manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72 - Page 39

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Posted: 13 years ago
Plaa update the next part I'm dying to knw wat wil happen n plz in the next part make uday get 2 knw evrtthin o just gimme somefin like will he get to knw that akash was the 3rd person plzz just tell mee I'm seriusly dyin to knw m so in love wif ur writin n this update mde me cry so the nxt one betta mke me happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg firstly thanx alot al of u 4 cmnt.
Nd i think @fire u r first tym cmnt kiya h.
I m hapy.
Ok
@chitra plz 4gve me yar,
stry ko interstng bnane k liye likhna pdhta h.nd yes akash ko gun se uda dena,dis s nt gudpunishment...
Usko to main bs dekhte jao.
@fire awww..dear don't wory sb thik hoga.
@sonam dear i tryng ki main long update du.
@
pwincess_sumi dear watng 2day nyt..
Thanx 4 cmnts.
Love u al.

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
heart touching update PaRi
beautifully written

really sad and emotional
hate Akash
and use to zaroor tadpa tadpa ke maro


thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kya yaar addi maar guddi jagah par rok diya??
Koi nahi jaldi update karna!!
Lekin update ek dum rapchik raapcundas tha!
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Posted: 13 years ago
pari, u making me cry. please bring them together soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
@lily thanku baby..
Akash tadap-2 k hi mrega.
Ha ni to
usi ki wjh se dek bnd hua.lol.
@gowri
thanx alot 3r cmnt k lye..
@mrs.k awww..dear don't cry mere lye khud mushkil h ye likhna,bt likhna pdhta h.
Just chil.sb thik hoga.
Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd
me:Soulmate
Part-56

Br'uday pyar ek trfa ni hota..
Wo ldki agar tumse pyar krti to us paper pe kbi sign ni krti..
Meneka'ha uday ab is ghr me sb thik hoga..
Akash'bhai,aapka pyara srf jaynandini h..
Komal'akash,chup kro,kya bol rhe ho?
Jay'maa,shi to kh rha h akash.

Uday koi react ni kr rha h,srf baatein sun rha h...

Ds'akash nd jay tum dono ka dimag to thik h.choti ki ldai ki wjah se rishte ni tuitte..
Jay'dadi,manyata srf use kr ri thi uday ka or kuch ni,main aaj bi uday ko apnane k liye taiyar hu..

Unanti'sharm kya bzaar me bech aai ho jay,akash ki patni hoke aise keise bol skti ho..

Jay'main is ghr me sry uday k...
chup
Akash'unanti tum apne bolne ka lhza kho chuki ho kya?
Unanti'akash main jo hu so hu,lekin aap jb se aaye ho tb se aapke rang dhang bdale h...
Aakhir kya hogya..
Aapne kbi mujhe to aisa ni bola..
Akash apni njre churane lgta h,dar sa jata h.
Br'bs kriye aap sb,wo ldki ja chuki h.

Uday bina kuch bole jane lgta h..
Meneka'uday aise ni ja skte,kuch to bolo..
Uday stop
Komal'bolna kya menka,wo ldki dhokhebaaza h,or wo hmare ghr me dubaara ni ayegi..

Uday ko gussa aa rha,pissed ho rha h.
'bua g,papa,jis jis ko manyata se hate h wo hate kre,main chah k bi ni kr skta.
Br'us ldki ne us..
Uday shout'dad,mujhe ni pta usne kya kiya kya ni kiya.
Lekin agar manyata k baare main kuch ni sun skta..
Or jay specialy,mujhe pta h is ghr me tum kyn aai ho?
Lekin main apni zindgi manyata k yaado k saahare jee skta hu..
Wo bolke chla jata h...
Jay hit d tble'ye manyata ne zindgi ko bdal k rkh diya h.
Akash'don't wory jay

Ds'is ghr me jo ho rha h,wo aacha ni ho rha h.
Br'manyata manhus thi is ghr k lye maa,ab sb thik hoga.
Unanti'no dad,manyata k jane se bhoot frq pdega..
Wo bolke chale jate h..

Sb chale jate h..

Manyata tara k ghr me...
She s cryng,nd wo chup h..
Tara'bhabhi,aap roiye mt bhai jaldi ayege..
Manyata chup.
Jagat'ah tara manyata k liye tea bnake lao,main tb tk bat krta hu...
Tara'hmm wo chali jati h.

Jagat manyata k pas beithta h'manyata meri trf dekho,jitni njre churaoge utna dar lgega manyata..
Manyata'jagat uday ko bulao na..

