~Waltz of hearts~ FF part 3 Updated page 21 - Page 17

A superb update... Uday in his total possessive mode... ufff now that is what I call HOT!!
Can't wait to read more!!!👏👏👏

Though I would've loved to read more about Uday's emotional turmoil of Manyata giving away her everything to another guy... you know I find it such double standards of the society engraved in the majority of our minds that no matter how much of a player a guy is...that doesn't matter but the girl should be an effin virgin Mary... I mean its ridiculous. Uday's probably slept with hundreds of girls but when it comes to Manyata she should be as pure as a dewdrop...

Don't understand or conform to such kinda mentality. Instead of this, I would've fallen in love with Uday again if would've said: Even if she did give herself to another man, that was her past. Like how I can't change my past, she can't change hers... but my love for her is endless and eternal, and she's my wife now so I won't judge her by her past but will try to build a beautiful future with her... in which I'll be the only guy in her life and she'll be the only girl in mine.

But still fabulous work!👍🏼

superb update allisa i really was waiting for it loved each and every line of it finally the misunderstandings get a turn and now i think uday will be the savior plz con't soon :)

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Ok 1st of all alisa i wud say i was literaly sh0ckd wen i saw ur ff 0n madhubala forum i dnt und y kareena st0le ur w0rk it was trulz discusting i didnt knew ths t0o happenx here bt u shud b pr0ud? Y coz ur w0rk ix so amazing dat people envy u and datx da reas0n thex st0le ur w0rk n pretended lyk they have write it so love u shud b pr0ud ov ur self! N0w c0ming to ur update alissa 1st tel me how cn u write such intimate scenex with0ut making it creepy and cheap i hav read many ffx wich r realy discusting wen u read itw intimate scenex bt ur w0rk d0exnt gve dat feeling! U r amazing writer alisa u cn write c0medy and amazing 0ne i tel up;) and n0w u r writing such a h0ty h0ty ff and itx awes0me t0o plx do c0ntinue :

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

please update soon, gosh glad Udayveer realized Manyata is his only

Yeah he found about her not being engaged with akash, haha let's see if he gets there on time 😆
Thank you for reading. 😊

👏👏thanks.,...loved it...i hope nothing bad happens👏👏

oh dear please update soon
cant wait more now...

superb update..cont it soon..nxt update mein akash ka gla dba dena..lol nd thanku for pm..keep rocking

Awesome update! Hope Uday get there on time 😕

OMG! y wont akash give up. shes a married women. ughh cant believe jay was in on this too

hope uday saves manyata

luved update
thx 4 da pm
cont soon