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Posted: 13 years ago
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Alissa ur frnd -JEHAN- send me PM and request for plagiarism and also post complaint on FF section on Plagiarism Complaint's Box... on FF section. That topic is closed ur one problem solved. But she also told me Modz of that section want that she can change contents form that story. U can demand them to delete that FF. Coz that ur decision that u want her to continue ur FF or not. I give u FF section plagiarism revised rules read and ask for ur rite. If modz still want her to let do work den u can tell me plz write what happen what modz said everything and PM me i will personally mail to Vijay Bhaiya and forward ur complaint to him.
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THANK U SOOO MUCH...
i really appreciate what u r doing for us...i hope alissa will tell u everything...
as after my last PM to u she did talk to MB mods and she herself will tell u about all that...
thank u sooo much for helping us...
Edited by -JEHAN- - 13 years ago
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Hey guys, I am finally back with part 3 of this FF, but before you start reading I have message for you guys. Most of you know about part 1 of this getting stolen by an ex member of DEK forum and posting it on another forum, which was pretty disappointing and heartbreaking. But oh well whatever happens, happens for a reason. Whatever happened motivated me to continue my FF. But I really want to thank all my friends of DEK forum, you guys are my superheroes. You guys fought for me without even thinking once about it. I really thank you all with the bottom of my heart, I feel very lucky to have so many great friends who truly care for me and love what I write. Thank you again I love you all so much. Mwahhh <3 Now you guys can continue reading 😆

~Part # 3~

Just when it was quarter to one the door cracks, and Uday walks in to the room looking extremely exhausted and partially drunk. He finds no one in the room and quietly sits at the edge of the bed and starts taking off his shoes just when he sees the unexpected. It was Manyata coming out of the bathroom with no clothes on, water dripping from her hair and water drops slowly sliding her lustful body. He notices the bruises turning yellow now, they were finally healing and he was happy to see that. She slowly makes her way to him and grabs her towel from the bed which was lying right next to him. She then attempts to dry her hair in front of him but he ignores her existence in the room. She then opens her closet and picks one of the most revealing lingerie that she had and puts it on in front of him trying to make him see her. She then goes up to him, grabs him by the collar and looks straight into his eyes. But he attempted not to look in her eyes but he was again lost in her wonderful innocent body which she was taking advantage of in order to pacify him.

If there was just one wish

I could be granted here tonight

It would be to have you right back by my side...

She kept on moving closer to him, but he again attempted to ignore her. Despite his constant ignorance she wasn't willing to give up. Her hands slowly drop down from his collar and slide up and down his chest. She kept on moving closer and closer. Her hands crawled up his shoulder and moved passed his neck and her fingers were now lingering on his face. She curled her arms around his neck and rose on the tip of her toes to reach his face, their bodies were now caressing each other, she moved her face closer to her, her hands tightening the grip on his neck and she kissed him right behind his ear. She needed him badly and he could see that in her trembling lips. Manyata kept on kissing him with all her concentration; she was sucking on to his skin. Her body was literally leaning on to him, she loved the taste and the smell of his delicious skin but she didn't like the fact that Uday wasn't showing any passion at all. She wanted him to love her, love her to death. Her thirsty fingers kept on scratching his back while her mouth was restlessly sucking his hard yet magnificent body. She kept on pushing him off towards the bed, she was playing it hard on him and it was now getting hard for him to control himself. He had seen her eyes which clearly said what she wanted and how she felt but her words were still haunting him. He looked at her angelic eyes filled with watery substance, which was literally begging him to love her. He was in dilemma, what he saw in her eyes seemed to be something familiar to what he had seen in his own eyes for her. So did that mean she felt for him in a same way that he did? He thought to himself. While these thoughts were running in his head, Manyata was attempting to clear his doubts with her actions. He could smell the desire from her body, feel crave in her fingers and hear the love in her heavy breathing. She seemed to be madly and wildly in love with him but she had claimed to be in love with another man so this behavior of hers was a questionable. Just when Uday thought he should think about it once more his lips encountered something very fragile and gentle, that seemed to be wet and tasted strangely saccharine, it was her lips desperately kissing his fleshy hard lips and her mouth constantly making attempts to enter his mouth. He could feel the power in her gentle hands rubbing all over his back wanting for him to respond to her efforts. Her lips were one thing that he couldn't resist, he felt so helpless in front of her vacillating innocent lips, thirsty beatific eyes and distressed hands. He could feel the burn in his throat, which was a sign of developing thirst. He attempted to stop her, make her aware of what she was doing but her hunger for his love was way too selfish to make any compromises.

