manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for late reply as I was at work. Nice update. Loved it. very keen to know what happened to Manyata! ANd pls yahan par bhi uday and jay ki marriage cancel karwao jaldi se.. lol

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it...but update next part soon...this suspense is killing me...thanks for this update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer SS...
WITHOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:sOULMATE...
Part-11th...

Aaj 3no bahr ni jate...
Sb apne rum me h.. Bt un 3no k mind me bar-2 manyata ka bheegi hui body saamne aa ri h..
3no whi soch rhe h..

Murari:manyata beta,aaj saari phn k chalna party me.
M:saari kyn?
Mu:beta maine aap dono se ek bat chupai,aapko udhr ldke wale bi dekhne ayenge.jinke bete ki shadi h unke relatives h..
M:of oh papa aap bi na..main koi saari ni phne wali..ha ni to
Mu:ek bar bs dekh le mere liye..plz..
M:hmmm..okay..

In night
Manayata ready ho ri h.
Shani bi ready ho ri h..
Or tbi aaryan aata h,
Uncle aap kha ja rhe h..
Mu:beta auto laane ja rha hu,late ho rhe h hm..
Then dipak aata h.
Uncle main bi chalta hu..
Mu:ha chalo beta..
Dipak or murari jate h auto laane..

Then jb murari auto wale se bat krta h
Tb dipak use janbujh k push krta h,or bolta h'aap bat kijiye,main ghr phone krke aata hu,mujhe chodke mt jana'
Mu:ha beta..lekin jaldi aana..
Lekin wo bhaaga-2 ghr aata h
Shanti k pas'aunty uncle raste me unka accident ho gya h'

Shanti shocked me aa jati h,manyata dusre rum me hoti h.
Shanti na yha dekhti h na wha
Wo bahr apne husbnd k pas bhaagne lgti h...paglo ki trh...

Then phr aaku aata h,wo door lock krdeta h...
Wha music system rkha wo chala dete h ful volume me..

Manyata ko ajeeb lgta h,wo saari phn chuki h.'ye music itni tej awaz me kisne chalya h'
Wo bahr aati h,wo 3 baithe hue h aram se..
M:ye kya pagalpan h sound km kro,wo sound km krne jati h aku uska hath pkd leta h..
Aku:ni awaz to km ni hoga.
M:dimag to thikane pe h..
Mummy-papa kha h?
Dipak-wo to gye..tumhein chod k..
M:tum 3no ye keisi behaki baatein kr rhe ho..
Aaryan:qki tumne hmein behka diya h.
Aku:bheega bdan dikha k,tumne hmein uksa diya h.

Manyata darne lgti h or rone lgti h'plz forgive me she s cryng alot nd say'mummy-papa.'

Aku:koi ni sunega..
Papa ko dipak auto dhudne k liye kaafi dur chod aya h,or mummy to papa ko dhudne gai h...

Wo 3no dhire-2 apni shrts nd vests remove krte h...

M:tum log itne gande ho,maine tumsb pe bharosa kiya tha..plz mere 7th aisa mt kro..

Aaryan:hmeine kha tha kya trust krne k liye..

Aku wo manyata ko weist se tightly pkd leta h..
Nd wo zbrdsti use smooch krta h...
Arayan nd dipak wo manyata k hair jo fold the use open krta h,nd bck neck weist touched nd killng style kiss krte h..
Then aku jb smooch leave up krta h tb wo 2no baari-2 use tightly smooch krte h...
Phr jb wo leave up krte h,tb manyata wha se bhaagne ki koshish krti h
Lekin 1ne uska hath pkda,2nd uska waist pkda or 3rd ne uska leg pkd k zmeen pe gira diya..

Wo bhoot chila ri h lekin uski awaz music k aage db jati...
Finaly 3boys remove hr saari pallu..
Wo apne hath se apne breast ko cover kr ri h,
Bt 1st aku uska hath remove krta h,nd breast pe hungry dog ki trh use kiss krna start krta h..
Aku phle uska rape krta h.
Wo dono dusre rum me beith k wine pine lgte h...
Manyata shouted alot..
Aku apne teeth se uske blouse ko fhadh deta h..
And apna pura weight manyata k uper dal diya h..
Wo ki puri body pe apni body se rubbing kr rha h,manyata chikh ri h chila ri h,bt uski pukaar sunne wala koi ni..
Wo kutto ki trh uski bebasi ka fayeda utha rha tha...

