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👏 👏 👏 Great- great update Pari, Loved it.😉
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Thanks for the wonderful update.😊
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Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd
me:Soulmate
Part-54

Akash'dekh manyata such-2 bta jagat ko kya kya btaya h tune?
Manyata'mera hath chodo drd ho rha h,maine kisi ko kuch ni btaya.
Akash uska hath or tightly pkdta h,'to phr wo mujhse ulte sidhe coma ko leke sawal kyn kr rha h.?
Manyata cryng'mujhe ni pta maine kuch ni kiya?
Akash or tightly uske baaju pkdta h,tumhein roj demo dekhne ki adat h na,thik h niche aao abi tumhein or demo deta hu..
Wo bolke chala jata h,manyata bi dari hui roti hui uske piche jati h'akash uday ko kuch mt kro,maine kuch ni kiya..
Akash'jhuth,jrur kuch na kuch btaya h tune.
Manyata uska rasta rok leti h'main aacha plz jeisa tum khoge weisa krugi lekin uday ko..
Akash evil smile'jeisa main khunga weisa tu kregi,chl main phr se teri ek rat maangta hu,aaj tera andaaz dekh k khud ko rok paana namumkin h..
Manyata make adirty face'tum,kbi sudhr ni skte,tum janwaro se bi gair gujre ho.
Akash'ab jo khna h kho,main sudharne aya tha,bt tumne apni sakal dikha k,mujhe phr se ek khatrnak insan ko jga diya..
Manyata roti-2 jaane lgti h,akash pick up hr waist,or usko suddn wo neck kisses krne lgta h.
Manyata cryng'leave me,mujhe chod do.
Wo uske hatho ko apne waist se htane ki koshish kr ri h..
Akash cntinuos kisng hr'tum ek nasha ho manyata,or weise bi jb izazt hi ni to kya darna..
Akash k nail marks manyata k stomach pe pdh gye h,wo ro ri h apne aap ko chudane ki koshish kr ri h,bt usne tightly pkda h..

Jagat 'manyata..
Akash dar jata h,nd sudden manyata ko chod deta h..
Manyata bi Mauqa paake udhr se bhaagti h,wipes hr tears,apne aap ko relief krti h'ha jagat tumne bulaya..

Phr ekdum se uday bi aata h,manyata wo jagat ..
Uday notice manyata face xpresion nd eyes.
Jisme aasu dard h..
Uday chup.
Jagat notice manyata stomach jha nails k marks h jo manyata ne saari se cover kiya h,bt phr bi dikh rha h.

Manyata'kya hua?dono ko bolo.
Uday again shocked'uski voice me bi kampan h jeise wo ro ri h..
Uday'manyata tum..
Uday uske baaju ko dekhta h jha red ho gya h ekdum...

Manyata'of oh,tum dono kuch bologe,ni to main chalti hu.
Hatto.
Jagat seriously'manyata tum thik ho?
Manyata'ha mujhe kya hua h?
Jagat'koi bi problem ho to uday ko bta skti ho.
Manyata'problem.
Tum pagal ho gye ho,uday k hote huye ho hi ni skta..
Jagat smile'ha ye to h.anyway ye lo sherwani thanku.
Manyata'apne pas hi rkh leta,uday ka gft smjh k..
Uday bs manyata ko dekh rha h,or manyata usse njre chura ri h..

Jagat'ni itna kiya whi kafi h,anyway uday main chalta hu.
Uday manyata ko dekhte huye'ya ok..
Sudden tara aati h'jagat tum ghr ja rhe ho na,to phle mujhe mere ghr chodna..
Uday break concentration.
Manyata'shadi krlete to ek hi ghr jana hota na.
Ha ni to.
Tara'ryt.
Ha ni to..

Phr thodi deir bad akash aata h,piche se.
Akash'arey waah mahfil yaha lgi h.

Manyata darte darte uday k 7th aake khadi ho jati h..
Uday phr use notice krta h,use bhoot ajeeb lgta h..

Unanti,jay nd vijay aate h
Jay'baahar ka mahol chodke,ander kya kr rhe ho?
Vijay'bda aacha lg rha h na baahar ka mahol tumhein to tumhi jao.
Unanti'ok ok,
Idhr sb youngester h to btao.
Aaj ki most important wish..
Tara'ha phle boys..
Uday bhai bolo na.
Uday thoda guse me 'kisi k dard ko apna dard bnana h,apni muskurat kisi ko dena chahta hu..
Manyata smjh jati h,nd use decently dekhti h..
Tara'ha inspctor jagat,bolo na.
Jagat'aapko apna bnana h,or wo akash ki trf dekhta h,kisi ko uski shi jgh pe phuchani h..