Uday: (in a low tone)...Manyata...stopp it...

Uday: (repeated himself)...Manyataaa...you don't know what you're doing...

Manyata: mmm...

Uday: (whispers)...don't do anything that you are not sure of...this is not what you wanted...

Manyata: (whispers in his mouth)...I have never been this sure in my life...(and she entered his mouth and bit his tongue)

Whether a flower in my hand or a gun in my hand,

I'd give it all up for your hand in my hand

For the sun on my skin as the morning begins

I'd die in the dark just to feel your skin on my skin...

She left him no option but to give in. Lust growing in his eyes, he quickly wrapped his potent arms around her fragile waist crushing her from inside out in the process but she seemed to be very appreciative of his move. In response she tightened her grip on him even more and twisted her body in such a way that would allow him to squash her even more. The sexual warmth of his breath lingered on her neck making her shiver from the inside. And he embraced her in the most protective way anyone could. Their bodies tangled in a strange manner. He passionately planted a kiss on her lips, she willingly parted her lips and he rushed in claiming them and deepening the kiss. Their mouths were constantly entering and exiting each other. His tongue dancing along her mouth and brushed along her teeth. She loved the way he sucked her mouth and the feeling of tasting her husband's saliva was something she was willing to die for. She Whispers in his mouth...

Manyata: (whispers in his mouth)...I love the way you taste...I love you...

Last button undone, she pushes off his shirt to reveal the heavenly landscape of his chest. Her mouth was all over his chest, she was an adventurer trying to discover every part of him. While uncontrollably kissing him, his hands fisted in her drenched hair. Her body was now burning and so was his, the atmosphere surrounding them was getting hot with the release of heat from their bodies. Uday was getting carried away and Manyata was helpless too in front of her own will. They were now at the edge of the bed, Manyata's attempts to keep on rising up his body and trying to climb up his legs, forcing him to roll her on the bed. She was now on the bed and he on top of her, he slid his hands down her arm and pinned her to the bed making her his captive which she was begging him to make her for ages. Before he could even make a further move he felt her trailing kisses along the definition of his chest and shoulder. She was breathing heavily and he could hear it, he started from her forehead and kissed all the way down to her chin, and sucked her flushed pinkish lips, he licked the outline of her lips and bit the corner of her lower lip. While he was kissing her in a most pleasurable ways, she kept on moaning in her sweet low voice expressing the pleasure of his touch. Her hands were now on his bare lower back and fluttered her eyes closed as an attempt to live the moment to the fullest. While they two of them were expressing their love for each other Manyata's phone started to ring, but both of them were way too lost into each other to notice anything. The phone kept on ringing but Manyata didn't even notice it once and was enjoying her time with her husband. However Uday didn't seem to appreciate the distraction between him and his wife. He tried to ignore it and kept on squeezing, squishing and sucking his wife's chest. Manyata's phone was still ringing and but she could care less about it although Uday was really starting to get annoyed with this seemingly awful distraction. He looked at the bed side and saw Manyata's phone ringing with the name "Akash" flashing on it. This was the ultimate moment of realization and misconception. His body froze exactly where he was, his eyes got red, and lines of frustration appeared on his forehead. Despite being burnt in anger, he had a clinch of hurt on his eyes. He seemed to be very hurt, Manyata's word related to Akash echoed in his ears and he couldn't help but clench his hands in fist which were holding on to Manyata's skin at the very moment making her whimper in pain. This time the sound that came out of her mouth wasn't because of pleasure but pure pain.

Manyata: Uddaayyy...(a heavy whisper)

She was in pain and yet she didn't complain, his hands were crushing and scratching her skin in agony but she was still willing to even go through that pain. She found him not responding to her, he had stopped and she was not sure why he did that. She decided to take the lead from there and started kissing him again but got no response in return, she kept on trying and trying, but he didn't seemed to react, all he was doing was crushing her skin in anger which she attempted to ignore. She slid up and bit his lips, kissed them, licked all over it and even tried to enter his mouth. She found his lips hard as usual but this time this time they felt rock solid making it painful to kiss them but she was willing to go through any pain for him, the person whom she was married to and the person who she literally craved for but didn't know the reason for it. She was now starting to feel the strangeness in his behavior which again she had no clue about. Her constant attempt made him even more furious and he jerked off of her, pulling himself away from him and got off the bed. The sudden abhorrence in his behavior made her wonder what exactly happened just now. He got off the bed and grabbed his shirt, which was lying at the edge of the couch. There was an awkward silence in the room while he wore his shirt and she stared at him in confusion while still on bed with her partially ripped off lingerie. He looked furious and she was dumbstruck in confusion. She saw him approaching the door and she quickly gathered herself to ask him the reason for this abrupt repulsion.

