manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!! That was awesome!! Loved it!! It is getting very interesting!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...:-):-):-)):-))oh J kamini ki kya halat hogi.n Vjay bhai ha ha ha:-)))loved it.cont soon sweetheart.egarly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is for you🤗 JAADU KI JHAPPI.
Awesome update.😊
sirjee thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
how cute...manveer finally got married...superb...but hope da akwardness b/w dem doesnt remains 4 long...
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg i love this story too much yrr...i know kafi late cmmnt kr rhi hu bt started reading this one this week only...toh...waise toh i tried to avoid this one a lot...cz i didn't want to start reading any new ff especially urs since knew i'll get addicted bt finally gave up 😛...aur jo socha tha wohi hua...i'm addicted to this ff yrr 😆...it's too good...it is so different...and soo pure and romantic as well...and M's story was really heart wrenching...u wrote tht part really well...omg i knew UV wud do this...so happy...they r married...oh gosh ye J kahi bhi bechare manveer ka peecha hi nhi chodti...u r a totally awesome writer pari...plzzz cont soon yrr!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it yarr...sorry for late reply but I am really happy for the twist in the story... Actually I expected the same...hope j want be ne trouble for them...thanks for update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer SS...
WITHOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:sOULMATE...
Part-13th

Manyata couch pe beithi h,uday bad pe beitha h..
Manyata dar dar k couch pe hi so jati h..
Then uday himmat krke bolta h'manyata tum...
Bt she s sleeping...

Wo use dekh k smile krta h nd uske pas jata h then hr 4head.nd wo use apne arms pe pickup krta h..
Or use bad pe sula deta h...
Or wo khud niche beith jata h,'manyata tum preshan mt ho,mere rhte huye tumhein darne ki jrurt ni h'

Wo jb jane lgta h tb manyata uska hath pkad leti h sote huye hi'aapne aisa kyn kiya???...

Uday khud sochne lgta h..wo apna hath leave krata h'mujhe khud ni pta manyata,main usi swal ka jwab dhud rha hu,jis din pta chlega,us din shayed tum ye mujhse swal na kro '!!!

Wo couch pe sone chla jata h,wo udhr se hi manyata ko continuos dekh rha hota h..
Nd jo bi usne past btaya tha apna,uday use remember krta h...
Or nam yad krta h
Aryan,dipak nd aaku...
'aryan mar gya,
Dipak mar gya.,
Aku coma me h..
Kaun ho skta h,?
Nam kya akku hi h,ni wo to uske dost use bulate the,nam to kuch or hoga...
Manyata ek reason to ye h ki tum mere 7th rhogi to investigation krne me aasni hogi...
Or main pta lga ke rhuga,pr keise??

In nxt mrng...
Manyata rum me ghum ri thi,uday abi so rha tha...
M:main keise nhane jau,mere kapde to h hi ni mere pas...
Kiske pas jau,taiyar hoke niche bi jana h..
Ds knock d door,wo bolti h manyata beta jaldi se taiyar ho jao...tumhein hi puja krni h aaj.jaldi aajao...

M'phle nha leti hu,kapde yhi phn lungi.
Wo bathrum me nhane jati h..

Then
tbi uday wake up hota h,wo idhr udhr dekhta h manyata ko to wo bathrum me hoti h...
Then wo mrng walk k liye bahr jane k liye taiyar ho jata h,

Manyata bathrum me ni ye to kapde bhoot gande ho gye h..kya kru.?wha uday ki shrt h 'ye to uday ki h,khin gussa to ni ho jayenge,bahr jake unanti ko phone krke bula lungi.
wo whi phn leti h...

Or dhire se bathrum door thoda sa khol k dekhti h,ki uday so rha ya jag gya h,to couch pe koi ni hota,or uday ka cel bi ni hota table pe to 'lgta h gye bahar.'
Uday mirror k samne comb kr rha hota h..

Komal manyata k rum ki trf aa ri h..
Ds:kha ja ri ho?main manyata ko jga k aa ri hu..
K:uske pas kapde kha h maa,main aaj ki ye yellow saari dene ja ri hu..
Ds:arey ha,thik h jao jaldi...wo to nhake pta ni kya phnegi...jao

Idhr manyata nha k nikalti h,apne phone ki trf bdhti h,
Tbi uday 'manya...
Manyata apne hair ear k piche krti h or uday uske saamne...
Bs manyata ki aankhe bdi,or uday k hath me comb tha wo gir gya..
Wo use cntinuosly dekha ja rha h,
Manyata uski shrt ko khichi ja ri h,uske pure wet hait h,wo use dekh k ghabrai hui h...
Uday uski trf bdhne lgta h,
Wo ek ek step aage bdhta h,
Or manyata dar ek ek step piche leti h..
'wo mere wo mere pas kap,
Mujhe lga aap..
Bat gbhrahat k mare puri ni bol pati h...
Then wo wall se touch ho jati h,abi uday wha tk phuchne wali hoti h tbi komal'manyata darwaza kholo beta'.
Then break d uday cncentration..
Wo drwaaze ki trf dekhta h,or manyata jaldi se phr se bathrum me bhaag jati h...

Uday door open krta h'wo maa manyata bathrum me h,main walk pe ja rha hu...
K:thik h beta..
Uday chla jata h..
K:manyata beta jaldi bahr nikliye..
Manyata k kapde dekh komal bi hsti h'koi bat ni beta hm ye saari dene aaye the,aap phn k taiyar ho jaiye..saari phnani aati to h na beta..
Manyata achanak wo apna past ekdum se yad krti h ki keise saari jb first tym phna tha tb meri duniya bdal gai thi..wo rone lgti h.

Komal ko lgta h use saari carry ni krni ni aati.'ary bs bs rone ki kya jrurt h,main hu na chalo ye blouse or patticoat phno..saari main phna dungi beta...ro mt...

Un:gud mrng bhai,bhai ek req.h aaj mrng walk pe mt jao,aaj bhabhi k 7th rhna jyada jruri h...puja me beithna h 7th 7th..
U:aacha,pr.
Un:pr wr kuch ni ek din ni jaoge to mote ni ho jaoge,jao taiyar ho jao..
U:hmmm..wo phr again apne rum me jati h...

Udhr komal manyata ko saari phna ri h...
Then,uday achanak ander aa jata h,
Bt both nt notice ki uday h.
Then komal manyata ko saari phnana start kiya h,uday door k pas phr again lost hr...
He thout
'aaj phli bar khubsurti ko saadgi k 7th dekha h'

Suddn manyata mirror me dekhti h,to uday khada h,or use muskura k dekh rha h...

Manyata use decently dekhti h...
Uday phr dhire-2 use dekhta-2 bahr jata h...

Manyata ready ho gai h,
K:beta aap ab taiyar ho,niche aa jaiye,jaldi se...

Precap-brijraj manyata meeting,,

Pari
sirjee thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc...but it was really short...sorry i dont prefer short stories dat also 4m u...my little doll...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice one yaar.oh so Akash keh sath Uv ka kuch na kuch realation hai.hmm..intersting.n yeah vaha ahem ahem kuch time keh bat hoga but yaha kab hoga.now i m egarly waiting for the ahem ahem.
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Posted: 13 years ago
@sirjee
darlng i m realy sry.
I know dis part 2 shrt bt 2day i m realy tired..to isliye
anyway,nxt tym pkka lng update milega.loveu

@nia,ahem ahem sb dekhna upps pdhna chahte h..itna wait kiya h to thoda or thadap.ha ni to.

Pari

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