Akash phr wha se jane lgta h
Unanti stop him'kha?phle wsh btao tb.
Akash'luk hr jay kisi ko uska haq dilana h,nd luk manyata or chahta hu kisi ki aagosh me phr se kho jau...
Jay surprizly use dekhti h,sbko ye lgta h wo jay ko bol ri h...
Vijay'meri turn,main ek manyata bhai jeisi cute innocent grlfrnd bnana chahta hu.
Uday'now grls turn..
Phle unanti.
Unanti'ok..
Mujhe bua bnna h bhai.
Manyata blush,uday also.
Jagat'tara g,boliye.
Tara'bhai bua to mujhe bi bnna h,lekin kisi ki wife bi bnna h.
Manyata'jagat jaldi jaldi shadi krlo tara se wrna chidiya furrh ho jayegi.

Jay'luk uday kisi ka 7th paana chahti hu..
Jagat'manyata last tum ho bolo.
Manyata uday k hath ko pkdti h chupke se,'uday use dekhta h..
'kise k chamkte chahre ko dekh k mera din muskurata h,or kisi k 7th hona meri rat musktrati h.
Uday blush krta manyata also...

Tara'jagat tum kitni koshish krlo uday bhai jitne smart bn ni skte..
Or main manyata bhabhi bnane se ri h.
Haaayeee.
Cutipie couple.
Touch wood..

Jay getng jealous nd akash iritate hoke chala gya..

Tara'jagat bk bk krne se furshat mil gai ho to chale.
Vijay'ha jagat tu bhoot bolte ho,or uske opposite tumhari tara h.
All laughng
Jagat'ok uday main chlta hu,tc..
Uday'yup..
Jagat'uday ek min.bahar aaoge mujhe kuch bat krni h.
Uday'ha main aata h,manyata char jao,maa bula ri h..

Jagat-uday bahar jate h
Jagat'uday mujhe bhoot ajeeb lg rha h,main keise btau.
Uday'jagat tujhe kya lg rha h pta ni lekin manyata kisi se bhoot jyada dar ri h.
Jagat'exctly..
Uday plz usse puch kya hua?pta kr,khin koi use preshan to ni kr rha h..
Uday'ryt,kuch to h.
Jagat'main uday o
Tara'chale,jaldi papa phone kr rhe h chalo jaldi.
Jagat'main bad me bat krta hu,bye.
Wo chale jate h...

Uday Manyata ko dekhta h,wo fake smile k 7th komal se baatein kr ri h.
Uday thout'kuch to hua h,wo manyata ki trf jata h uska hath pakdta h or rum me lejata h.
Sb behaviour dekh k shock h,bt sb chup h.
Rum me aata h,rum lock krta h..

Manyata'ye kya pagalpan h uday sbke samne aise mera hath pkad k leaaye tum.
Uday'kya hua h?
Manyata njre churati h'mtlb kya h?kuch ni hua.
Uday use whi se pkadta h jha se akash ne tightly pkda tha,wo bi tightly pkdta h.
Manyata ab jyada pain ho rha h,both r eyecntct.
Manyata painful nd uday angry eyecntct me h.
'mujhse jitna chupaogi,utna tumhara drd mere saamne ayega..
Manyata'drd tum de rhe ho chodo mujhe..
Uday'luk at me manyata,chat pe puja k bad sb kuch thik tha,lekin uske bad tum kyn udas ho gai.
Manyata janbujh k 'uday ka hath htati h,mujhe ni pasnd tum meri itni chinta krte ho,mt kro,main thik hu..
Wo jane lgti h,uday phr guse me uska hath pkadta h.
Manyata cryng thout'uday plz 4give me
Akash tumhein mar dega,tum mujhse kuch mt pucho' Uday'manyata tumhara behave ne ab ye paka krdiya kuch to h,mt btao,jb tumhein btana ho btana,lekin ek bat yad rkhna,jisse bi hui h tumhari ye halat main use choduga ni'
Wo bolke chala jata h..
Jeise hi uday jata h,weise hi akash aata h.
'aacha kiya bhai se jhagda krdiya,wrna bta deti to..bahar intzam krdiya tha.
Manyata'akash apni kheir mnao,main kuch bolugi bi ni or uday phchan lega.
Akash'kyn wo anteryami h kya?
Manyata'main jo bolti hu wo to sunta hi h wo,jo ni bolti wo jyada jaldi sunta h...
Ruh se ruh ka rishta bna h na..
Suddn uday rum me aata h'akash
Akash'a.a.a bhai main aapko dgund rha tha,chale.
Uday'ha ek minute main apna phone le lu..
Uday phone leta h nd chala jata h..

