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nice update di:)waiting for the next part...
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Originally posted by: rocker12

gr8 update cont soon 👍🏼

Thanks Haz😃

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Awsomeee...OMG...i m scared what kind of mistake manyata has done?i hope kuch aisa waisa na kiya ho...this suspence killing me plaaa...update soon thanx for pM.

Thanks😃 keep reading to find out I just updated will PM u the update inabit.. its ok😊

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@Saira@Ria- I updated so suspense is over😆

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nice update di:)waiting for the next part...

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Part 53

Manyata- Uday woh humseh bahuth barhi galthi hoghi aur hum apneh aapko kabhi maaf nahiye karpaighe

Uday- Princess hamaari kuch samaj mein nahiye araha hai what happened?

Manyata- I went to Switzerland with my school friend's holiday keh liye and humneh airport par hamara luggage ghum gaya it had my medications in it…. Aur humneh apni medicine nahiye li while I was in Switzerland aur hamaari saari mehnat went to waste because I didn't take medicine for full 2 months… when I came back I told my doctors she said the course was going to finish now it's going to carry on another 6 months because I was very irresponsible hum apna kyaal nahiye rakh paiye…. There are special tablets no one could send them to me….. aur hum yahaan nahiye anah chahateh teh that why I'm very moody kyunki humneh khud seh vaada kiya tha yahaan thabhi aiyghe jab hum poori tarah seh tike ho tumhe surprise deneh chahateh teh ab hum agleh hafteh waapis ja rehey hai I have a check up aur phir waapis ajayghe then go again next month I didn't want to come back… ab every month waapis jaana paregha… hamare liye tike tha if I stayed in London aur hum wahaan khush bhi teh aur firm neh humhe job bhi offer ki and I had to reject it…

Uday- Princess itni si baat par you're so upset aapneh jaan bhojekar toh nahiye kiya so it's fine aur agar aapneh humhe pehele bataya hotha I would of told Aunty Shaina to leave you on London for another 6 months aur you could of continued your job also… but Princess you are so stubborn humseh baat nahiye ki

Manyata- Sorry Uday humhe maaf kardo I was very worried kisi seh bhi baat karneh ka mood nahiye tha… Mama neh humhe zabardasti waapis liaye hai… hum apni marzi seh nahiye aiye hai…..

Uday- Princess aapne koi galthi ki hi nahiye toh kise baat ki maafi it's alright ok sab kuch ache seh hojaygha aur hum khud aapke saat chalenghe for every appointment…. But why aren't you eating properly is it because of medicine or you don't want too

Manyata- patha nahiye Uday I don't feel hungry I can't eat sab course kharaab hogaya

Uday- Princess don't think like that ok aur ab aapko ache seh khaanah paregha ok otherwise hum aapse baat nahiye kareghe

Manyata- Uday hum koshish kareghe ok lekin sach mein hamara maan nahiye hai

Uday- but you have to ok hamare liye

Dadisab came inside

DS- Manyata beta aap jaldi seh tyaar hojayi hai shaam ko Rajpurohitji aneh waleh hum J, Rajbir, Vijay aur Unnanti ka Roka keh tarik pakhi kareh waleh aur hum aap dono ka roka bhi kareghe

Manyata got up

Manyata- lekin Dadisab hamara toh roka ho chukha hai isse ki kya zaroorth hai

DS- Zaroorth hai beta kyunki thab aap dono ek doosreh ko nahiye dheka tha aur nahi ek doosreh ko jaanthe teh… ab aap dono mein bahuth pyaar hai so humneh soacha aapka roka phirseh kardeh aur baad mein shaadi

Uday- Dadisab yeh toh bahuth acha kyaal hai phirseh roka

Manyata- Dadisab roka toh hum karlenghe lekin shaadi nahiye kareghe kyunki humseh bareh Vijay Bhai hai pehele unki shaadi honi chahiye

DS- Beta sab shaadiya ek saat hoghi kyunki Giriraj neh bhi kahaan hai Unnanti seh bareh Uday hai pehele unki shaadi hoghi so humneh faislah kiya hai hum sabki shaadi ek saat kareghe

