manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: maneet..

swini ye soulmate hi h.
Love feeling nyt tk post krugi.

Thanx alot ol of u.

Pari


ha ha ha...rofl..rofl..Swini tu story ka naam hi bhul gayi ya tu sirf writer ka naam parti hai story ka nahi...ya phir Pari ki update main itna kho gayi ki bhool gayi..he he he..issliye kehti hoon apni behen seh thora help liya kar..after all main if main tujhse pehle seh hi hoo,han nahi toh.n Pari tu jalt love feeling update kar warna..>:-(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: princessnia


ha ha ha...rofl..rofl..Swini tu story ka naam hi bhul gayi ya tu sirf writer ka naam parti hai story ka nahi...ya phir Pari ki update main itna kho gayi ki bhool gayi..he he he..issliye kehti hoon apni behen seh thora help liya kar..after all main if main tujhse pehle seh hi hoo,han nahi toh.n Pari tu jalt love feeling update kar warna..>:-(


shutup u idiot..hasna bant kar behen ki naam pein black spot.n i m really sry Pari vo maine galti seh love feelings ki jagah soulmate likh liya tha.so sry yaar.luv u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: princessnia


ha ha ha...rofl..rofl..Swini tu story ka naam hi bhul gayi ya tu sirf writer ka naam parti hai story ka nahi...ya phir Pari ki update main itna kho gayi ki bhool gayi..he he he..issliye kehti hoon apni behen seh thora help liya kar..after all main if main tujhse pehle seh hi hoo,han nahi toh.n Pari tu jalt love feeling update kar warna..>:-(


shutup u idiot.Nia nahi tera naam toh NIKAMMI hona chahiye tha.ab hasna bant kar behen ki naam pein black spot.n Pari i m so sry yaar.vo galti seh maine love feelings ki jagah soulmate likh diya.so sry n luv u alot Pari sweetheart.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
U R ALWAYS AMAZING DEAR
sorry i couldnt comment but i read it regularly
this is for u👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yaar but ek cheez ladke kab se rone lage huh😆😆😆😆 lol anyways your update was serious tho so much pain so much love awesome now i am actually loving ur This SS alot too love loved loved it pari keep up the good effort awesome man u have a epic mind babes😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Manveer SS...
WITHOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:sOULMATE...
Part-9th...

Manyata jail me wo so ri h or uday k baare me soch ri h...

Or uday bi uske baare me sochta h...
'kal manyata tumhari bail ho jayegi'
Kal tum azaad hojaougi...

Manyata'pta ni kal bi wo mujhse milne ayega ki ni...

In nxt mrng..

Jagat manyata ko court leke phuchta h...
Uday court me wait krta h..
Manyata ka hal phr se behal ho jata h...
Use pta ni uday ander h,wo bar-2 piche mudke use dekhti h..
Wo drne lgti h,
Kaapne lgti h,
'ni mujhe ander ni jana,phr se sb chilaaye...
Jagat:manyata aisa kuch ni hoga...tum ander to chalo.
M:ni.main bilkul ni jaungi..she s vry feared..
J:uday ander h,agr ni aai to uday tumse bat ni krega smjhi.
Hum ja rhe h,tum ander aajana agar aana h to...

Jagat or sb chale jate h..
Uday'jagat manyata kha h?
J:wo bah...
Judge cum...
Uday'manyata kha h?
J:wo ander ni aa ri h..,use dar lg rha h..
U;o,demit..uska hona jruri h...
Juduge:mr.uday apki client manyata kha h?
U:u owner wo bs aane wali h...
He s worried...

Kuch deir bad..
Uday ka gussa uske sir pe chadha h..
Bar-2 wo or jgat bahar dekh rhe h.

Judge:mr.uday ye adalat ka tym weast kr rhe h aap..
U:i m sry u owner,main aaj manyata ki...
J:uday manyata aa gai..
Uday bck turn dekhta h,manyata dari shmi,usne apni wite duppte se apne aap ko cover kiya h,or dhire-2 aati h.
Tb uday useke pas jata h,use pyar handle krta h,or witnes box me khada kr deta h...

U:u owner tym weast k liye maafi chahta hu,weise to mujhe manyata ki puri zimmedari soup di gai h..lekin iski bail karwana tha,or mujhe court se puri trh bail krwani h.
Judge:mr.uday manyata ki bail aap apni responsibility me krwa rhe h,manyata ko agr kuch hua,ya wo bhaag jati h..
To aapne kha tha,aap apni job chod denge...
Manyata uday ki trf decent najro ki trf dekh ri thi...

U:g maine kha tha,or main aaj bi usi bat pe kayam hu..
Judge:mr.uday aapki req.puri ki jati h,manyata ki bail manjoor ki jati h...