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Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
manveer wish aur jb uday room mei manyata ko kehta hai jis se bhi hui hai tmhari yeh halat mai usse choro ga nhi was my bst scenes😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏nyc...good going...nxt part jldi se post kro.. aj kyu ni post kiya???i really like ur stories...nd i wait for ur story two heart on a.k page but tm post krti hi ni ho????
Edited by cherry.parul0 - 13 years ago
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Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd
me:Soulmate
Part-55...
Manyata cryng'sry uday mera
behaviour tumhare liye krna jruri
h'
Uday garden me ghum k soch rha
h'manyata jitna rude bnna h
bnlo,lekin main pta krke rhuga
kya bat h...
Manyata uska wait krti h...
Lekin uday garden me beitha
h'bulane ayegi tbi jauga...
He s watng hr..
Jay dekhti h wo garden me beitha
h,to wo jati h...
'uday manyata ne rum se bahar
nikal diya kya?
Uday'jay mujhe akela chod do jao
yha se.
Jay smile'uday ek dushman ya
nfrat se na dekh k ek dost smjh
k mere kandhe pe apna sir rkh
skte ho..
Uday'leave me alone jay plz main
ldte ldte thak gya hu.
Jay evil smile k 7th uske pas
beithti h'kisliye ldte ldte thak gye
ho uday,manyata k liye ya hmsb
se.
Uday'manyata k liye tumsb ko
jwab dete-2 thak gya hu...
Jay uday k chick pkad k'meri trf
dekho uday,'tumhein ni lgta
tumhari zindgi kuch to or thi or
ab kuch or..
Uday soch me pdha h.
Jay'aacha ek bat btao agar
manyata ne tumhein chodna
faisla kiya to.
Uday little tearful in eyes k 7th
dekhta h
'jay manyata mere 7th kbi aisa ni
kregi,wo mujhe kbi ni chodegi.
Jay 'agar chod diya to..?
Uday'to main zinda lash bn jauga.
Jay smile'agar aisa hua to uday
uske shoulder pe apna hath rkhti
h,to main hu tumhare 7th hu..
Both r in eyecntct...
Manyata apne rum me uska wait
krti h
Nd wo ghumte-2 rum me window
k pas khadi hoti h,then dekhti h
jay or uday ko..
Manyata uday ko hi dekhti h..
Uske chahre pe preshani,saaf
dikh ri h.
Manyata'uday agar tumhein sb
bta dungi to akash tumhein mar
dega.
To Us tym manyata k piche akash
khada tha.
'ek dum shi soch ri ho..
Manyata chup..
Akash bi window k pas aata
h,'dekh ri ho bhai or jay ko.
Ekdusre k 7th khush lgte h..
Tumhein ni lgta do dilo k bich me
tum aa gai ho..
Manyata no react..
Akash'dekho kitne pyare love
birds lg rhe h.
Manyata angry or wo jane lgti h.
Akash again pic hr waist nd 4cly
apni trf khichata h..
Manyata phr zbrdasti apne aap
ko chudane ki koshish krti h.
Akash'manyata tumhein phrse
feel krna chahta hu,lekin is baari
tumhari mrzi k 7th..
Manyata apne aap ko leave krati
h uske hatho se nd ek tightly slap
lgati h use..
'bhoot ho gya akash,main ab puri
tan se man se uday ki hu..
main chup hu to srf uday k liye
wrna main sbko btadungi ki tum
ho wo 3person jisne mera rape
kiya h...
Akash main apne lye chup ni
hu,main uday k liye chup hu,main
chahu to use btadungi,lekin wo
tumse bi bhoot pyar krta h..
Akash to aagbabula ho rha h,'main
tera lec.
Manyata shout'tumhein sunna
pdega,main tumse ek bat khti
hu,'mujhe pta h tum pkde
jaoge,main kisi se kuch ni khugi,or
tum ek din katghare me khade
rhoge...
Akash'or wo din main aane ni
dunga manyata..
Manyata'uday ka mere lye jo
pagalpan h tum use jante kha ho
akash,jis din jan jaoge us din
shayed tumhari soch bdal jayegi.
Akash'zindgi na rhegi,or na mujhe
koi pkdega..
Manyata'dekhte h akash..
Akash guse se chala jata h.
Or br k rum me jata h.
'dad,mujhe wo manyata is ghr me
brdaasat ni hoti.
Komal'kya bak rha h dimag to thik
h.
Akash tej chilata h'mujhe ise ghr
me ni dekhna.ye mere gaal pe
usne
gaal pe usne tmaacha jda h..
Br'wht?itni himmat.
Akash'mujh pe aaj tk kisi ne hath
ni uthaya or wo bina izzazt ki.
Komal'akash,mind u r
launggage,she s ur bhabhi.
Akash'wht ever.
Br gusse me'kal mrng hone ka
wait kro akash...
Komal'manyata k 7th kuch aisa
weisa mt krdena..
Bchi h wo,naadan h.
Akash'naadan my foot,maa,wo
srf game khel ri h or kuch ni.
Br'calm down,kal uday ko bi pta
chal jayega wo kisse pyar krta h...
In nxt mrng..
Uday garden me hi so gya h,