J and Rajbir came

J- Nahiye Dadisab pehele Vijay Bhai aur Unnanti Bhabhi ki shaadi aur Jiju sa aur Jiji ki shaadi aur ause keh agleh hafteh hamaari aur Rajbir ki shaadi… kyunki hum dono shaadiyo mein bahuth masti karnah chahateh hai agar hamaari shaadi hoghi toh acha nahiye hogha

Rajbir- Haan Dadisab I agree with J hum shaadi baad mein kareghe

DS- Tike hai beta agar tum dono kah yeh faislah I accept it…. Lekin roka toh kareghe tum dono ka… shaam ko rajpurohitji arahaye hai

J- Jee Dadisab

In the evening Rajpurohitji came to take the date out for roka

Rajurohitji- theen din baad agar theeno roke ho toh acha hogha bahuth he shub din hai

DS- Toh tike hai theeno rokeh theen din baad mein hogaye bacho aiyi ashirwaad lijiye

Everyone took blessings from Rajpurohitji

Rajpurohitji left

The next day everyone was busy in arrangement

Komal- Manayata, J beta aap dono saat mein joa aur shopping kar oaa rokeh ki aur shaadi keh liye humneh designer ko kaha hai kal he aiyhe with the latest designs of lenghas

Shaina- Komal humhe jewellery bhi sort karnah hai hum London seh dono betiyo keh liye kuch zever laiye hai lekin idhaar seh bhi leneh hai jeweller ko humneh bhulayeh hai shaam ko ajaygha

Komal- haan Shaina yeh tike rehegha bacho tum dono joa haamre dono dharmaad bhi athe hoghe

Uday/Rajbir- Hum agaye Aunty Komal

Komal- aao beta ab sab saat mein joa shopping karkeh aao

Manyata- hamara maan nahiye please Ma hum nahiye janah chahathe

J- aiseh kaise Jiji you have to chali hai

Shaina- Manya hamare saat aao excuse me

Manyata- kya hai Mama

Shaina- yeh sab kya hai stop throwing tantrums aur araam seh joa

Manyata- hum tantrums nahiye throw kar rehay ok ja rehay hai ab toh aap khush hai you always throw your decisions on me.. Mama don't worry hum aapko embarrass nahiye karenghe

Shaina- embarrass karni ki baat nahiye please beta I love you aur hum yeh sab tumhaari khushi keh liye kar rehay hai… tum ghussah maat ho beta just calm down

Manyata- Mama hamara kuch karneh ka maan nahiye hai I'm sorry I don't mean to be rude but I don't know (interrupted)

Uday- Princess aap hamare saat chaliye aapka mood tike hojaygha ok Aunty don't worry hum Princess ka poorah kyaal rakenghe I promise ab chaleh

Shaina- I know beta tum loge joa

Manyata, Uday, J and Rajbir go shopping

Rajbir- Uday Bhai hum udhar ja rehay J saw a lengha its on the other side ok

Uday- tike hai joa

Rajbir- J tumhara Hitler Bhai mangaya

Uday- Rajbir tum ja rehay ho ya shall I change my mind

Rajbir- nahiye ja rehay hai chaloh J

Manyata- J meri baat toh suno

J- Baad mein Jiji

J and Rajbir left

Uday- Princess please try and relax ok aur aiyi hum shopping karteh hai you love shopping na so come on.. I promise hum complain nahiye kareghe aur I will hold all the bags promise now smile aur auseke baad humneh aapke liye ek bahuth he acha surprise plan kiya ok. Ab please hamare liye smile kijiye aur chaliye aap apneh liye ache seh shopping kijiye ok

Manyata smiled

Manyata- happy ab chaleh

Uday- very happy let's go

Uday and Manyata both done shopping

Uday- Princess how's this

Manyata- no Uday this is ugly yeh tumpe acha nahiye laghegha

Uday- kyun Princess am I that bad looking

Manyata- no Uday you're not bad looking yeh sherwani ugly hai ok this doesn't match your complexion, I like this one its really nice aur yeh tumpeh bahuth achi lagehi… aur humhe yeh pasand hai tumhare liye ok so yeh ugly walhi waapis rakdoh hamara Prince yeh nahiye pehen saktha ok

