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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Niha-

beautiful update
uday and manyata running around 🤣
m jealous was cute
update soon

Thanks Niha Bacha😃
I'm glad you enjoyed it
I will do later on or 2mrw😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Asmimelody

loved it di:)sorry di mai like nahi laga payi... waiting for the next part...

Thanks Shivi Bacha😃 its alright😊... I iwll update later on or 2mrw
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏thanks...amazing,...👏👏👏

Thanks😃
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Originally posted by: roshni101

When will u update da nxt part? Eagerly waiting and plz include alot of manveer romance in da update

I will try and update today or 2mrw insh allah... I will try my best😊
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Part 54

The next day there was a Pooja in the Jaigar Kingdom

Unnati was busy with arrangements

Uday- Choti… Choti

Unnanti- Kya hai Dada

Uday- hamaari Princess abhi thak aiyi nahiye hai humneh phone bhi kiya but no one is answering… patha nahiye kahaan hai… humneh Vijay bana ko bhi phone kiya phone busy tha

Rajbir came

Rajbir- haan J ka phone bhi switched off hai

Unnanti started laughing

Unnanti- Dada hum Vijay seh baat kar rehay teh isliye ause ka phone busy tha

Uday- Choti kuch zydah he baatein ho rahiye hai jab dekho phone par (interrupted)

Rajbir- come on Uday Bhai aap khud bhi Manya keh saat hothe hai phone par, bahaar you know Unnanti ause din jab shopping ghe teh Uday Bhai aur Manya wahaan seh chaleh geh teh aur hamaare saat shopping bhi nahiye ki

Uday- Rajbir khod tum aur J humseh kaha hum ja rehay aur chaleh ghe aur hum apni Princess seh baat kar sakteh hai kyunki we are engaged already its been 3 years tum loge apni baat karoh aaj roka hogha aur pehele seh he baatien kar rehay hai

Just then Uday phone rang

Uday- hum abhi athe hai excuse me

Uday went outside

Uday- Hello Princess kahaan ho

Amrit- Ghama khani Yuvraj Udayveer hum Yuvrani Amrit bhole rehay hai

Uday- sorry ghama khani humneh soacha Manyata hai kahiye aapneh humhe kaise phone kiya

Amrit- woh dharsal hamaari ghari kharab hogayi hum yahaan paas mein he hai agar aap humhe leneh ajathe toh acha hotha

Uday- jee hum abhi athe hai

Uday went to collect Yuvrani Amrit and family

After 10 minutes Manyata and family arrived

Unnati and Remisha greeted everyone

Manyata was looking around the house

Vijay- Manyata idhar udhar dheknah band karoh aur chloh Uncle Giri keh pare chua ashirwaad loh aur J tum bhi jakeh aapne honeh waleh saas sasur seh ashirwaad loh

M//J- Ja rehay Vijay Bhai aap bhi chaliyeh

Everyone took the elders blessings

DS- Giriraj Uday kahaan hai

Giriraj- abhi toh yahin teh yeh lijiye agaye

Uday came with Amrit and family they will be stay in Jaigar till the wedding

Giriraj greeted Amrits family

Giriraj- Kaisi hai aap beta

Amrit- hum tike hai Uncle Giri aap kaise hai

Giriraj- hum bilkul tike hai aur aapko dhekar bahuth khush hai ab aap loge shaadi thak yahin reheneh waleh hai toh hum saat mein polo match dheknah jayghe

Amrit- of course Uncle Giri

Giriraj- Shamsingh inne sab ko guests rooms dikoah… aap sab inkeh saat jayee

Amrit and family went with Sham Singh

Manyata mouth was open how could Amrit stay in same palace as Uday not happening

J- Jiji kya hua why are you so shocked (she nudged her)

Manyata- (Angrily) J hum bahut ghuseh mein hai how can this Amrit stay in Jaigar yeh hamara honeh walah sasural hai hum nahiye reh sakteh abhi… so why should she stay ab hamare Uday keh ageh peeche ghumeghi besharaam kahiye ki

