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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: princessnia
Awesome update Niri dear.Haye damn romantic.N the full moon scene awww cho shweet.Love the kiss yaar:pN that Akash phewww finally bhag bhag dk boss.But dont know KABTAK?N egarly waiting 4 the suprize ka khulasa.Btw Nia ji haye itni respect Niri ji:pCont soon yaar.Now i cant wait.
PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ CONT SOON:)

hey hello nia ji...🤗

kya hall hai... ???????😳

hey thnxxx nia,,,thnxxx alot fr such a sweet nd lovely comment of urs... i m glad nd happy tht u liked this chap nd uv-m scene ...😳

akaash abhi itni asani se nahi bahgega...😕😉

matlab abhi se bhag gaya toh vo manveer romance dekhkar jalega kaise...hmmn ????😆😉

i hope u will love the next update too dear...specially the surprise...😉

ab kya karein yaar,,,, hamare muh se apke liye respect he nikalti hai...😆😃

will post next part soon ma'am...ok...

nd thnxxx once again fr ur awesum comment ssweetie...😛

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: killerashish
superb update 👏 👏 👏 i loved it 😛

manveer sacene hayyee maza a gaya haan nai tou☺️manveer

aik kamray may band hn or subha ho jaye😆komal aunty bachari

apni beti ki feeling ko samaj hi nhn pa rhi han yeh update sab say

best gya kun kay is may jai or akash zada nhn thy 🤣har taraf

manveer hi manveer thay

sab say best scene 😆

VIJAY == manyta bhai,,,(says sweetly),,, jisko tum uday ka pair samaj kar itney pyaar se foot massage de rahi ho na vo darasal hamara pair hai,,,,,haha,,, toh plz apna pair hatao... mujhe bahut tezzz khujli (itching) ho rahi hai😆🤣 🤣 🤣

akash bechara gussay or jealousy say hi mar jay ga😆tara

bechari maan hi maan may khush ho rhi ha kitnay ladoo phoot

rhay han us kay dil may uday ko dekh kr 🤣

great update dear cont soon thnxxx for the PM🤗

hey hi dear...🤗

thankyou so very nuch for this awesum , lovely nd sweet comment of urs...😳

nd see...ye part maine isi janam mai post kar diya...😆🤣

awww... u liked manveer scene... ???? hayye mere rabba ,,,iska matlab meri mehnat safal hui...😆

hey i really loved wht u have written fr manveer...👏 vaise subha nahi hui thi,,,,subha se pehle he so gaye the...

nd u know what?????

vijay nd manytas this scene was even my favourite scene in this cahpter...😆🤣

becharey tara,,,, ab kya karein yaar,,,, hamara uv hai hi itna haindsome ki koi bhi ladi us ke charm ko resist he nahi kar pati...😉

thnku ...yaaar,,,, thnkuuu so very much for this wonderful nd beautiful comment of urs...

i always love reading ur comment 😳👏

will post next part soon...dear

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva
hey cn u plzz pm me wen u update ... i read aalll the chapters todat tself nd loved them .. :)

hey hi ...😛

thnnnx yaar... thnnx alot...i m really glad to know tht u liked reading this ss...tht u read all the chapters today itself in one go...😛

dont worry i will surely pm u whn i will post next part...nd thnxx once again😛

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: swetsurati
Awsomeee...manveer scene was hot and romentic...and that foot massage scene was sooo...funny vijay bhai and his joks...he is tooo...much...omg...uday firse window se manyata ke room me aagaya...how romentic...uday is behaving like pyar me pagal ahsiq...hayeee...me mar java...but this akash uncle...iss ka moniya moniya ka jaap kab bandh hoga...ye akash uncle humare gujrat aa raha hai...agar surat ayega to me iss ko mar dalungi...update soon.

hey hi swetsurati...😃how r u ???

hey thnxxx yaar thnxxx alot fr ur sewwt nd lovely comment once again...

i m really glad to know tht u liked manveer scene nd tht foot massage scene...tht was y personal fav too...😉

dont worry, is aaksah uncle ka moniya jaap bhi bahut jald khatm hoga,,,just wait nd watch...sorry i mean read fo r tht ...😉

nahi...yaar plz aisa mat karna... aakash ko uday sambhal lega

but haan

abhishek is really very good yaar...😊

will update next aprt soon dear...

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: hans1998
superb update really wonderfull

hey...thnxxx yaar i m glad u liked it...

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
wowowowow superb hatts off no words yar...update next soon...

hey thnxxx mahi.. i m glad u liked this chapter...

will update next part soon

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: fia21
Loved the update Nira. I am liking the way you are taking Uday and Manyata's relationship forward and how Manyata is not so afraid in showing her love for Uday anymore.
In chapter 10 I found it so cute and funny they way Manyata kept clinging to Uday infront of everyone and Komal was baffled at her antics. Lol.
Vijay and Unnati are playing the perfect cupids for their respective siblings. And hayeee Uday is so damn romantic. Loving him more and more with every update,
I hope this Akash ka bacha suffers a lot. Seriously man I have started hating him all over again. How can someone be so annoying?!?!
Ooohh Uday and Manyata are going on a romantic outing? Omg can't wait to read that. Akash is already getting jealous. I think he is going to send someone to spy on them. Anyway once again great update Nira. Can't wait to read more!

hello fia ji ...kya haal hai...🤗

hey thnxxx fia...thnxxx alot for such sweet, beautiful nd lovely comment of urs...👏

i m really glad to know tht u liked this update nd how manveer realtionship is further shaping up...thnku😳

even i also liked how manyta was behaving to be with uday in front of everyone specially akash ji.nd komal aunty ji... nd plz do tell how was manveer confession...did u like it or not ?????

glad to know tht u are liking vijay-unnati role of being perfect cupid for manveer... as it was u only who suggested me to include unnati in vijays planin bringing manveer closer ...so for this credit goes to u dear...😃

yeah...manyta nd uday are going on a romantic dat,,,, i really hope u like the next chapter...but i dont know y but i m feeling tht u will definitely like reading the next chpater...😳

yeah aakash is super pissed off...wih manveer...

thnxxx yaar thnxx alot once again fr ur awesum nd amazing comment... u already know how much i love reading ur stuff be it is ur ss or ur short analysis on my updates...👏

will post next part soon...

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: Archi02
Sorry for late comment my dear slbnef. This college will kill me. Ye study hota keu hai? Anyway, it was a fabolus update. You're mahir at writing romantic dialouge. Kuch mujhe vi sikha do. Very nice. Really loved it very much. Please update soon.

hey hi my dear friend archi...🤗

koi galll nai yaar... ki fark painda hai...chahe comment jaldi diya ho ya late...atleat diya to sahi...😉

newys thnxxx yaar thnnx alot... i m very happy to know tht u like dis chap...👏

u know what... you have told me this zillionth time tht i m mahir at writing romantic dailogues...nd romantic scenes...

actually ye sab dmg ki den hai...agar apko really ek intense,,passionate nd romantic love story dekni hai toh do watch dmg...it was an awesum serial...my most fav uptil now...😉

will update next part soon dear...😳