying :'(
plz make it nightmare of manyata..and start their happy life plz

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1117

Originally posted by: huma12.
awsssmmm niviii its tooo emotinol

Thanx Huma 🤗 .

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
that was so sad please save Manyata and bring Udayveer back!

To see if Manyata gets saved ... u have to wait for BOOK 2.

Uday WILL be back ... but not so soon😕.

Originally posted by: malikmehreen95
awww..i started crying :'(
plz make it nightmare of manyata..and start their happy life plz

I also started crying while writing it.

Sorry Dear - it's not a nightmare ... everything is REAL.

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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757315

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1118

K navi I read the update
And I finished reading and sameer came in
And I hugged him and creid actually I am still in his embrace tears flowing my eyes
He is right here and I am crying and his consoling me and I am commenting
Btw he says HI
K coming to the update it is awesome super duper emotional
If I was not smart enough to get a rough idea about the plot
Then ur inboz would have being flooded
U and nira just make me cry
I look like an emtional fool infront my boyfreind because of u
Lol u write so beautufully
U can write everything
Hats offf
This update was awesome
Please I want the next update super soon
U rock
And loved the update
Sorry can't like I am using my phone
K bye can't write more of my nonsense sameer is here and he is seeeing me crying
U rock hats off
The update was FANTABLOUS and AWESOME

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