Jagat little sad'wo ayega manyata,tumhare bina jeena uska mushkil h.
Manyata fake smile wid cryng'kitna ajeeb h na jagat,kisi ko phli njr me pyar ho jata or kisi ko janmo me ni.
Uday ko mujhse pyar hua to usne mujhe shadi tk kr li,mujhe jb pyar hua to main dur ho gai'
Jagat'ryt yhi hota h pyar kb kise ho jaye pta ni chalta,uday ko tumse ho gya,or akash ne..
Manyata took jagat.
'jagat kya akash?
Jagat'bta kyn deti akash ne tumhare 7th kya kiya h?
Manyata chupane ki koshish krti h'akash ne kya kiya h?jeise or sb nfrat krte h weise hi akash bi..
Jagat'manyata jhuth.
Tara'tea aa gai..
Bhabhi aap bilkul chinta mt kro,bhai aapke bina ek pal ni rh skte,wo jrur ayenge..
Jagat'wo jaldi ayega,agar tum such btado.
Manyata'main chup hu tb tk wo save h,main agar chup hu to koi to wajh h..
Wo bolke chali jati h.
Tara'bhabhi kya bolke gai.
Jagat'ye jo ho rha h glt h,mujhe uday se bat krni hogi...
Tara'jagat bhai bhabhi ko mila do..
Jagat pick up hr chick'tara,mujhe inko milane se jyada kuch or jruri h..
Lekin tum chinta mt kro,do dil juda ni rh skte.
Tara'bhai ka hal bi aisa hi hoga..

Uday apne rum me
Window k pas khada h,'or garden me dekh rha h ki keise manyata kya keise kiya krti thi..
Or wo uske saamne gardn me manyata dance kr ri h,use kises pas kr ri h,or uday wo sb dekh k muskura rha h..
'manyata in garden
'uday tum khush ho na,tum hmesha khush rhna,tum agar khush ho to main khush hu..
Uday stand z window'smile krte huye'ni,manyata tum bhul gai na,tumhare sunder chahre pe muskurahat hogi,tbi main muskurauga...
Suddn Manyata cryng'tum mujhe bhul jaoge kya?main janbujh k kuch ni kiya uday?
Uday bi uska rota chahra dekh k udas'ni manyata jis din tumhein bhul jau wo din mera akhiri din hoga..
Main tumhein apne se dur ni jane duga..
Manyata'lekin main to tumse dur hu..
Uday'ni main
Break uday dream...
Uday vry loudly shout'manyata...

Nd udhr manyata feel ki mujhe uday bula rha h..
'uday,mujhe maaf krdo..

{bck grund sng}
'tumko bi h khaber,
Mujhko bi h pta,
Ho rha dono ka rashta juda,
Dur jake k bi mujhse,meri yaado me rhna,
Kbi alvida na khna...
[manyata cryng alot,uday sadiest wo garden me ghum rha h,both remembring last paper deal moment...]

{female ver}
'jitni thi khushiya sb kho chuki,
Bs ek gum h ki jata ni...
[uday touch d heart nd feel manyata,nd dusri trf manyata also feel uday]

[male ver.]
Smjha k dekha,behla k dekha,
Dil h ki chain iskho aata ni..
{manyata took album nd nly uday k pics dekh ri h nd Kiss kr ri h,or smile wid cryng dekh ri h,or apne sine se lga k ro ri h)
'aashu h ki h aangare,
Aag h ab aankho se bhna..
Kbi alvida na khna...

(Uday remembring first dance in garden wit manyata jo ek infatution thi,manyata nd uday dancing in garden nd uday garden me ghum k dekh rha h,jeise uske saamne ho rha h sb..
Or wo manyata ko chune jata h to sb invisible.}
[ m.v]
'Rut aa ri h,rut ja ri h,
Bs ek dard h ki jata ni..
(Manyata remebring fairy tale land dance moment nd uday words'couple ka pta ni,mera pta ni lekin main apni wife ko most cute wife bnana chahta hu]
(F.v)
'rang ya gum ka ,
Itna h ghra,sadiyo me bi rang hoga hlka ni'
(Both r pain..
Uday apne aap ko tourchr kr rha h,manyata sayng mujhe uday chahiye]
'kaun jane kya h hona,hmko jane h ab kya-2 shna..
Kbi alvida na khna...'