Uday- ok Princess jo aap chuneghi I will only wear that ab hamaari wari how about this lengha it's so beautiful

Manyata- ok we will buy it but please I can't try it on I will wear at the roka

Uday- No Princess you have to try it on

Manyata- my dear Prince it's bad luck ok you can see me at the roka ok ab chaloh humhe iskeh saat matching bangle chahiye hai

Uday- ok Princess chaliye as long as your happy I'm happy

Manyata- thanks Uday tumneh hamara mood tike kardiya

Uday- no need of thanks ab yeh toh hamara farz hai akhir aap hamaari honeh wali biwi ho

Manyata- no humhe biwi naiye hamesha tumhaari Princess bankeh reheneh hai (she hugged him)

Uday- (He hugged her) Princess toh aap ho hi but jab shaadi hojayghi thab aapka promotion hojaygha so Princess seh hamaari biwi aur phir Jaigar ki Mahrani

Manyata- Uday toh kya tum humhe Maharani kohoghe acha nahiye laghegha.. I don't like it I want to be called Princess forever

Uday- Princess toh tike hai agar yeh baat hai toh hum hamesha keh liye aapko Princess he kehenghe ab khush

Manyata- bahuth khush

Manyata and Uday carried on shopping

Manyata- can I see this pink dress please

Shopkeeper- I'm sorry but this dress is sold

Manyata- yeh dress pehele humneh dheki humhe chahiye Uday dekhno I want this dress please

Uday- yeh dress kisneh karidhi

Amrit- yeh dress humneh karidi

It was Princess Amrit now Manyata was really annoyed

Amrit- Yuvraj Udayveer kaise hai aap

Uday- hum tike hai aap kaise hai

Amrit- hum bhi ache hai weekend peh polo match honeh walah aap aiyghe na

Uday- yeah ofcourse hum aiyghe polo match toh hum kabhi miss nahiye karteh hai

Manyata was getting so annoyed now

Manyata- ab humhe yeh dress nahiye chahiye lets go Uday

Amrit- Yuvrani Manyata humneh aapko dekha nahiye kaisi hai aap aur ab aapki tabiyaat kaisi hai humne aapko dheka tha hospital mein in London

Manyata- hum bilkul tike hai now excuse me

Uday- hum abhi chalteh hai

Amrit- Yuvraj Udayveer agar Yuvrani Manyata ko yeh dress pasand hai she can have it… hamaari pasand bhi ek he hai…. Yeh dress aap ineh dijiye

Manyata- (Angrily) humhe nahiye chahiye hai yeh dress aap he rakhi hai Yuvrani Amrit… Uday chaloh

Uday- Princess chaliyeh…. yeh dress aap he rakhi hai Princess Amrit aapar achi lageghi

Amrit- ofcourse hamaari aur aapki choice ek he hai hum polo match meh milteh hai say my Hi to Uncle Giri

Uday- I will do

Manyata was burning in jealously

Uday- Princess hamaari baat toh suno

Manyata- kya kaha woh dress ause Amrit par zydha achi lageghi

Uday started laughing

Uday- Princess jealous ho

Manyata- jealous ho meri sandal mein kyun jealous hoon ause Amrit seh rakhe who dress bhi aur tumhe bhi hum jah rehay hai

She was about to leave Uday grabbed her arm

Uday- Princess hum aapko auseh bhi achi dress kareed keh denghe ok waise bhi woh dress Yuvrani Amrit neh kareedhi thi ok… jealous honeh ki zaroorth nahiye hai Princess woh toh hum aapko aise jealous dheknah chahateh you know see your reaction

Manyata- aye halkat vedhe khasunakane humhe jealous dhekneh keh liye ause Amrit ki tareef kar rehey teh

Uday was shocked

Uday- Princess itni galiyaan kahaan seh sikhi aapko toh hindi bhi thodi athi hai aura ab yeh galiyaan not very princess like