Apne nails ko manyata ko usne buri trh uski body pe lga rha h..
she
straggled... Screaming in pain... As
aku
bites her viciously everywhere...
Ripping
her cloths off...
Manyata pleads for mercy but no
use...
Tonight she will be his... No matter
what...
She will be his...
Manyata couldn't say anything... As his
mouth
started rip... Bite her tongue...
Lips... Blood
oozing out...
Manyata cries louder... But no use...
Aku totaly luk
hungry dog ... Nothing
could
stope him... Nothing... His
aggressive
body was ripping her apart...
She cried louder... It echoed
through the
home... But no use... And hardly
anyone knew
who owns this land...
Manyata fainted with aku
aggressive
body..
Manyata k aankho se aashu nikalne bi bnd ho gye,wo bs siskiya le ri thi..

Manyata 's fuly is nude body..
Nd aku njoyng d manyata 's body...
Jb wo thak gya tb,wo dono bi baari-2 aye..
Or whi sb kiya manyata k 7th jo aku ne kiya...

Then other side shani murari ko dhud leti h wo saari bat btati h,
To jb wo ate h tb door lock,wo ghabra jate h,dar jate h..
Wo police ko inform krte h...

Or idhr manyata puri trh buri halat me h..wo puri nude pdi hui h,
Wo 3no uske saamne beith ke wine nd snacks njoy kr rhey.

Manyata ro ri h bt no cryng sound..
Uski puri body khun se bhari pdi h...
Wo 3no k dekh ri h,bt usme himat ni h wha se bhaagne ki ya kuch krne ki...

Then tbi aku ek wine bottle pi k niche rkhta h,tbi manyata ki njr us bottle pe jati h..
Wo kisi bi trh apne aap ko saari se cover krti h,wo 3no apne me bg h.

Wo slowly-2 rote-2 bdi muskil se us bottle ko leti h,whi rkhe table pe us bottle ko hit krti h,
To wo 3no dekhte h
Phle aaryan jeise uske pas aata h weise hi wo uske stomach me war krti h,to ekdum ryt jgh jake lgti h or wo gir jata h...
Then manyata himmat krke unki trf wo botle k piece krke khadi hoti h,apni saari ko pick up kiye..
Wo dono dr jate h,aryan drd se tdp rha h.
Aku dhire-2 manyata ki trf bdhta h,'manyata mujhe dedo ye,sudden wo uska hath pkd leta h,tbi manyata apne dusre hath me wo botle pkad k aku k head pe gehra war krti h,wo to whi behosh hogya.dipak aku k piche hi tha to manyata or dipak k bich me jyada diffrence ni h. manyata use nafrat njro se dekhti h or uski trf achanak bhagti h,or wo bottle us lower part me dal deti h..or wo to hath k hath whi mar jata h,aaryan bi mar chuka h..
Aku k sirf sir pe chot lgi h,to wo behosh h.
Or manyata whi roti roti gir jati h,tbi police wo drwaaza tod k ander aati h..
Or shanti aati h'manyata..
Bs wo manyata ki halt dekh k whi gir jati h..
Murani ander aata h to wo bi whi apne sir pe hath rkh k beith jata h..
Bt shanti mar chuki h...
Murari manyata k pas jata h'manyata beta.

Manyata darke piche ho jati h'ni mujhe mt chuiye,main us layek ni hu.'main apki beti ni hu...

Phr manyata ko hospital le jaya jata h
Doctor say iska rape hua h...
Bt jo 3no ldke k baap the unhone police walo ko khrid rkha tha..
Un 3no k father ka khna tha 'hmare beto ko china h us ldki ne,hmein wo ldki jail me hmesha chahiye,mere bacho pe koi dosh ni aana chahiye,aisa case bnao ki wo ldki khud is case pe fhans jaye'
Manyata ko jail me dal diya gya..wo koi reaction ni deti thi..
'uske 7th bura behave hota tha..
Use bhoot mara jata tha,policstation me us waqt wha ki incharge ms.maya thi or ek gaint tha mr.vivek..
Wo dono manyata ko tourchr krte the...
Jhuthi statment bnai gai thi ki'un ldko ne kuch ni kiya,tune unhe kha to ye sb drama krne k liye,or jb wo teri sachai duniya walo ko btane ja rhe the tune apni apne pariwar k bdnaami k dar se unhe mar diya or khud rapiest pose leke beith gai'

Manyata ko koi reaction ni tha,wo sign ni kr ri thi,wo kuch bol ni ri thi..wo faint ho gai tb doctor lockup me aya,or usne btaya ki'wo pragnant h..

Ms.maya ne 3no k father ko ye bat btai,3no ne yhi kha ki'ye bacha is duniya me ni aana chahiye..

