manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WoW! Loved your update.

Thanks for the pm. Very interesting story!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manveer SS...
WITHOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:sOULMATE...
Part-8th...

Uday apne rum me jata h,nd close d door,
Nd cryng alot...

'i don't why i m cryng...lekin mujhe aisa lgta h mera koi intzaar kr rha h...
Meri zindgi hmesha se kisi or k liye lgti h,lekin jay k liye aaj tk ni lgi.'...

Manyata in lock up
She s sleeping
Nd sudden wake up nd start cryng...

Ladies const.-wht happen beta?why u r cryng?
Manyata give ans.
'koi ro rha h mere liye'
L.Const. Cnfused
'wht?who s cryng 4 u?
Manyata slowly-2 speedly cryng
'pta ni,lekin koi mere liye ro rha h..'

L.const.-9 beta
Aisa kuch ni h,tumne bura sapna dekha hoga..

Uday fall on bad nd cryng also,usne apne nees ko apne stomach me krleta h...

Manyata also fall on earth nd little bit cryng..
Both cryng alot nd rote-2 so jate h...

In mrng...
Manyata wakeup..
Wo apne lockup se hi dekhti h'wo abi tk ni aya?

Uday wid sadness wakeup..nd rudely ready 4 going court...

Uday aata h.
Br:gud mrng beta.
U:gud mrng dad..
Main late ho rha hu,bye every1
K:arey breakfast.
U:mood ni h..
Wo chala jata h...

Jay calng uday.
'hello uday..gud mrng.
U:gud mrng..bolo.
J:ab bolna sunna wo waqt gya...
U:to cal kyn kiya h?tumhein aachi trh pta tha main abi mariage ni krna chahta tha.
J:mujhe tumpe bharosa ni h,khin us pagl ldki se shadi krli to..
U:jay wo pagal ni h,dubaara agar use is nam se bulaya to mujhe se bat mt krna..
J:o,o itna gusa chalo sry..
Anyway,kal to rasme shuru h mr.uday kal chadhega chahre ka asli rang..
U:bye.cal cut...
Uday vry disappointed...

In policeSatition jagat'suno manyata ko baahr nikalo...
Use hospital leke jaana h.
L.const.-hospital kyn sir?
J:uski full body pe jo marks h wo thik krwana h,use drd hota h kbi-2 rat ko to wo rone lgti h..

Uday cum in p.s
'hi jagat...
J:hi,why r u sad?
U:nthng.how s manyata?
L.const.-she s nt fyn,wo rat ko kuch ajeeb bol ri thi..or ro ri thi..
J nd u:kya bol ri thi?
L.C:wo aachanak rone lgi nd she said'koi mere liye ro rha h.'

Uday surprized ki kal rat ko to main bi ro rha tha...pr main kyn ro rha tha,us bat k liye jo kbi na kbi honi thi...

Manyata aati h
'mujhe khin ni jana'

J:manyata jruri h,hm jaldi aajayenge...
M:ni,mujhe ni jana..

Uday phle se hi preshan h or wo manyata ki bat sunke or rude ho jata h
'kyn ni jana,kya problem h?

Sb uday k chilane pe dar jate h manyata sbse jyada ofcourse dar jati h...
Manyata dar k apne lockup ki trf bhaage ko hoti h tbi uday uska hath pkdta h'tumhein chalna pdega smjhi,bhoot pyar se smjhana ho gya,chalo..
Wo pkd k lejata h nd car me zbrdasti beitha deta h..
J:uday itna gussa thik..
U:jagat main jo kr rha hu krne do..

Uday drive krta h bhoot tej,or manyata dar k apni body ko pkad k beithi h,roi ja ri h...

Wo hospital phuchte h
Uday ful to angry mood
Wo manyata ko car me se khincta h,or hospital me lejata h. Wo roti rhti h pr uday ka gusa sir pe chada h..
Saare log dekhte h.
U:doctor,manyata jis patiant k baare me oponitment ..
D:yes,yes i remember.
U:ye h wo ldki,le jaiye.
M:ni,mujhe ni jana..ni ye mujhe mar denge ni..

Bt manyata ko ander lejate h...

Manyata chilati h..
Bt doctor ne usko injection deke behosh krdiya...

Jagat cuming hospital..
J:uday,tumhein kya ho gya h,manyata k 7th aise keise...
U:kbi-2 gussa dikhana pdhta h.
J:ni uday jo gusa dikhane ka tarika h tumhara wo glt tha..
Tumhein pta bi h tumhein kitni buri trh pkda tha,uski puri body pe marks h jo abi bi tk taaza h...
'kya bat itne preshan kyn ho?

U:nthng.jagat...mujhe thodi deir akela chod do,main relax chahta hu..
J:ok..main thodi deir bad aata hu...

Uday fullysad...
Wo apne hatho ko dekhta h,to usme halke-2 blood lga h,obovisly wo manyata ko tightly uska hath pkad k laya tha..

Then,he relize ki maine kuch jayda hi kr diya manyata...

Doctor aate h
U:how s she?
D:she s fyn.wo abi behosh h...marks uski body pe h..or ussko jeise bhoot pita gya ho weise marks...or.
U:or kya?
D:main pura sure to ni kh skta lekin uska...
Nurse:manyata ko hosh aa gya,bt she cryng..
D:ok,chalo.
U:doctor,wo main sambhal lunga use..
D:r u sure?
U:yes,ofcourse...