Manyata uska wait krte-2 rum
me so gai h..
Manyata uthati h,uday rum me ni
h,phr wo garden me dekhti h,wo
whi banch pe soya h...
Manyata'puri rat wo whi..
Phr wo jati h.
Uday bi uthata h,wo apne aap ko
garden me pata h,to jay uske liye
tea leke jati h.
Uday'manyata rum me mera..
Jay'tea piyo uday,manyata ek bar
bi tumhein dekhne ni aai..
Uday tea ni pita nd wo guse me
ghr me jata h..
Nd manyata bi bhaag k aati h...
Then both face 2 face..
Uday'tum ro ri thi..
Manyata'ni,main kyn royogi?
Uday phr manyata se khta
h'mujhse njare mila k bat kro
manyata..
Manyata'uday fresh ho jao..main
breakfast serve krti hu.
Uday shout'mujhe mere swalo k
jwab do manyata..jb tk kuch ni
btaugi tb tk main kuch ni khauga...
Manyata fake irritating'mt
khao,jo krna h kro,mujhe koi frq
ni pdta..jao
Sb ghrwale aagye h..
Ds'ye kya ho rha h?savre-2 itna
shor..
Meneka'maine to phle hi kha
tha,dhire-2 jo ye khokhla rishta
h,wo tuitega ek din to jrur..
Uday angry'bua g,main aaj bi kuch
brdasht ni kruga,agar manyata k
baare me kuch bola to.
Br'kis rishte ki bat kr rhe ho
uday,wo Jha tum to diwaano ki
trh pyar krte ho,or manyata
tumhara istemal kr ri h.
Manyata shocked..
Uday'main jitna pyar manyata se
krta hu,utna pyar manyata
mujhse krti h..smjhe aap.
Akash shout'kaun sa pyar
bhai,kiya kya h isne aap k liye.
Manyata'ye kya bkwas h?
Komal'ye savre-2 faltu ki bat.
Meneka'faltu ki bat ni h ye,btao
uday kya kiya h manyata ne
tumhare liye.
Uday'maine manyata se pyar kiya
h,mtlb niklwane k liye ni..
Akash laughng'lekim manyata ne
to aapka srf or srf use kiya h.
Uday shout'mujhe manyata k
baare me kuch ni sunna,mujhe
khud se jyada bharosha h.bs wo
jaane lgta h.
Br'bharosha..
Waah uday.
Uday stop..
Br'ye file dekho tumhara trust
tuitega lekin ek jhuthi hope k 7th
to ni rhoge..
Manyata rone lgti h'qki use smjh
aa gya h ki wo deal ab uday k
saamne aajayegi..
Uday file leta h nd shocked..
Or wo manyata ko dekhta h...
Akash'pdhliya..
Bhai manyata ka pyar.
Manyata'uday wo us waqt
Uday'ye kya h manyata..
Ab tk jo tha wo kya tha.
Manyata'uday meri bat suno
Uday'kya sunu,tumne meri zindgi
k 7th khela.
Manyata'tumhare papa ne
Uday'papa ne kya sign krne ko
kha or tumne krdiya..
Tumhare 7th jo hua uske bad
maine tumhein apnaya.
Tumhare lye sbse lda.
Kya baap kya maa sb se lda.
Wo sb aiso aram dilaya,or sbse
bdi bat maine tumhein apna nam
diya.
Or tumne mujhe chodne ka
cntrct sign kiya h.
Manyata stand lyk stone'uday
tumne ye sb isliye kiya qki mujhe
ek din is bat ka ehsaas kra sko...
Uday use dekhta h,both r
angry,painful,love all reaction
eyencntct h..
Uday relize ki ye maine kya bol
diya.
Manyata'ha maine sign kiya ki qki
tumne mere pe ehsaan kiya h..
Uday angry'chali jao chod ke,yhi
likha h na isme.
Maine kha h na ye rishta maine
bnaya h,tum tod skti ho kbi bi..
Koi zbrdasti ni h..
Tara-jagat door pe khde h,sb sun
rhe h.
Uday'or ri tumhare case ki bat to
uday kbi bi aadhe pe apna kam ni
chodta..
Akash uday k pas ake khada hota
h
'bhai,kuch ldkiya dhoka dene me
aage rhti hu.
Uday break d heart,wo njre
churake roke rum me chala jata
h.
Komal manyata ka hath pkdti
h'tujhe itna pyar diya samman
diya,tune mere uday k 7th ye
kiya.
Nikl ja abi.
Or sun agar mere uday ko kuch
hua to,main tujhe ni chodugi...
Manyata cryng.
Menka'apne ye jhuthe aasu apne
pas rkh,nd wo manyata ka hath
pkdti h or use dhaka deti h ghr se
bahr ki trf.
Manyata tara pe jake girti h..
Tara catch hr..
All sayng nikal jao yha se..
Unanti nd ds wo chup h ro ri h..
Jagat angry'tum insb ko btati kyn
ni ho wo 3rd person...
Ak..
Manyata feard shoutd'ni..
Jagat plz.nd she s faint.
Jagat'manyata,tara le chalo ise..
Akash shocked..
Nd suddn relax..
Manyata ko wo dono leke jate h..
Tara manyata ko apne ghr leke
jati h.
Continueos
Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Pari 🤗, after part 11 this was the saddest update for me 😭. But I guess this was neede to take the story ahead. I'm glad that Tara and Jagat are with Manyata. I want that br, Menaka, J, akash all to suffer a lot😡. Aur akash ko toh goli mar dena chaheye end mein😡, but then I think nahi usko tadpa tadpa ke maro 😡😡.

