OS: I Love to hate you - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here is the part 2 of my os...
I LOVE TO HATE YOU
Next morning...
Manayata was comfortably in Uday's arms. When she opened her eyes she saw Uday besides her she smiled and turned other side and then she realized that she was in Uday's arms ?????
Manyata whispered in Uday's ear: Good morning
Uday: Good morning priencess Mrs. Udaybeer Singh
Manyata: Uday utho
Uday with a flitry smile: Aabhi sone do na humne tumhe aapni bahon mein rakhne mein bahut maza aa raha tha ...
Manyata: Abhi utho humme aapni bahon mein baad mein lena abhi chalo niche saab intezar klar rahe honge
Uday: Haan haan uth raha hoon!!!!!!!!!!
At dinning table...
Uday: Good morning dad ,choti
Both nodded
Unati: Dada manyata kahan hai???
Uday: Vo aa rahi hai
Unnati: Vaise dada aapki raat kaise gayi???
Uday & Giriraj starring her
Unnati: Sorry...vo dekhiye bhabhi sa aa rahi hain
Uday couldn't stop starring her here their eyes meet they shared an eye lock
Unnati: Good morning bhabhi sa
Here manveer broke their eye lock
Manyata: Good morning Unnati , Good morning Unc... sorry Dad
Ignoring Uday
Unnati: Bhabhi Dada bhi hain aap unhe wish karengi? Don't be shy you can wish him after all he is your hubby.
Manyata: Unnati please stop it.
Giriraj: Uday beta, aapko yaad to hai ke aaj aap dano ki shaddi ki reception hai.
Uday: Ji dad
Manveer in corridoor
Manyata was going in her room that someone hold her wrist she was about to shout that Uday keept hand on her mouth
Uday: Hum hain
Manyata: Aapne mujhe dara diya
Uday: Hamari ek khwaish pori karo gi???????
Manyata: Kya?????
Uday: Hume promise karo ki tum hamari ye khwaish pori kao di
Manayata: Achha promise...
Uday: To phir suno humne tumhare liye ek gift bheja hai tum use pahnogi ham donu ki reception pe zaror pehna
Mayata was confused..
He was about to leave that he cupped her face and came closer and closer and kissed her check
Whispered in her ears: Zaror pehna







Edited by namrockssssssss - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Loved Manyata and Uday's romance early morning..

thanks for the pm..

take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
loved it.. bt thodi c aur detailing hoti to...bt it was nice..kash serial mein bhi aisa kuch dekhadaen..cont soon..thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
lovely da...continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was hot! You should definitely continue!

Simran :D...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
very nice thanks for the pm😊cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
waooo,itss awesome!!! thanks for d pm,waitng for d nxt update!!!!!!!!
Edited by pia.raha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: namrocksss

Guys any ideas for next part??????????????

hey friend its hard to say anything because manyata didn't want to do anything with UV
SO THE IDEA THAT I WILL GIVE U IS THAT WHEN IN THE MORNING THE WAKE UP THEY COULD HAVE FIGHT MAYBE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19

Guys,

There are some things that I want to tell you about me;

1. That I am not a good writer so

2. Don't hope me detailing manveer scenes

3. And I will update chapter 3 on Monday/Tuesday

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is a gr8 os👏...pls continue show dem fighting n making up to each oder or her being guilty for making out n developing feelings for uv n show scenes of manyata jealousy...😃

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