J started laughing

J- Jiji jealous maat hui hai aapko patha haina Jiju sa aapko bahuth pyaar karteh hai so please stop being jealous of that ghamandi Yuvrani Amrit

Manyata- J toh meri behen hai yah Uday ki

J- dono ki Jiji

Manyata- hum abhi athe hai iss Uday ki khabar lekar

Manayta went to talk to Uday

Rajbir- ab aiygha mazza Uday Bhai ko kaun bachaygha Manya keh ghuseh seh (he laughed)

J hit Rajbir

J- stop laughing at my jiju sa ok Jiji loves him too much kuch zydah he protective hai

Rajbir- acha haina it's good to be protective

J- yeah but not too much especially when you u know the other person loves you like mad

Rajbir- J jealousy seh pyaar bhi bharta hai

Manyata- aye halka vede khamanukane kahaan tha tu ause Yuvrani Amrit ko leneh gaya tha aur hamara phone bhi nahiye utayah

Uday- Princess please aaj toh galhi maat do hum mahael mein hai humhe janah para unki gari kharaab hogayi thi

Manyata- acha gari kharaab hogayi thi ause kamini ki toh auseh tum hi mileh phone karneh ko kisi mechanic ko phone kareh tumhe kyun phone kiya… tum driver ko bhej dethe haan khud kyun gaye.. BOLO NA HALKAT VEDE KH(Uday put his hand on her mouth and took her to the corner)

Uday- Princess driver busy teh sab tyaariyaan chal rahiye hai shaam ko roka hai toh isliye hum chaleh gaye… ab Princess hamaari vari aap humpar chilrahi ho hum to subha seh aapko phone kar rehay hai you didn't answer ab aap kisee seh baat kar rahiye thi batiye na… bolo na Princess chup kyun ho

Manyata couldn't talk as Uday hand was covering her mouth

Uday- boliyeh na Princess

Manyata kicked him he let go

Manyata- tum humhe choreghe toh kuch bholeghe na … I went to the beauticians with J, Bhabhi, Ma and Mama aur hamara phone off tha sorry tike hai…

Uday- lekin Princess Beautician keh paas janeh ki kya zaroorth thi you look beautiful just the way you are

Manyata- Uday tum sach mein bahuth he bewaqoof ho aaj hamara roka hai so humhe sabseh acha lagnah hai samje aur tumhara patha nahiye kab kaha chaleh joa ab yeh kamini Amrit bhi agayi hai aur isi ghar mein reheghi hamara dil kar raha hai hum auseko (interrupted)

Uday- so Princess yeh sab humhe impress karneh keh liye awww how sweet let me tell you Princess hum pehele seh he bahuth impressed hai so aapko yeh sab karneh ki koi zaroorth nahiye hai I love my Princess in any condition.. I love you (he hugs her)

Manyata wasn't angry anymore she hugged Uday

Manyata- I love you too Uday

Giriraj was finding Uday

Giriraj- Unnanti zara dekho Uday kahaan hai

Unnati- Jee Dad hum dhekteh hai

Just then Giriraj saw Uday and Manyata hugging each other

Now Giriraj was very angry

Giriraj- Uday Manyata chaliye panditji intezaar kar rehay hai… ab roka keh baad aap dono ek doosreh ko nahiye mil sakteh hai I will make sure of it

Manyata was going to say something but Uday caught her hand stopped her

Uday- Sorry Dad hum chal rehay hai

Manyata- Uday tum sach mein bahuth dharteh ho apneh baldy dad seh

Uday- Princess please aise maat kahiye hai ok ab chaliye pooja ka waqt hogaya hai

All the couple done pooja seeing Uday and Manyata together Yuvrani Amrit was burning in jealously.