Thanks for the PM dear 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Hey Pari 🤗, after part 11 this was the saddest update for me 😭. But I guess this was neede to take the story ahead. I'm glad that Tara and Jagat are with Manyata. I want that br, Menaka, J, akash all to suffer a lot😡. Aur akash ko toh goli mar dena chaheye end mein😡, but then I think nahi usko tadpa tadpa ke maro 😡😡.


Thanks for the PM dear 😛

TOTALLY agree with u!!😃 Seriously..I feel like a sadist right now!😆😆 Wanna torture that Akash in the WORST possible way!🤢 A gun shot is the least painful of all deaths...surely he "deserves" much "better" treatment 4 all that he has done??Angry Shameless vermin,🐷 he has forgotten familial relationships in his lust 4 revenge!! Is he even human? I highly doubt that..
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭 😭 😭 Pari when I was reading this update I was crying, Oh no Manyata & UV fight.😭
ThankGod Tara & Jagat came on time.😛
Akash & J both are go to hell.😡 😡
Now I ' m dying to read the next update yaar, It's Superb.👏 👏 👏
Thanks for the fab. update & PM.😊
Great job.👍🏼
Love you.🤗 🤗
I WANT A LONG UPDATE PARI THIS TIME.😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!😲 What a turn of events! My heart reached out 4 M, how could people shun her like that?😭😭 This was defo the saddest update in the entire SS, even sadder than the part where M narrated what had happened 2 her...now M is really and truly alone😔. I think this is the first time I am actually going against Uday...UV, how could u lose faith in ur love so easily?

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