Judge shaheb manyata ki trf dekhte h..
J:mr.uday i hope is case ka faisla aapke haq me jaye.
God bless her.
.
Jagat nd uday happy h.
Manyata tum ab jail me ni rhogi.
M:to main kha rhugi?
U:uska intzaam ho gya h.chalo mere 7th.jagat bad me milta hu..

Uday manyata jaate h,
M:tumhari shadi ho ri h na?
Uday stop d car nd manyata ki trf dekhta h,or manyata uski trf dekhti h.

Both in eye cntct..
U:ha..
M:kb h?
U:kal..aaj mahndi or sangeet h..
M:haldi ka rang kyn ni chada tumpe?

Uday chup ho jata h,qki uska jwab khud ni h uske pas...
'manyata utro,tumhein yha rhna h.
Manyata ghr dekhti h
'main akeli ni rhugi yha..
U:ni tum akeli ni ho..
2ladies const.tumhare sath h..
'main chlta hu manyata,njre churate huye wo bolta h..
Wo car ki trf jaane lgta h..
M:tumne mere sawal ka jwab ni diya..

Uday use mudke dekhta h he thout'mere pas koi jwab ni manyata,pr mujhe frq pdhta h'

Manayata(thout)-'mein hoti kaun hu ye sawal puchne wali,mera koi haq ni h.'
Manyata uday ko dekhti hui,ghr me bhaag jati h...

Uday bi wha se sadness me chala jata h..

Ye jo bi hua uday ka manyata ko ghr chodna,uske 7th pyar se bhehave krna Ye sb jaynandini dekh ri hoti h.
Jay court se hi uday ka picha krti h.
Then jay'ye ldki aakhir h kaun'pagal to ni lgti,ye uday k itne kareeb keise?mujhe kuch krna pdega...ise to shayed uday ne btaya ni hoga ki uski shadi ho ri h..
Thik h wo adhura kam main pura kr deti hu.
Ab frnds ko card dene nikali hu to apni new frnd ko bi dedu...

Jay manyata k ghr jati h,
Open d door.
M:g boliye.
J:tumhara nam kya h?ah,main uday ki hone wali wife..
Manyata surprized ki ye yha keise...
'oh,aaiye na..main
J:ni,mujhe ni aana..uday shayed bolna bhul gya,lekin main to ni bhul skti na..
Ye lo hmari shadi ka card,aana jrur..
Is shadi me main kisior ko dekhu chahe na dekhu tumhein dekhna chahti hu...
Wo card deke chali jati h..
Manyata wo crd faikti h,main ni aa skti,us din bi to...

Kbi ni kbi..phr wo beith jati h,or card pe uday ka nam dekhti h...
She s do'nt cry bt wo heartly bhoot painful cryng kr ri h...

In nxt day
Uday's home sangeet nd mehndi ceremony chal ri h...

Jay mehndi lga k uday k pas jati h
'uday btao tumhara nam kha likha h.?
U:tumhara hath h,tumne likhwa h,tumhi dhund lo..
J:uday,hm nai zindgi shuru krne ja rhe h..or aise,weise tumhein pta h agar tum apna nam dhund loge to tum mujgse bhoot pyar krte ho...
U:phr to mujhe kbi wo nam ni milega jay...
Wo jay ko dur krke chala jata h...

Jay jealous or nafrat se xpression deti h...

Jay uday k 7th dance krti h,
Lekin uday koi intrest ni leta or use chod k party chod k apne rum me chala jata h...
'meri feelings ki koi kdr ni h,jb apne dil ko mnata hu ki meri zindgi me jay aane wali h..pr mujhe ajeeb sa gusa ajeeb sa drd hota h...
'kal kya meri zindgi puri trh bdal jayegi...

Udhr manyata cnfused h ki wo jaye ki na jaye tbi jagat aata h.
J:manyata keisi ho?kya soch ri ho?
M:soch ri hu uski shadi me jau ki ni..
J:uski kaun h,uska nam uday h.
M(thout):hontho pe wo nam lene se kuch ajeeb lgta h,mujhe kuch hone...
'lekin main is shadi me ni jana chahti.
J:kyn?
M:mujhe shadiyo me jane se ghabrahat hoti h,main shadi hi me to ja ri thi tbi...
J:tbi!kya?
M:kuch ni...
J:dekho apne dar ko bhagana sikho manyata.jb tk dar leke jiyo gi tb tk duniya tumhein or drayegi...main chlta hu faisla tumhara hi hoga...

Rat bhar uday sochta rhta h,
Manyata rat bhar apni cnfusion dur krne me lgi h..
Jay khush h ki uski kal shadi h...

Now cum important day uday nd jay mariage day...