But something happened for the very first time

With you my heart melted to ground

Manyata: Udayyy???

Uday: (stops but doesn't say anything)...

Manyata: What happened..?

Uday: (no reply)...

Manyata: Is something wrong...??? (looking confused)

Uday: does it matter? (In a low tone)

Manyata: (looking upset)...can't you see how much it matters?

Uday: I don't wanna talk about it...(in an angry)...

He walks towards the door to leave, but she makes an attempt to stop him. She was ready to confront him, talk to him about all that happened between them in past two days and why he kept on pulling away every time. She slides the bed sheet off the bed and wraps it around her bare body to cover it up. She gets off the bed and goes up to him.

Manyata: But I want to know...what's stopping you?...I thought you loved me...

Uday: (silent)...you thought?... (Looking very hurt)

Manyata: why are behaving like that?...I know you love me then why are you pulling away ?

Uday: (no reply)

Manyata: am I not good enough for you?...please Uday I want to know...it's me right...???...(Looking pale)

Uday: (still doesn't reply...)

Manyata: I'm here waiting for you, willing to give you all that I have and you're leaving me like that???...Why did you stop...???...you don't love me because of my...???...I want an answer goddamn it...(voice breaking and tears rolling down her eyes)

Uday: (turns around and faces her)...how dare you question my love? (Holds her from the shoulder, making her whimper in pain)...you thought I loved you for your body and now I have gotten bored with it? you can't even think how much I love you...it makes my heart cry when I see you in pain...you don't know how it feels to be betrayed by someone you love...I can't believe you thought so lowly of my love...today once again you insulted my love...(loosens his grip on her and pushes her away from him)

Manyata: Nooo I'm sorry I didn't mean to hurt you...I just don't understand, why you don't want what I am willing to give you with all my heart?...my love, my heart, my soul, my body?...it's all yours Udayy...then why are you hesitating...???

Uday: BECAUSE YOU ALREADY GAVE IT ALL TO SOMEONE ELSE DAMN IT...(Shouts out in frustration which scares her)

Manyata: (looking terrified and confused)...(in a low tone almost a whisper)...I don't know what you're saying...

Uday: forget it...the answer you're looking for answer lies within you...(with teary red, anger filled hurt eyes)

Still, how can you walk away?

From my tears?

It's gonna be an empty road

Without me right here.

Uday leaves the room, banging the door behind him. He left her in a dire state. She got her answers but those answers gave birth to new questions. And these questions were much more petrifying. She was in state of severe perplexity. She had no idea what he meant by giving it all to someone else. She had never let anyone else ever touch her, she had never wanted to be with anyone so badly then she did with Uday. His words were piercing her heart again and again, making thousands of holes in it. Her heart was in pain which was the proof of her newly discovered sentiment for him. She was in love, and she knew it well now.

He on the other hand was as hurt as she was. He was a man with broken heart, shattered dreams and stolen love. He had loved Manyata with all his mighty heart, he wanted her, wanted her heart, her soul, her body, her love, her everything but it wasn't easy for him to live up with the fact that she on the other hand had already given it all to someone else . It was no less agonizing for him than it was for Manyata. He saw the way her body reacted to him; a single touch was all that was needed to turn her on. Her actions made him believe she loves him but then her words haunted him and made him think otherwise. The two had many unreturned questions in their heads and were both equally wounded with the actions and words of each other.

Maybe we need to clear our thoughts

Maybe we need to clear our hearts...

He had left and she too was left alone, staring at herself with hatred filled eyes. She was blazing in anger at herself for hurting the person who loved her so much; he said it right she once again insulted his love. The anger within her was enough to burn down a fresh coal to ashes. Manyata out of aggravation pushes everything off the table, sliding the crystal piece off the table and hurting herself in the process. There were thousands of tiny pieces of crystal on the floor which she thought reflected her life, wrecked, shattered and bleak. Her hand was bleeding but she was way too numb to notice any kind of pain. She was staring at the blood dripping off her hand with an empty face, she was in love and her heart was in pain.

My heart's crippled by the vein

That I keep on closing

You cut me open and I

Keep bleeding love...

While sitting there staring in thin air, her phone rang. She didn't observe it right away, after about 5 to 6 bells she finally realized someone was calling her. She wasn't in right shape of mind to make any sort of conversation with anyone, but the continuous ringing of the phone made her answer the phone without even paying attention to who was it actually calling her. She picks up the phone and before she could gather her voice to speak up, she heard a voice which seemed to be very unpleasant to her.