Uday painful voice'main ni rh skta.
Jagat'to kyn apne aap ko sja de rhe rhe ho..?
Uday'jagat manyata keisi h?
Jagat'chahte kya ho uday?kya lgta h
Tum aisi halat me ho to wo kya khush hogi..
Mujhe bilkul umeed ni thi ki tum.
Uday'mujhe kya shauq h apni zindgi ko khud se dur krne ka..
Jagat'mtlb.
Uday'mtlb ye ki uske 7th is ghr me kuch to aisa ho rha h,jise wo dar ri h.
Abi ek pal wo hsti h to dusre pal uske chahre pe ajeeb sa drd dr hota h.
Jagat uday ko surprizly dekhta'tumhein ye ehsaas
Uday'usko janbujh k main bahr kiya h,main us paper ki wjh se use bahr kru,
Jo use us waqt shi lga usne kiya..
Jagat'tum keise pta kroge uske 7th kya hua h?
Uday'jagat manyata ko isliye tumhare 7th bheja h pucho usse,qki wo mujhe kuch Ni bta ri h..
Mujhe lgta h jay ne kuch to kiya h jisse use yha rhne me problem thi..
Jagat'agar jay ne kuch ni kiya to.
Uday'to phr koi or shaqs...

Jagat'dushman bhoot h uday..
Kis kis pe shauq kroge?
Uday'jispe bi ho,main use choduga ni.
Jagat'br,menka.jay
Wo uday ko dekhta h nd tb bolta h Ya phr akash..
Uday jagat ko dekhta h..
'pta ni jagat jo bi ho mujhe pta lgana h bs,tum manyata ka khyal rkhna...
Jagat thout'uday plz 4 god sake manyata ni chahti ki main tumhein kuch btau.phchano smjho'

Us tym akash rum k bahr hota then wo srf akash nam sunta h to unhe lgta h,uday ko uspe shaq ho gya h...
'manyata ne kya bhai ko bta diya milna pdega,or ye bhai ka kuch to krna pdega jisse manyata dre.'

To uday jagat jate h niche.
Jagat'manyata se ek mil lo use aacha lgega.
Uday'main kal aaunga..
Lekin tara se milne k bhane.
Jagat'ok.
I watng u.
Wo gaddi me beith k chala jata h,
Then jb uday ghr me jane lgta h,tbi awaaza aati h uday. Uday shocked wo piche bhaagta h,to dekhta h dur jgat ki car ek wall se accidnt hua h,nd jagat ka minor accidnt hua wo bahr apna hath pkde gira h.
Uday'o shit,to uday use uthata h,nd use lejata h tbi uday k saamne se ek car aati h highspeed me nd wo uday kpas aane wali hoti h,suddn uday jagat ko dhaka deta h,nd phr khud jhtke se side jake girta h.
To usko bi hath pair me minor chot aai h..

Jgat'ye kuch ajeeb tha,phle main phr tum.
Uday'kaun krega?kisko marna chahta tha ye mujhe ya tumhehn.
Jagat'shayed tumhein..
Uday shockd.
'mujhe koi kyn marega?
Jagat'manyata ka case ld rhe ho uday,Dost km h,dhushman jyada h...

Tara'bhabhi bhai ko jagat ka chota sa accidnt hua h.
Chlo.
Manyata shocked'wht?
Wo phr jane lgti h tbi,cal aati h.
Manyata pic krti h'hello.
Akash'idhr aa mt jana manyata,ek demo diya h,agr kuch btaogi to wo minor major accidnt me bi change ho skta h.
Manyata dar jati h uske hath se phone chuth jata h.

Precap-uday doutng akash.

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic update Pari.👏 👏 👏
Thank god it's just a plan of Uday for Manyata's safety.😛
Oh God, someone Please kill that ba****d Akash.😡
Precap was more interesting.😉
Thanks for the regular updates yaar.😊
Love you.🤗 🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Pari 🤗, this was a maha episodic twist 👏, Uday still trusts Manyata 🥳. This was all his plan to find the real culprit, awww 😍 how can someone be so cute. I knwo abhi sue sirf J, BR aur Menka pe shaq hai, but when he would start doubting akash and would know about him tab tho Akash ka pura kachumbar bana dega.
He is disgusting even as a brother😡, how can he harm his own brother whom he claims to love so much. So now the whole family knows that J and akash marriage is also fake🤢. Hope Komal throws J out and brngs Manyata back home.
Edited by chitra_rao - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 pari wonderful story line😊

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