Nd other side manyata remembring jagat words
Now she decied yes i m going uday's mariage...

Uday s nt happy sbko fake smile de rha h...
Apne aap ko janbujh k bg kr rha h..
Komal-idhr aa,dekh ye teri groom dress aachi h na..
U:ha maa,aapki pasnd h aachi hi hogi...
Jagat cum.
Hi,uday cngrats.
U:oh,thanx bro.
K:tum log baatein kro main aati hu...
J:kya bat h,ronak kha gayeb h chahre ki..
U:ni yar kuch ni,wo thak gya hu...
J:manyata bi aati to aacha hota pr.
Uday ko thoda ajeeb lgta h wo apna face turn bck krleta h'ni aacha hua ni aai,main uske...
'any way jagat main taiyar hone ja rha hu,..
J:finaly,tum dulhe bn jaoge...i m waitng.
Baarat to main bi le jauga...
Uday smiled...

Manyata Udhr taiyar hoti h.
She s carry a red suit nd simple lyt jwellery...

Jay taiyar h dulhan bnke,wo weddng venue pe ja ri h...

Uday bi taiyar h wid fake smile komal uski aarti utarti h... Br:uday aasli zindgi ab se apki shuru ho ri h...
Un:finaly,hmari bhabi aajayegi..
Sb baarat leke niklte h...

Manyata ko rasta to pta ni h...wo road pe ake khadi h...dari shmi..

Then nter in vijaybhai australia se wapis aye h.
'jaybhai tum to bridal bnke chali gai,hm keise aye.
J:wow,vijay bhai aap aa gye..suniye airport pe aapke liye gaadi bhijawa di h.jaldi se aajaiye.

Manyata koi lift ni maang ri,bs wo chali ja ri h,

Jay nd uday dono phuchte h wedding hall..
Komal again aarti krti h dono ki...
Wo jake dono jake wedding couch pe beithte h...
Jay bhoot khush h,
Uday fake smile me sbke saamne h...

Manyata ja ri hoti h,tbi wha se vijay ki gaari jati h..
Vijay manyata ko dekh k khud car rokta h'execuse me mam.main aapki hlp kr skta hu..
Manyata dar jati h or jaldi-2 aage bdhne lgti h.
Vijay car se utr k are,aap dar kyn rhi ho,main aache ghr ka hu..
M:ni mujhe ni jana apke 7th,main chali jaugi apne dost ki shaddi me.
V:ah,i tell u.wo kya h na mujhe akele beithe rhna pasnd ni,aap mere 7th chalegi to aacha hoga.
Weise khi jay-uday ki shadi me to ni ja ri ho.
Manyata 'ha whi jana h.
V:relax itna dar kyn ri ho?arey tummujhe apna bhai maan skti ho,agr bhai manti ho to vijaybhai bolna..weise main ek chota-mota lawyer hu,uday k jeisa bda lawyer bnna sapna h mera..chaliye wrna shadi khtm ho jayegi.dro mt..u trust me.
Manyata phr himmat krke beith jati h...

Or udhr mariage start hogai h.
Wo mandap pe beith k kuch puja kr rhey hote h...

Then tbi pandit g khte h 'kanyadan krne wale ko bulaiye..
To brijraj komal khud aate h..
Ab jeise hi phle uday k hath pr jay ko hath rkhna hota h..

Tbi vijay-manyata bhoot phuchte h
Vijay:manyata bhai aap aao jaldi se,main bhagta hu..
Vijay ander jata h'o sry sry jra sa late ho gya..
J:kya vijaybhai mujhe lga ayenge ni..
V:ni,arey bad me smjhata hu.shadi kro phle.
'arey wo kha rh gai..
J:kaun?
V:of oh tum phr ruk gai,arey hmari dusri bhai bni h aaj..

Jeise hi jay apna hath uday k hath pe rkhne jati h tbi..

Manyata ki ntry hoti h hall me...
Or ekdum se uday ko kuch ajeeb sa feel hua 'wo achanak idhr-udhr dekhne lga,or usne apna hath hta diya or khada ho gaya... Obivously,sb hairaan h uday k aise behaviour se..

Then manyata ander aati h..
Manyata uday ko dekhti h,uday manyata ko..
Uday thout'mujhe tumhara hi intzar tha..'
Manyata thout'mujhe aana ni tha lekin main apne aap ko rok ni pai.'..

Precap-manyata ne btaya apna past uday ko...

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Nice SS Pari. I read all the parts of this SS.
Awesome update,
Pls continue soon.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
it was beautiful continue soon da
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Loved it...eagerly waiting for Manyata's past... Please update soon dear...thanks for this update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awesome update👏 dnt wry😊 dek wnt and i am sure nt in july for sure
dnt wrt be happy😉

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