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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys...i've opened a thread 4 my Manveer SS 'So close'.plz hav a look.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3114026/so-close-last-pt-engaged-wed-hot-honeymoon

Winter
It was a winter evening...
It was for his sweet heart Manyata Uday Veer brought her to the jungle.
M:This jungle remains close to my heart.It was during a winter season in this jungle that we met each for the first time and ou made me your princess.
He smiled:You are the princess of my heart.
His smile costed even more than hundred million dollars.
She drowned in his smile as usual.

They found a hut for themselves.

Though it was winter Uday Veer removed his shirt as he found it stinking.He sat near the fire waiting for his sweet heart.Manyata came out of the hut wearing a simple white top.Her hair was wet as she took a cool bath.
She sat near the fire.

Uday could not take his eyes off her.
She blushed.
M:Uday...i look so simple now.Still you are admiring my beauty?
M:You are hot for me even in the simplest outfit.
She blushed.

She became naughty and went towards Uday.She put her hair forward flashing the little water drops from her hair on his face.It aroused sensuous feelings in him.He put his arms on her shoulder.They both were lost in each other.
She closed her eyes when his fingers pampered her soft pinkish face.

Her heart beat fast drowning in him:
jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai,
tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha - (2)
dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe, mai khud ko chupau kaha) - (2)
jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha yeh pal hai apna ,toh iss pal ko jee le shwalo kee tarah jarah chal ke jee le, pal jhapakte kho na jana chhuke karlo yakin, na jane yeh pal paye kaha jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai,
tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha baaho me teree yu kho gaye hai, arman dabe se jagne lage hai jo mile ho aaj hamko dur jana nahee, mita do saree yeh duriya jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe, mai khud ko chupau kaha(Jism).

The next morning...
They roamed around in the jungle.Seeing the pond Manyata could'nt control herself and she jumped into it.
U:Manyata...the water must be very cold.You will fall sick.Why did you jump into the water?
M:Uday...you know that i can't control myself when i see water.
U:Oh!
Suddenly Manyata cried loudly:Uday!
She was drowning...

Uday was shocked:What happened sweet heart?
M:It's very deep.
She sank.She disappeared.
Uday was shattered:Manyata!
He jumped into the water.
Suddenly she appeared in the water laughing.It as a musical laughter.
U:Manyata..are you ok?
She kept laughing.
U:You were fooling me?Do you know what i felt for a moment?
I thought i lost you.You are my breath Manyata.If you had gone i would have died letting me drown in this water even though i know swimming.
Manyata became upset:I am sorry Uday.It was just a prank.
He cupped her face in his arms:Please don't do such pranks.It will kill me.


He was very emotional.
She nodded her head.
He pushed her to the shore.

She was wiping her wet face.He was lost in her.She blushed.
U:I can't control myself when i see you wet.
She blushed letting her wet hair's water drops fall on his face.
He carried her in his arms.

The end


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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
awesome loved it but then what carried her and then please do continue and give us more hot romance but nevertheless this part was awesome 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow cho romantic n cute os yaar.but os ha r u kidding.pliz do cont yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one :) if u can turn this os into 2 or 3 more parts will be gr8
contsoon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one jasmine! Manveer was simply superb as always.. Ty 4 d pm & yeah pls make dis OS into 2-3 parts if u can 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Jasmin thanks for d pm..ur OS is beautiful...just want more ManVeer romance scenes...so countinue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice. Amezing os. It'll be best if you continue this. Thanks for the pm...dear. Actually I'm busy now a days and I'm quite lazy for comment. Plaease try to continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nyc !!!
this had 2 b an os ? plz do cont if u can
10x 4 de pm
u did n amazing job wid de pics!!!ur story was very gud i vud lyk 2 know wat happens next and abt their past so do cont if possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi jasmine loved the update, it was so cute😳. And thanks for the PM doll.
Edited by chitra_rao - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Short & Sweet.😊 I love it.😉
Very Nice OS.👏 👏 👏
Thanks for the PM.😳
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