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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Loved it... But waiting for next one bcaus I want to see UV in action against that Majnu...and thank god and u that Manyata is not so silly in your story as in real DEK...but please update soon...thanks for this update and PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh i loved both parts...that's little bit similar to the story line...i loved it...plz pm me when u update...if u can!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 3:

He was Yuvraaj UdayVeer Singh and fear itself feared him... more than afraid he was angry about Akaash's doings... he had to punish that wrench...who had dared to come between him and his queen...

He was angry very very angry... angry on himself for having lost his senses over Manyata... he was angry because he gave into his heart and didn;t think from his head...

Everytime he was with Manayata it was as if his sense of thinking became numb...but things were taking a different course now Manyata...knew his weakness and she was taking advantage of it... No he woulden't let that happen nobody took advantage of Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh..No one not even Manyata...

Meanwhile Jay and Aryaan are plotting to destroy Manyata's life

"Akaash if u love Manyata so much then why don't u try to convince to stop the marriage ?"... Jay suggests

"No... i don't love Moniya... i only want revenge... revenge from Udayveer..." "The only emotions that i feel are of hatred and revenge... unless there is Uday's blood dripping from my hands... my soul will not rest in peace...nd i can go to any extents to do that" he says and takes a glass vase in his hand and breaks it... the pieces shatter on the floor with a loud noise... Jay gets scared and startled and takes big gulps as she stares at the broken pieces...

"Jay...u have to help me..." Akaash says... Jaynandidni decides to Play with him making him plead and beg to her... "nd why should i do that...what will i get..." she says proudly...

Akaash suddenly pulls her close by the waist...Jay is caught of guard and her hands press against his chest and she looks into his determined face... Akaash brings his face closer to her...and Jay edges closer to him closing her eyes thinking that he would kiss her... Akaash smirks at her... nd whispers..."Bcz our goal is the same..." and lets go off her suddenly... Jaynandini gets insulted and Akaash enjoys that... She walks away in a huff... and Is about to retreat from his house...when Akaash says, "think about Jay...I'll get Moniya and u''LL get Uday..."

At the mention of Uday...Jay stops and turns around pondering over a while...nd says.. "Ok... I will help u" and she stomps off.

Manayata is in her room and she is disgusted about Akaash's doings when doctor saab asks her where Uday was...

Manyata says that she hadn't seen Uday since... their fight in the morning... Manyata gets concerned for Uday and immediately she starts worrying about his safety...she immediately goes to his room to see if he was there but he wasn't... she asks everyone in the house but nobody knew where Uday was... she gets very scared now and she decides to go looking for him... alone by herself,,,, the palace guards try to persuade her to accompany her...but she turns a deaf ear to all of them and goes off to find him herself,...

She keeps searching for Uday everywhere and unknowingly reaches a deserted street...it was dark all around and not a single soul was in sight...some biker guys were at a distance and some street drunks... Manayata was getting very scared now... She kept calling Uday... she had left her cell too at home in he franticness to look for Uday... cold chills went up her spine... she needed him right now... his strong arms to comfort her and take her to safety like always... The Biker guys and the street drunks noticed her walking alone and they came up to her slowly... Manyata sensed their presence and started walking quickly but a drunk blocked her way... "hello beauty...lsot ur way home... may we help???' he said and the rest of them started laughing aloud... They were like those hungry wolves...and were waiting for just one opputunity to pounce on her and rip her apart... Maanyata felt terrified... but she mustered enough courage to say..." get out of my way... u don';t know who i am... so dodn mess with me... and she took a step... but the others started closing in on her and she took small and staggering steps backwards... The others started laughing hearing her speak like a celebrity... " who are u baby... some place's queen?"

At this the others drank heavily from their beer bottles and laughed even harder...Manayata flared up and said... "Yes i am Yuvraani Manyata of Devgarh so talk with respect"... The others were getting impatient now... the bearded drunk who ahd blocked Manyata's way whisked Manyata's duppatta away... Now Manyata was horrified and she scream Uday's name...

The other's kept laughing on her... when the drunkard was just going to grab her a hand caught his hand... The voice rang out strong and deep... like an angry lion's majestic growl... "Nobody lays a hand on my Princess" Manyata grabbed a handful of his shirt and held onto it... "Uday..." she whispered... tears rolling down her soft innocent face..." Uday gave her a reassuring look and then turned to look back at the offender... " you messed with the wrong person... Nobody i repeat nobody dares ever touch Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh's Queen..." he thundered... his face clouded with anger... the drunkard was petrified for a few minutes even the others were perplexed at the sudden advent of this Majestic figure... But the drunkard recovered shortly... and said "Eh hero... move from the way..." Uday tightened his fist and his knuckes turned white... he was heaving with anger... He punched the drunkard's face with full force... and the impact left blood spurting from his face... the others retraced back their steps in fear... and ran away... Uday kept hitting him and puching the drunk... he noticed the empty beer bottle fallen beside him and picked it up and smashed it on the drunkards's head... Manyata stared horrified as a gush of blood flowed from his head... Uday was still mercilessly beatin up the lifeless body...

Manayata had to intervene then... "Uday leave him Uday...leave him he'll die...Uday please... I beg u..."... and Uday let go off the limp body his breath coming out raggedly..."Let's go princess he said and placed her dupatta around her shoulders and took her hand"... Manyata followed in daze staring at her rescuer...

Edited by SUV_Ashton - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Very nice update. It was amezing. I hate j and ariyan/akash whatever. It was short. Try to make it a little long and thanks for them. Loved the part. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Wow this was amazing 👏
Uday beating the crap out of somebody is always a treat. And omg Jay was expecting a kiss from Akash 🤣 . Rab ne bana di jodi 😆
Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: fia21

Wow this was amazing 👏
Uday beating the crap out of somebody is always a treat. And omg Jay was expecting a kiss from Akash 🤣 . Rab ne bana di jodi 😆
Update soon!


Thank u!!!
... Jay is such a "down" to earth character 1 can expect nthn but desponess🤣🤣
Yeah next part coming shortly
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Archi02

Very nice update. It was amezing. I hate j and ariyan/akash whatever. It was short. Try to make it a little long and thanks for them. Loved the part. Update soon.


M glad u liked it!!! Thank u
Yeah i knoe it was a little short i'll try to make it longer next tyme,...
Do keep reading
Next part cmng shortly😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Fab chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope u update soon nah very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Awesome update.J n majnu ughhh.anyways loved it 2 the core.cont as soon as possible.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Hey guys the next part is here...
I hope i'm bale to live up 2 ur ManVeer MOments expectations...
If there's nythng u want me 2 add or make some thing happen for manveer Suggestions are welcome!!!..
plz pm me or leave ur cmmnts..
I'll be glad if i can improvise
Edited by SUV_Ashton - 13 years ago

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