Uday nter in ward..
Wo manyata k pas aata h..
M:dur rho mujhse.tumbi or ki trh gande ho...mujhe tumse bat ni krni..
U:manyata i m sry,main hosh me ni tha..isliye aisa ho gya...
M:mujhe thik ni hona tha,main jeisi thi weisi thik thi,kyn leke aye mujhe hospital...
U:tum thik ni thi manyata..
M:tum jao.main bat ni krugi...
U:lekin kyn?
Manyata shoutng'kynki meri zindgi bhoot ajeeb h,main hmesha usi jail me bnd rhungi...
Koi bi lawyer mera case ni ldna chahta..
Or jo mera case ldta h wo janbhujh k har jata h..
U:main weisa ni hu manyata.
M:mujhe jis din tumpe bharosa hojayega.us din main tumhein apni zindgi ki sbse bitter truth btaugi..
Jise soch k main kaamp jati hu..
'meri zindgi me jitne log aye koi chahta hi ni tha meri sachai saamne aye'...
Sbne mujhe chup krane lge.or main ek pather bn gai..
Uday jane lgta h'manyata main wo insaan hu jo tumhare such ko duniya k saamne lauga..tumhein izzat se jeena sikhauga..

Its my promise manyata..chahe kuch bi ho jaye..
Wo chla jata h...

M:itna aasan ni h..mujhe wo sb btane k liye himmat chahiye...dubara se...

In nxt mrng...

Uday k ghr me hulchal h..
Uday-jay haldi k rasm krne beithe h...

Uday ka pura dhyan manyata ki trf h...
Usko sb haldi lga rhe h,bt he s nt response..
Or jay khush h...
Jay uday ko dekhti h
Or khti h'uday tum jitne bi naraj rho shadi k bad main tumhein mna lungi'..

One lady:oh,uday beta jb tk ldke k chahre pe khushi na ho,tb tk wo dulha nh lgta..
2nd:ha dekho dulhe se jyada khush dulhan h...
1st:ha beta ab tera or jay ka rishta bnne wala h..aatma se aatma ka milan hone wala h...

Uday koi response ni deta...wo chup h...

Nd other side..
Jagat manyata ko again jail leke jata h.
Manyata uday ko dhund ri h'wo kha h?
J:kaun?
M:wo jo mujhe ghumane le gya tha.
J:aacha wo,tumhein pta uski shaadi ho ri h.aaj uski haldi h..

Manyata 2min.k liye stop ho jati h...
Jagt'kya hua chalo?

Manyata chlne lgti h'wo man hi man ro ri hoti h,then she s reliez why i m cryng??
Ye to aachi bat h...

Uday apne rum me saari haldi clean up krta h towel se sudden komal aati h
'uday haldi Clean ni krte.nhana pdhta h..
Uday guse se towel faikh deta h..
K:kya bat h,tum khush kyn ni ho?aakhir itna gussa,tumhari aankhe bi hmesha nam lgti h..

Uday bad pe beith jata h or rone lgta h'mujhe ni pta maa,mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lgta h,mujhe lgta h mera dil,mera man kisi or k liye..
K:shhh..phle chup..rote ni...tum to hmesha se jante the,ki tumhari shadi jay se hogi,to phr aaj ye behave kyn?

Wo apni maa ko hug krta h'pta ni maa,mujhe ajeeb lgta h..
Brijraj cuming
'kuch ajeeb ni uday,sb thik h,aap ki shaadi whi hogi jha honi chahiye'khaniya mt bnaiye..its dat clear...
U:yer,dad..
Br:chaliye komal..

Manyata uday ka wait kr ri hoti h bt wo aata ni..
1 ladies prisnor:tujhe pta h,tu bdi kismat wali h,tera case mr.uday singh ld rhe h,suna h tera case re-open krane k liye bhoot mehnat ki usne.
2nd:ha bhoot bda wakil h wo,tu to jaldi bahar hoyegi jail se..
1st:or ek bat or sochi jb tu uday k 7th hoti h tb tu darti bi ni h roti bi ni h,or bolti bi h..
Usi ki wjh se teri awaaz sb ko sunne ko mili...

Manyata unki baatoin pe sochne lgti h...

Jagat aata h manyata k pas
'manyata uday aaj ni ayega..tum uska intzaar mt kro,so jao..

Manyata preshan ho jati h.

Precap-jay-uday ki mariage ho ri h,or manyata ka aana...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
nice update
awesome part yar but br was so horrifying feeel like killing him 🤢:p
wese komal part was awesome and j ka kuch karo 2 2 jagah brdasht nhi kr paonga:p show me bhe or idher bhi 😭
wese update as usal awesome😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Awesome, terrific update...i m too addicted to ur both SSz...i alwayz wait desepertly for ur both updates...iss SS ka doosra next update shaam tak karo...i wanna know ki uday aur jay ki shadi mein manyata ki entry se kya hoga...plz plz update next part tonight
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow again a nice update..cont soon n apna soulmat bhi jalt update karna.
Edited by Swini01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
lol @rocker
main khud hs k pagal ho ri hu,ye soch k ki sb jay se serial me preshan or ab yha bi.or common kya h shadi...
Bt u don't wory...dis s manveer love thoda twist dikhana to bnta h...

@annysyed dear,i have update daily nxt part,aaj ka to ho gya,ab kal update dungi nxt part.i promise...waitng..

@swini ye soulmate hi h.
Love feeling nyt tk post krugi.

Thanx alot ol of u.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Loved it...very nice update...but update next part soon...thanks for this update..,
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Great updbte...dear. But please stop jayveer's marriage. I'm dying to know manayta's truth.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
waooo nyc...but yyy J n briju r sooo evil...doo pyaar karnay waloo ko milnay doo yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Wow again an awesome one yaar.ab ayega maza.so J J hi rahegi...but yaar precap main M shadi rokney ayi hai yah dekhney???????

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