DS- Giriraj ab pooja ache seh hogayi ab bas shaam ko theeno roke ache seh hojaye

Giriraj- Jee Maasab sab ache seh hojaygha hum sab shaam ko ajayghe

DS- Aap sab bhi aiygha

Amrit parents- Jee hum zaroor aiyghe

Manyata- aneh deh ise kamini ghmandi Amrit ko iseh aise sab sikanghe apni poori zindagi yaad rakenghi

Uday- Princess ab bas ok no plans warnah acha nahiye hogha

Manyata- halkat vede tu meri side mein hai ya auseki

Uday- aapki ab Princess galhi denah band kijiye ok please

Manyata- tike hai ab hum chalteh hai shaam ko mileghe rokeh par (she hugged him)

Now we see all the arrangements happening in Devgar

Manyata got ready first before J

J- Jiji aap itni jaldi tyaar hogayi

Manyata- haan hum tyaar hai

Shaina/Komal- hamaari dono betiyaan bahuth hi pyaari lag rahiye hai

Jhanvi and Krishy came inside

Krishy- BUA!!!!!!!!!! MAMI!!!!!!!!!!

Manyata- Krishy mera bacha (she hugged him) you're looking very handsome

J- very cute Krishy aur hum abhi aapki Mami nahiye baneh hai so why didn't you call me Princess J today Krishy

Krishy- Princess J you will be Mami soon so I thought I should get use to it so from now on I will call you Mami

J- ok bacha call me what you want

Jhanvi- tum dono bahuth pyaari lag rahiye kisi ka nazar na lag jaye

Shaina/Komal- nahiye lageghi humneh kala tikka lagaya hai

Manyata- Bhabhi you know Mama and Ma as usual inkeh puraneh zamaneh ki tareekeh

Just then Viraj came inside he was upset

Viraj- Bacha you look beautiful (he hugged Manyata)

Manyata- Thank you Bhai kya hua why are you so upset

Krishy- Bua Daddy was crying before I was laughing at him it was so funny he never cries don't know what happen to him today

Viraj- Bacha aaj sahiye mein aapka roka hogha aur agleh hafteh shaadi toh tum hum sab seh door chalijoaghi isliye mein bahuth upset hoon meri choti behen ki shaadi ho rahiye hai patha nahiye hum sab tumhare binah kaise rehenghe hamara toh ghar he soonah hojaygha (he had a few tears in his eyes)

Now Manyata also started crying she hugged Viraj

Manyata- Bhai mere pass ek idea hai don't cry hum nah Uday ko gharjamai banaleghe toh phir hum sab saat mein rehenghe kaise raha idea

Viraj- idea acha hai lekin bacha Uday nahiye manegha

Manyata- toh phir mein ause seh shaadi nahiye karoghi

Viraj- nahiye Manya bacha aiseh nahiye kehteh shaadi toh aapko karni hai ok

Jhanvi- ab bas ab koi nahiye roegha ok aur Viraj yeh aapko kya hogaya hai wakhi keh ansoo bidaai thak bache keh rakhi tike hai ab chaliye hum niche chalteh hai aur tyaariyaan dhekteh hai

Krishy- Mama I want to go also

Viraj picked Krishy up and went downstairs so did Jhanvi

Now we see everyone downstairs Uday and Rajbirs family had arrived

Komal and Shaina both done the tilak and pooja

Rajpurohitji was here it was time for Uday and Manyata roka

Unnanti put a taal in Manyata lap with coconuts and gifts and then put the red chuni on her head… done the pooja

Manyata was really happy

Remisha done same with J

Vijay Mom done same with Unnanti

All three roke took place

Brijraj- Panditji theeno shadiyaan ki koi achi tarik nikaliye

Rajpurohitji- haan Mrinali neh bataya tha pehele Uday aur Manyata ki shaadi hoghi agleh sawmwar ko aur ause keh theen din baad Vijay aur Unnanti ki shaadi aur phir agleh hafteh J aur Rajbir ki shaadi