Manyata ko alg kamre me lejake..
Ms.maya:manyata tu maa bnne wali h..tera shahra h tere pait me,iski kya glti h..
Manyata k chahre pe thodi shine aati h.wo maya ki trf dekhti h.
'dekh tu azaad ho jayegi,is paper pe sign krde,
Wo apne pait pe bde pyar se hath fairti h...
Or wo sign krdeti..statment pe sign hote hi,wo manyata k bck pe dande se hit krti h..
Manyata ko whi jhtka lgta h or vomt krdeti h,wo drd se rone lgti h.use weisa hi chodke sb chale jate h...

Use maya roj marti thi,bck pe stomach pe jb tk uska bacha ni mar gya tb tk...

Or jb bacha mar gya phr manyata puri trh pather bn gai thi,usne court me kuch ni bola,ulta
apni izzat uclte dekh murari ne adalat me hi dum tod diya..
Or manyata hmesha k liye jail me chali aai..
Maine aaj tk unki family k kisi member ka chahra ni dekha,unhone bi ni dekha.

(Stry khtm ho gai h,then)

Manyata bad pe beith k bhoot buri trh ro ri h,headdown krke...
Jagat also cryng..

Uday wall se touched hoke khada h,he s also cryng bt no more tears in his eyes,wo manyata ki trf dekhta h or bs use innocent trike se manyata ko dekhta h,
Nd ye saari stry DS ND VIJAY NE BI SUNA.. Nd ofcourse both also cryng..
Ds ander rum me aati h wo uday ki trf dekhti h,lekin uday manyata ko dekhta h...
Ds manyata k pas jati h,'manyata beta..
Manyata rote-2 ds ko hug kr leti h..
Ds:beta royo mt,ab to main chahti hu ki un darindo ko sja mile...meri trf dekho manyata un ko sja milegi,or ek bar tu phr izzat k 7th is duniya me jiyegi...

Uday manyata ko continious dekha ja rha h...
M:ni,aunty main shayed case jeet bi jau,lekin phr se izzat k 7th jeena namumkin,duniya ek izzat gwai ldki ko keise dekhti h,jeise ise abi kha jayenge..
'main dubara hs ni skti,mujhe dubara mera pariwar ni mil skta,mujhe mera ghr ni mil skta...nd she s cryng alot alot...
Vijay rote huye'manyata bhai hm aapke 7th h.'..

Uday apne tears clean up krta h,or khta h main tumhein izzat or respect dunga is duniya..

Manyata uski trf dekhti h'mujhe pta h aap mujhe begunaah saabit krdenge,pr phr is duniya me...mujhe dar lgta h is duniya se..
Ds khin na khin uday ki bat ka mtlb smjh ri h.Ds:keise koi is phool si bachi ko masal skta h..
Uday gusse me'main tumhin izat respect dunga,wo manyata ka hath pkdta h or niche le jata h... Jagat piche bhaagta h unke..

V:dadi ye kha gya?
Ds:whi jo ise krna chahiye,jo insan manyata ko janta tk ni tha,uske liye rota tha,kuch alg hi rishta h inka..shayed vijay tumhein dukh hoga jo uday krne gya h...lekin uday ki khusi usi me h..

Continueos...

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a heart wracking story yarr!!! Hats off to you!!! I was littrally crying...but loved it... But want to see uday's next step...please update soon...thanks for this heart touching update... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG..babe u made me cry...while readng manyatz story i was cryng...i think uday z gonna marry her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG u made me shiver yaar it was so heart touching . I literaly cried yaar I know now uday will definitely marry manyata hurray hurray!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update it was just awesome abhi tak toh bas pyaar pe pagal kara that tune ab toh senti bhi kardiya i loved it and that was really heart touching 😭😭😭😭 i feel sad for manyata and uday will defo marry her well in DEk manyata ki shaadi uday sai ho rahi hai and jay is baadli hui dulhaan but here its ooposite yeh idea waha se churaya kya jo bhi hoh watin for u next updaate luv u dear muahhh 😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
its really a very heart touching story yaar,,,,,,,, 😭😭
yaar, i just love ur story alot,,,, its different from all of what we are wrting,,,,,,,,,👏👏👏
really ,,,,,,just mind blowing yaar,,,,,,but its really very sad nd depressing fom manyata side😭😭
i also think uday is going to marry her in next update,,,,i really wish it happens
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg!! What a heart wrenching update! Poor manyata... Phew! I just skipped those parts... Didnot had the courage to read them.. Made me cry...

Just hope that it is all good for manyata now.
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was really so well scary I just want to murder those guys,though I didn't understand much of the part as I am really bad at reading hindi in english but whatever I understood was something worst that may happen to a girl...once again I want to kill those guys

The world is full of such treacherous fiends we really need to beware of them.

Update soon to show Manyata happy pls

Edited by shana0127 - 13 years ago

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