Manyata- hum Switzerland geh teh there was this couple there the lady was always swearing these words to her husband so I picked it up from her…. Aur agar tumneh phirseh kisi hor ki tariff ki yah ause Amrit seh kabhi bhi baat ki hum tumseh kabhi bhi baat nahiye kareghe aur haan ause Amrit ka aise haal kareghe she will remember her life time aindah seh tumhe dekha I will take her eyes out

Uday- hum aapke siwa keh kisi ko bhi nahiye dhekenghe I promise ok ab dhamki denah band kijiye aur chaliye shopping continue karteh hai

Manyata- you better not Uday warnah tumhara bahuth burah haal kareghe ab chaloh

Uday- chaloh Princess hum hamesha seh aapke hai aur hamesha rehenghe (he hugged her)

Manyata- Uday hum tumpar bahuth bharosah kar rehay hai apneh aap seh bhi zydah so hamara bharosa maat thornah

Uday- kabhi nahiye Princess hum aapseh bahuth pyaar karteh hai

Manyata- hum bhi

Uday- now enough serious talk chaloh hum shopping continue karteh hai… ause pink dress seh bhi achi dress aapko karide keh denghe ok

Manyata- nahiye Uday hum ghar janah hai bahut tired hoghe hamaari medicine ka bhi waqt hogaya hai

Uday- acha Princess ghar chalteh hai aap betiye ghari mein hum J aur Rajbir ko lekeh athe hai

Manyata- Uday kyun Hitler banrehay dono ko shopping karneh do saat mein they will spend time together also they are meeting after so long ok aur hum ghar chalteh hai ok

Uday- lekin Princess aise kaise (interrupted)

Manyata- Uday please chaloh na leave them alone kyun unki love story keh villan ban rehay ho

Uday- hum villan nahiye hai ok J keh Bhai hai toh isliye(interrupted)

Manyata- toh auseki khushi keh liye reheneh do aur tum apni Princess keh saat ghar chaloh ok aur haan hum tumhaare haato seh pasta khaanah hai you have to make it for me ab chaleh

Uday- tike hai chaliyeh I will feed you with my hands today hum abhi Rajbir ko phone karteh hai

Manyata- yay!!!! Ab chaloh I'm very hungry

Uday- chal rehay Princess (he rings Rajbir) hello Rajbir I'm going home with Princess so hum tmnhare liye aur J keh kiye baad mein gari bhej denghe bbm me alright

Rajbir- Ok will do bye Uday Bhai

Uday disconnected the phone

Now we see Manyata and Uday in Devgar

Manyata- Uday ab joa na kitchen mein I'm hungry

Uday- ja rehay Princess aap bhi chaliyeh saat mein

Manyata- ok lekin hum madat nahiye karneh waleh ok

Uday- ok tike hai chaloh abhi

Uday put on his chef apron and hat

Manyata- Uday bahuth ache lag rehay very handsome can I take a picture of you

Uday- no Princess no photo please I have to protect my image ok aise kaise photo

Manyata- ok tike nahiye araamseh pasta banoa hum thab thak cornflakes kaighe

Uday- tike hai eat

Uday started making Pasta

Manyata took loads of pictures of Uday in apron and chef hat cooking… she was laughing to herself

Krishy came inside

Krishy- Prince Udayveer is making his famous pasta can I have some please Prince Udayveer

Uday- of course you can Bacha sit down I have put it in the oven it should be done now

Manyata- Krishy bacha sit down with bua

Uday- haan sit down (he took the pasta out the oven) heres your pasta Manyata and heres your;s Krishy ab araam seh koa

Krishy- Prince Udayveer can I go in the lounge please

Uday- yes you can

Krishy ran to the lounge

Uday- ok Princess ab humko pasta khilateh hai

Manyata- Uday I'm not a baby I can eat myself

Uday- nahiye I will feed you

Manyata- ok fine

Uday fed Manyata pasta

Uday- how is it Princess

Manyata made a horrible face

Uday- Princess acha nahiye hai I will make it again

Manyata gave a big smile

Manyata- its yummy I love it hamesha ki tarah number 1

Uday- Princess you scared me then ok now eat

Dadisab was talking to Krishy and jhanvi in lounge

DS- Yeh sab kya hai Uday kitchen mein khaanah pakah rehey ek Yuvraj ko yeh sab shobha nahiye dethe