DS- yeh tike rehagha ache seh tayaariya bhi hojayghi

Uday was really happy

Uday- Princess hamaari shaadi pakhi hogayi agleh hafteh hai

Manyata- haan humhe patha I didn't understand the day sawmwar matlab

Uday- Monday Princess

Manyata- kya itnah jaldi just 8 days left

Uday- Princess hamara bas chaleh toh aaj he aapseh shaadi karleh lekin mahurat 8 day keh baad hai aur phir aap seedha Jaigar mein hamaare saat

Manyata- Uday humhe London janah hai in 3 days time check up hai

Uday- toh chalenghe na Princess don't worry ok

Krishy- Mami!!!!! (He hugged J)

J hugged him too

J- Krishy now you can officially call me Mami akhir hamara roka hogaya hai

Krishy- Mami I'm very happy

Rajbir- Krishy bacha you forgot about Mamu I do exist you know

Krishy- I know Mamu you're here I'm very happy now I have Mami also

He hugged them both

Vijay- Unnanti ab hamara roka toh hogaya ab hum araam seh bahaar ja sakteh hai aur koi rokeh gha bhi nahiye

Unnanti- Nahiye Vijay ab hum kahiye nahiye ja sakteh

Vijay- Kyun

Giriraj- Kyunki beta ab aap shaadi seh pehele nahiye mil sakteh samjeh aur nahi phone peh koi baat ho sakthi

Vijay- Unnanti pehele Uday Bana Hitler teh ab hamare sasurji bhi agaye ab hamara kya hogha

Back to Manveer

Manyata- Uday I have told Bro and Bhabhi, Vikz and Shanaya to come with us on the way back they have booked their flights also

Uday- Yeah that's good Princess we are leaving in 2 days we need to be back before the sangeet… Princess what happened wahaan kyun dhek rahiye ho

Manyata- Uday you know that Princess Amrit kuch zydah he iss taraf dhek rahiye hai iseh sabak sikanah he paregha….. tumhe hamare ilawa aur koi nahiye dhek saktha

Uday laughed

Uday- Princess ab hum kya kareh hum aapke keh he hai ok so bas forget about Princess Amrit aap humseh baat kijiye

Manyata- Uday I hate her

Meanwhile we see Princess Amrit on the phone she was smiling evily

PREVIEW-

Uday- Dad hum London ja rehay hai
Giriraj- Uday humneh aapko bataya tha shaadi thak aap Manyata seh nahiye milsakteh aur nahi saat mein kahiye ja sakthe behsharaami ki bhi haad hothi aapko sab patha phirbhi humhe batha rehay hum London ja rehay yeh sab kya ho raha Manyata toh London mein this itneh mahinah ab phir ab tumhe bhi janah hai akhir kyun janah hai
Uday- Dad woh hum aapko nahiye batha sakteh

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update anamwohooo manveer roka is done yayyy🥳and manveer marriage is after 8 days later yayyy i m verry happy nowall manveer scenes are too cute👏but i hate this bi**h amrit😡she is😡how can she stay in jaigadh till manveer marriageughhh😡kick this amrit out from ur ff😆i want more manveer scene but giriraj uncle is so annoying 🤪hadi baan ke beech mein a jate hain😆precap is confusing?😕uday want to go to london 😊but giri uncle want to stop him ?😕
Edited by smiley12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i bet amrit will try to crash da wedding lolz
nice update
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsomeee...yuppiii ...manveer roka done...manveer scene was sooo...cute...urgh...this amrit...ab ye konsi nayi problem create karne wali hai ...aur giriraj dushman romence...bar bar manveer ke romence me tang adate rehate hai...precape was scary...i hope uday ke dad ko manyata ke bare me pata na chale...update soon...thanx for PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry 4 the late reply di.Awesome update.Loved it.Manveer awww cho cute.n that churail Amrit ughhh hate her man.N Giri uncle what 2 say?i mean kabab main haddi.eeks uncle jamana badal gaya hai.Yaha sharam ki koi jagah nahi hai:panyways cont soon di.

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