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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Loved it...please update soon... It's getting more intresting...I want to know what's the gift!!! Please please please update soon dear... And thanks for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update! Plzzz continue soon thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3
Manyata's POV
Ye mujhe kya ho raha mein Uday ki taraf khichi kyun ja rahi hoon???????????
Mein to usse nafrat karti thi na to aab mujhe kya ho raha hai???????????
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She had reached her room and there she saw a gift she unwrapped it and was shocked to what was in it a backless gown
Uday: manyata tum yeh gown hamari reception pe pehnogi
Manyata: Mein ye kabhi nehi pahne wali
Uday: pehna to padega tumhe
Manyata: Par kyun???????????
Uday: Kyunki tumne humse promise kiya hai
Uday leaves

She came down Uday was waiting for her there he was shocked to see her, how beautiful was she looking.
Uday whispered in her ear: Bauhat khubsurat
Manyata blushed and ten Uday offered his hand and lead her to the car...

At the reception
Announcer: Welcome the newly married couple Maharaj Udaybeer Singh and Maharani Manyata Udaybeer Singh. We request them to please come on the here stage and cut the cake.
Everyone was happy to see the newly married couple except one and we all know our Dearest Jai Bhai
Manyata and Uday headed towards the stage and cut the cake and everyone ate it.
Manyata was sitting on a chair beside her family.
Manyata: Maa mein wahan aap sabko bahut miss karti hoon
Komal: Beta hum bhi par aab aapki zindagi badal choki hai aab aap ek Maharani, ek patni , ek bahu aur ek nand hain aab aapki zimadariyan hain jo aapko puri karni hai.
Manyata: Hain Maa
tabhi Uday wahan aa jata hai
Uday: so, maa beti ki gaap shap
Manyata: Haan kuch aisa hi
Uday: Aunty Komal kya Manyata ke sath ek kar sakta hoon
Komal: Why not Uday beta, She is all yours!!
Uday bending down and offering hand: So priencss ek dance ho jaye
Manyata just smiled and they headed towards the dance floor the song Kuch Khass from fasion was played.
Manyata kept her hand Uday's shoulder and Uday kept his hands on her bare back first she first she felt uncomfortable but he was her husband...









Edited by namrockssssssss - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
This was the gown that she wore!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by namrockssssssss - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Hey, You are a good writer.I like this short & sweet update.
Thanks for the PM.
I'll be waiting for next chap.
Pls continue ASAP.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Loved it...it's so short and sweet though romantic update...please update next part soon..,thanks for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
nice update👏 but its 2 short cont soon thnxs for the PM😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
lovely update.. do continue soon..

thanks for the pm

take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
omg i loved it...good chapter👏...ps thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Nice update. Thnks 4 the PM. cotinue soon.

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