Akash (on the phone): Monia I have to meet you right now. Please don't say No. You have to come. Please...

Manyata: Why the f**k did you call me? (In a rude tone)

Akash: I will tell you everything but you need to meet up with me for once. Please Monia, all I am asking is to come meet me.

Manyata: how many times have I told you not to call me...I can't do anything for you...

Akash: (gets mad) I thought you claimed to love me and you can't even do this much for me?...please Monia one last time come meet me...I want to end this for once and for all...please not for me but for the sake for our love...

Manyata: (thought for a while)...one thing there is NO love between us so get that straight in your head...and I will come one last time to finish it all so I can finally move on peacefully...(hangs up)

Akash (to himself): yes you're right last time because after this you won't have an option to go anywhere...(evil smiles)

*****

You try to be strong

But the pain keeps holding on

Uday was at the bar of his hotel, trying to forget all that he hears and all that he saw. He didn't know what to make out of it all. She sounded like she really loves him but then it was the same mouth from which he heard her say that she had loved Akash. He had always trusted her more than himself even when he knew how much she hated him but now that trust was wrecked. How can she do this to me? How can she stoop so low? I gave her all that I could with all my heart and yet she still...??? While these questions were running in his head, he felt a hand set on his shoulder alluringly. He turned around and saw who it was and he was not surprised to find out who it really was.

Jay: (to Uday)...Udayyy...(trying to look surprised)...hi baby...you and here? (Moves up closer to kiss him on the cheek but, he pulls away and stops her)

Uday: hi jay...no need for that...

Jay: Awww seriously...I can't believe what my sister has done to you...(lingering her fingers over his cheek)...poor baby...(smirks)

Uday: (pushes her hand off of him)...keep your hands to yourself Jay...(in a rude tone)

Jay: Woahh alright...don't get mad Uday...you know na...you look even more tempting when you are mad...(sits next to him and whispers in his ear)

Uday: (ignores her)...

Jay: by the way...what are you doing here anyways? I mean shouldn't you be in your room, on your bed, with your dearest wife, having...hahahaha...you know what I mean...(winks at him)

Uday: Shut up Jay...have some shame...(picks up his drink)

Jay: I should have shame? hahahaha I think you should try that line on your wife...who is...well...you know...sleeping around with another man...

Uday: (suddenly burning in rage)...how dare you Jay...(twists her arm)...I won't listen even a word against Manyata...do you understand...DO YOU UNDERSTAND???...

Jay: Oh come on Uday stop acting like you don't know anything...Manyata loves Akash and he loves her...and now Akash has already claimed on her by...

Uday: SSHHH...(really mad)...no one has claimed on my wife okay...get that straight before I do something with you...(gets up to leave)

Jay: (frustrated)...Fine I admit...NO one has claimed YET...but Akash is all set to make her his...huh...do you even know what's going to happen to your wife?

Jay words were really terrorizing; Uday all of a sudden had a concerned look on his face. Manyata was in trouble and he could sense it from the way Jay was behaving. There was a sense of relief after finding out that Manyata had not betrayed him but more than relief he was worried about what was Akash going to do with her.

Uday (to Jay): What? What happened to Manyata?...where is she???

Jay: (evil smiles)

Uday: (holds her by the neck)...don't test my patient Jay...Are you going to tell me or should I just drop you dead at this very place...(crushing his teeth)

Jay: leave me a lone...Udayyy...

Uday: (fuming)...Answer my f**king question DAMN IT...

Jay: Akash has called to meet her...he has planned to...(looks down)...

Uday: (slaps Jay)...You f**king Bitch...you call yourself her sister? I swear if he even touched Manyata I would cut you open Jay...and that's not a threat but a heads up to you...keep that in mind...(he runs out the bar in a hurry)

Jay (to Herself): (while touching her face)...he won't just touch her Uday...he will...(smirked)

TO BE CONTINUED...

