OS-Until My heart stops Beating Part-2 updated

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Hello Mere pyaare forumwaasiyon'😊Im Shivani..not many people know me, since I have never made a post before. The thing is im a Huge Huge ManVeer Fan and I couldn't stop myself but write this OS. Read on and tell me how it is..😊

This OS starts from the time when Manyata went away from her wedding at the last moment. That day while going with Jagat Manyata was thinking to herself:" yeh bhagkar shaadi karne ka plan toh J ne mujhe kal hi bataa diya tha phir mera is ghar ko chodkar jaane ka mann kyon nahi kar raha?

Aakhir kyon aise lag rahaa hai ki mein koi keemthi cheez peeche chod kar jaa rahi hu?

Kyon ? Mera bohot bada khwab aaj poora hone jarahaa hai par mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai jaise me bohot badi galati karne ja rahi hu?"

She was shaken out of her thoughts when Jagat said "Manyata chalna nahi hai kya? Akash is waiting for u at the temple'kahi tumne last moment pe irada toh.."

she didn't let him complete d sentence," chalo jaldi der ho rahi hai'"

When they reached the car outside weather was very gloomy. It looked like a huge storm was on its way, kahi yeh aane waale khatre ka koi nishan toh nahi she thought then she reprimanded herself saying "nahi nahi mujhe apni aanewali life ke bare me sochna chahiye afterall in a few hours I'll be married to the person whom I love the most."

But her self talk failed to lift her mood. she didn't know why but she felt like crying'in the backseat of the car she closed her eyes for a moment so that she could imagine the future she was going to have with the man she loved,

in her imagination their marriage was already over and now she was carrying his baby, the due date came and she delivered twins, one boy and a girl, in the hospital he came near the crib, to tease him she said "dekho na uday tumhara beta bilkul tum pe gaya hai, apni maa se toh'"

Wait a second did she just say UDAY???

Nooo''.thats not possible'.nahi...

she opened her eyes just then Jagat stopped the car, she said "kya hua gaadi kyon rok di, koi problem hai kya?" He said with a little surprise in his voice, "Manyata jaldi se uthro, Mandir aa gaya!",

she hurriedly got down adjusting her heavy lehenga n followed Jagat..It was a big temple with long series of stairs'as soon as she started climbing the stairs some strange kind of peace seemed to overcome her..she didn't know how but she felt whatever wrong step she was about to take had been corrected now..she felt like she had reached a place where there were no worries, no fights, nothing could go wrong in her life now..she was surprised at her own state of mind..she was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realize they had climbed all the way up'the sight over there brought a lump in her throat. Her groom was standing there waiting for her...he was dressed in a sherwani only fit for royals, the sehra he had worn seemed to cover his entire face'his face was hidden behind long veil of flowers. Today something was different about him she felt, he looked different yet so familiar'she couldn't pinpoint what exactly was different today..she was lost in her thoughts when Panditji said" Jajman jaldi keejiye, mahurat nikla jaa raha hai.."

So she came forward and they started the Jai mala ceremony..then the other rituals took place, atlast Panditji said "ab aap dono pheron ke liye khade ho jaayiye". Usually it's the bride's sister or grooms sister who ties the gathbandhan but for them Jagat did the honors. Then their holy circles around the fire started'

1st phera : Mera pati parmeshwar hoga..she took a oath that her husband was to be treated like a god from today onwards..

2nd phera: mera ghar mere liye Mandir hoga'.she vowed that her house will be pure and sacred like a temple..

3rd Phera: tumhare har such dukh me, hasi me gham me, dhoop me chaon me, me tumhara saath nibhaoongi'she promised him that I'll keep u company in all your sorrows n happiness, joys n sadness, in darkness and light'.

4th phera: agar kabhi tumhare aage mrityu aayi toh me aage badhkar usse apna loongi'she vowed that if a situation arises where death looms upon you, I will move forward to take it upon myself..while taking this Phera they changed their positions'She moved forward, he went back.

5th Phera: Me tumhe woh saari khushiyaan doongi jinke tum haqdaar ho'She vowed that I will give you all the happiness in the world that you deserve even at the cost of my own life..

6th Phera: main tumhare alawa kisi aur aadmi ka khayal tak apne mann me nahi laaoongi'from today there will be no place for any man in my heart except you'..

7th phera: me in saathon janmon me keval tumhari patni bankar rahoongi'in the last holy phera she vowed that no matter what I will be yours in all 7 lives'.

The priest said "aaj se aap dono pathi patni ho gaye, pehle bhagwan aashirwad lijiye phir apne badon ka"

Now she was trying to comprehend the fact that she was actually a married woman'that her long cherished dream had come true...she was married to the man she loved'she felt like laughing n crying at the same time'

Her momentary happiness was shattered by the voice that reached her from the stairs'


That was the first part guyz...😃 i know its not good as some others are...there must be grammatical mistakes since i haven't proof read it..so please tell me how it was and if i should continue or not..please read, like and comment😊

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ilvuday thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg.she is married to akash?.huh?...ok please upd8 soon please please please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ilvuday

omg.she is married to akash?.huh?...ok please upd8 soon please please please


I will update the next part tomorrow😊 thank you for your comment😊 you have to read the next part to know if she married Akash or not...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no shivani yuh write well...
Thq for da PM swthrt🤗
uh huh..suspense??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb shivani you are such a fantastic writer. yaar believe me your story is reallly awesome! muaaah dear you are simply great...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dae_drmer

no shivani yuh write well...
Thq for da PM swthrt🤗
uh huh..suspense??


Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessmomo

Superb shivani you are such a fantastic writer. yaar believe me your story is reallly awesome! muaaah dear you are simply great...👏


Thank you Komal di😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I think the one who arrived is akash, don't know though confused, any ways LOVED reading the post, wonderful start please update soon,
will wait for your update!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb shivani
it was great
i know manyata is married to uday in ur this os
anyways thanks for the pm and do continue soon
will be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cham42195

I think the one who arrived is akash, don't know though confused, any ways LOVED reading the post, wonderful start please update soon,
will wait for your update!!

yeah Cham right guess...:)thanks for d lovely comment...I'll b updating tom:)btw im a big fan of all ur SS:)u write them so well...

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