Krishy- Dadisab Prince Udayveer is a great cook I love his food he even made it London

Jhanvi- Uday neh kaha tha hum banayeghe humneh manah kiya tha lekin he didn't listen

DS- hum unseh baat karthe hai baad mein

Manyata- Uday tum bhi koa na (she feeds him)

Uday- Princess ab bas no more

Just then hes phone rang it was Giriraj

Uday- Hello Dad jee hum Devgar mein… jee tike hai aap ajayee

He disconnected the phone

Uday- Dad arahaye hai Princess andar chaliyeh

Manyata- Uday hum apneh baldy sasurji ko yeh photograpghs show kareghe look tum kitneh ache lag rehaye ho very handsome

Uday- Princess when did you take these apneh vaada kiya tha nahiye lenghi you promised

Manyata- humneh koi vaada nahiye kiya tha ab hum sabko dekhayghe Dadisab, Ma, Mama, Papa

Manyata ran inside the lounge and Uday ran after her

Uday- Princess!!!!!!! Humhe phone dijiye

Manyata climbed the sofa jumped

Uday- Princess stop being childish humhe dijiye now

DS- Manyata beta yeh sab kya hai

Manyata- Dadisab hum Uday ka photo session kar rehay the dekhiye

Uday- Princess no don't

Manyata ignored Dadisab carried on running in the whole lounge and Uday was running after her. Giriraj came inside he wasn't very happy.. Manyata and Uday both were running around like school kids….. Then they tripped and fell down on each other.

Manveer were both looking in each other eyes

Giriraj- YEH SAB KYA HO RAHA HAI!!!! UDAY!!!! MANYATA!!!!

Both Manyata and Uday got up

Giriraj- YEH SAB KYA HAI UDAY BETA AAP EK YUVRAJ HAI KYUN BACHO KI TARAH DOR REHEY TEH AUR MANYATA BETA AAP BHI KUCH TO LIYAZ KIJIYE

Manyata- Sorry Uncle sab hamaari galthi hai humhe maaf kardijiye

Uday- Dad hamaari bhi galthi thi humhe maaf kardijiye

Giriraj- Maasab ineh kuch samjiyee Manyata ko toh kuch bhi nahiye patha hai Uday beta aap toh samjadaar hai aap bhi inki tarah harkateh kar rehay humhe aapseh yeh umeed nahiye thi

Giriraj was very angry

Uday- Dad humneh aindha seh nahiye hogha

Giriraj- tike hai ab beta humhe saatghara janah hai chaliyeh ek bahuth important meeting hai

Uday- Jee Dad chaliyeh

Manyata went to her bedroom at night there was gift there... She opened it.. it was a beauitful blue anarkali suit
To my Princess humhe patha hai aapko woh pink suit bahuth pasand aiya tha so humneh aapke liye yeh suit kareedha I hope you like aur haan kal subha pooja mein yahin pehnah ok
I love you aapka Uday
Manyata- I love you too Uday
The blue anarkali (its gorgeous my favourite)

PRECAP-

Manveer Roka was happening Jairaj roka and Vijay and Unnanti

Princess Amrit and family come and she isn't very happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was fantastic i loved it beautifully written and i loved the twist😆 and i must say anam u worked really hard with the romance😛 i loved the romance it was so perfect and nicely written i loved it the whole catch and catch of manveer was awesome and uday in chef apron and hat so hot☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ and uday so perfect he cooked for manyata so sweet and amrit is your next villian right i can bet a million bucks on that note lovely update once again anam i loved the whole thing great work keep it up anam and thanks for the pm😃
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great update thanx u made it sooper dooper long :)
loved it brilliantly written the convo was the best and manyata swearing uday for the first time cherry on top of the cake :)
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awesome update mom res😆
Edited by smiley12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsomeee...thank god...manyata ki galti sirf medicine nahi leni ki thi mene kya kya soch liya tha...update soon...thanx for pM.

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