Alrighty so that was all, I will try to update soon. If you guys think it was worth your time then please do hit the like button and share your comments. And a big thankyou and lots of love to all my friends. I LOVE YOU GUYS 🤗

Love,

Alissa😉

Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago
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Finally I can comment on your update now. Pheww.
First off, I am so glad that you finally decided to pay heed to this FF 😛 . Lol. And on the bright side of the whole plagiarism deal, look how it motivated you to continue your story and prove it to those people that they cannot break you or take advantage of you. I guess everything does happen for a reason right? So welcome back my baby. And you sure are back with a bang 👍🏼
Loved the update baby. It was fantastic 👏
Manyata's confidence and boldness is something which is very unique in this FF which makes it even more interesting to read. Her bold advances left Uday baffled and it was honestly a treat to read. But how long could he resist his lady love? He eventually gave in and reciprocated her actions with equal passion. Needless to say that scene was pure hotness. Bang up job there baby. And then comes Akash the kabab main haddi as usual. How can anyone not hate him? His phone call ruined their perfectly romantic moment, leaving Uday annoyed and hurt. Poor Prince. The conversation between Uday and Manyata that followed after this was amazing. I loved how Manyata without hesitating voiced her feelings on Uday abruptly leaving their moment and going out. Little does she know about the misunderstanding caused by Akash and Jay so she is mystified at his antics. Gosh these two.
Akash the desperate jerk wants to meet "his" Moniya. I swear I feel like punching him. No seriously I do. And Manyata being Manyata agreed without once thinking about the consequences. This girl I tell you. Uday and Jays conversation cleared out many things for Uday. Atleast he now knows that Manyata never gave herself away to anyone else but him. And now he should learn how to trust his wife. The slap was unexpected, but I loved it. Jay deserved every bit of that slap, and more. So the Prince to the rescue eh? 😉
Can't wait to see that play out. So please update soon this time as you have left me craving for more! Once again, marvelous update baby. I am so proud of you 🤗
Edited by fia21 - 13 years ago
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lovely beautifully written i loved this desperate manyata and i loved the way u explained uday's inner turmoil and the this akash😡 hated his more and is her planning to rape manyata 😲 please update soon and this time sooner and thanks for the pm😃
Edited by vampire12345678 - 13 years ago
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WELCOME BACK...🤗
yeah i will say that because u were not updating from a longgg time..so u r back with a bang...😃
what a awesome,amazing chapter..welldone 👍🏼
i really loved it..
okay so the first part was awesome and very well written...😃 M was so desperate..i loved the way u wrote uday's feelings the dilemma he was going through...i loved it..and M trying again and again..☺️
all in all i loved that part...
and M lines .I have never been this sure in my life... very nice..👏 i really liked it...😃
I love the way you taste...I love you...
awww...she said that she love him...awww..👏👏👏 for this line...
these phones 😡 and that akaaasshhh..😡 but M is right can't he see how much it matters..
but than uday was in dilemma as what to believe on..what he saw or what he hear...and then i loved your choice of words in this line This was the ultimate moment of realization and misconception.👏👏
u described so well that uday too is not at fault...
and there convo was written amazingly well...👏👏👏
but i really felt bad for M...😳i mean she love him madly quiet wildly...😆
and the part where u wrote both of there feelings the pain they were going through because of the misunderstanding was brilliant,excellent piece of work...really gabbu...what a amazing update...i loveddd it...👏👏
its all about the emotions the love one share with there partner...and u wrote it so well..😳
but then when i was feeling bad for M i read the next part..this girl never fail to surprise me..🤢why she sooo urghhh kya zarorat thi akash ki baat many ki...dumbo..😡
and the the biggest witch award goes to JAY...😡 how can she stoop so low...
i hope uday will get there on time..😕 feeling bad for both of them...
but why u stopped omggg...now please update soon..this is not done gabbu...😔i wanna read moreee...
okay okay i will wait for your next update don't have any other options either...🤔
but this update was amazing,brilliant...i loved it i loved the way u add a song to describe to highlight there feelings by a song lovely...👏👏👏
love u too gabbu...🤗
thanks alottt for updating...thank u...
Edited by -JEHAN- - 13 years ago
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please update soon, gosh glad Udayveer realized Manyata is his only
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It was fantastic babes!...plz update soon and this time really soon...plzzz...n thanks for the PM
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☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Blush, Blush, Blush, Oh God how much I blushed?😆
It's really Hot, girl.☺️ ☺️ TOO MUCH PYAR KI AAG FROM MANYATA''S SIDE.😆 UV, you missed the chance, sorry dude.😉 Akash Babu🤢 what can I say about you? 🤬 🤬
J baby GO TO HELL.😈
Fantastic update Ali n hot also.☺️
Thanks for the Hot update n PM.😉
Do update ASAP.😛
BUT I LIKE AKASH RETURNS N ROYAL COMEDY MORE THAN THIS FF.Please update these FFs also.😊
Hugs.🤗 🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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awesome update lissa baby i hate that bi**h jai wohoo kia slap mera uday ne iss ke face per👏👏and that akash he is a biggest loser in the world😡😡i hope uday save his princessdo continue soon👍🏼
Edited by smiley12 - 13 years ago

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