FF:LOVE AT FIRST FIGHT!!!new note page 60 see it! - Page 26

Originally posted by: pranita1202

UPDATE 7- SUPERB ,AMAZING job👏

i adore the coupling u did .aww

arjun as ritwik nice choice.

i love the way u title the updates.😊

Originally posted by: pranita1202

fab update, 👏

monu angry n ashi trying to talk to her

oho arjun not interested in monu (ofcouse he not supposed to be)

but super keen abt ashi. me likey

loved unnati n uday convo

u know this is the bond which cvs haven't ruined in the show

oho monu baby so angry n hungry. my shrew aisha baby also be hungry n angry in next update

both uv n monu don't have mood to eat

last portion sooper exciting

awesome update dear:) pls pls pls continue soon..

CHAPTER NINE : MISSION MAKE JEALOUS. DETECTIVE ASHI HOLMES OUT IN ACTION

"WAT THE HELL ARE U DOING HERE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT THAT TOO LIKE A THIEF????"

"Ye loh!! Koi bhi frnd ghar aaye toh hi hello kehke greet karte hain tu toh chilla raha!! Hi hello toh door ki baat!! Hi hello toh chod andar aane ke liye bhi nahi bola"

"Par tum yahan kar kya rahi ho!?? Woh bhi at this time??"

"Hey bhagwan is chokre ko todo akal de dijio! Ab hat mujhe andar aane de !! Tu bulaye ya nahi bhi aa jaongi"

And she hits him and goes and sits on the bed. And uday follows her and shakes hi head.

"Mein peddle karke full speed mein ye raat ko tere ghar aati hoon aur tu hai ki mujhe toh paani ke liye bhi nahi pooch raha! Chod mujhe koi sharam nahi mein khud hi le loongi"

Saying this she grabs a glass of water from the nearest side table and glups it down at once shocking uday.

"Ye kya tha?"

"Arrey pagal jo meine piya usse na paani kehte hain"

"Watever!! Waise yahaan kaise" he questions her raising his eyebrows.

"Tere se baat karni thi"

"Utna bhi kya important hai jo itni raat gaye chali aayi?"

"Pehle tu baith tujhe dekh ke mere pair mein dard ho rahe hain"

"Accha theek hain ye lo baith gaya"

"Toh"

"Toh kya?"

"Arre wahi"

"Kya wahi?"

"Wassup between u and manyata??"

"B/w who and me? Sorry couldn't here u"

"Kayega thapad ab bol kya chal raha b/w both of u?"

"Arre yaar kuch nahi teri behen gussa ho gayi"

"Woh toh mujhe bhi pata hain kyun gussa hain"

"Woh na tujhe sasha pata hain"

"Wahi woh chudail kahinki"

"Haan wahi usse meine apne crew mein shamil kiya aur usse mera dance partner bhi banaya"

"Woh toh mujhe bhi pata hain andar ki baat batha"

"Woh tu ye apni behen ko math bata theeke"

"Accha theeke"

"Toh sasha na meri gf hain hi nahi woh acting kar rahi hain"

"Hailaaa"

"Shhh dheere"

"Aggo bai tu sach mein ye hahahahahhahahahahah" she started laughing and rolling on the bed.

"Arre yaar hass math na"

"Toh hahaha kya karoon rounnn bol hahahahahaha out of control"

" Dekh isiliye tujhe nahi bathana chahtha tha mein"

"Acccha theeke locked and key thrown"

"Ok ok theeke"

"But waise why did u do this??"

"Teri behen ki feelings jaanne keliye"

"WAT!!!!! Don't tell me u are feeling for her"

"Actually I am kinda feeling for her"

"Oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no"

"Kya hua ashi??"

"Tujhe pata hain ki woh tujhe kaccha chaba jayegi agar usse pata chala toh"

"Kyaaa!!??" Confused

"Usse pyaar lovey dovey, romance vagera se nafrat hain"

"But phir woh mujhe or sasha ko saath mein dekh ke itna jealous kyun hoti hain"

"Woh toh hain par usse feelings develop karne ke liye bohut zyada zyada tym lagtha hain"

"Its totally cool yaar mujhe koi jaldi nahi hain par pls princess ko iss bare mein kuch math bathana pls kyunki I want her to feel it all by herself "

"But udayyy u ...(Interrupted)"

"I know its ok for me if she takes a lot of tym I will wait aur waise bhi I too also need to be totally clear with my feelings"

"Okay. As u wish thakur chaloo I will go now its late now"

"Okay byee da"

"Byee" and she hugs him and gets out from the window she came.

* * *

Manyata was totally tensed and angry on Ashi. Where the hell did she go in the middle of the night! It was 12 30 the front door was also locked!! God this gal!!! She wouldn't know this if she didn't get up to drink water.

She was pacing in her room!! She was angry on Ashi. She did not even tell her anything!! Why god!!! This gal!! Sacch mein one day something will happen with her then she will know!! And suddenly manyata heard a door creek!! She very well knew where it was from! It was the window!! Manyta turned around and stood folding her hands across her chest and looking angrily at the person coming from the window.

"So milgaya aapko tym madam?" She asked to Ashi who had just entered.

Ashi slowly turned to the direction she heard the voice from!! Her eyes became wide open when she saw her, but immediately hid her expression and changed the topic to something else.

"Finally tum uth gayi! Khana khaya kya tumne!! Agar nahi toh rukh tu mein laathi hoon"

"Ashi don't try to change the topic shut up at sit here and I ate my food"

"So ab mein sone jaa rahi hoon bye" she said everything very fast just removed her shoes fell on the bed covering her face with the comforter. Clothes weren't a problem for her. She was in those checkered shorts which she usually wore! She pulled the comforter and hid her face in it and made snoring sounds. Manyata very well knew that this girl hid something from her. She shook her and went up to the bed and made herself ready to sleep but she didn't. Instead she spoke to ashi.

"Ohhh somberi uth mujhe patha hain ki nahi soo rahi isliye uth jaoo warna it won't be good"

Hearing this Ashi slowly lifted the blanket from her face and gave a scared smile to manyata.

"Hehehehe"

"Hehehehe ab chal uth" angrily

"No pls no gussa"

"Batha kaha gayi thi woh at this time??"

"Wohhh actuall mein..."

"Wohhh actual mein kya??"

"Woh actual mein I was thinking of u and thakur when I came to room u were asleep and then I wasn't feeling sleepy so I thought to go for a walk. But then the main door was closed so I went from the window. Aur raathe mein thakur milgaya hum baat karte rahe tym ka pataa hi nahi challa aur fir mujhe strike hua mein aagayi aur dekha ki tum jagi ho bas nothing else now me feeling sleepy goodnight" she said it all in breathe and really fast and pulled the blanket up and acted as if she is sleeping.

But after all manyata was her sister. She knew her very well! She smirked and slowly acted as she was going down and so opened the bedroom door and closed it and stood outside the door. Hearing the creek Ashi got up and sat up on the bed.

"Phewww bach gayi!!! Agar phirse pooch leti madam toh usse pataa chal jaata thank god!!"

And manyata popped in and asked Ashi raising her eyebrows and with a smirk plastered on her face.

"So mujhe kya pataa chal jataa dear??"

Ashi shook for that sudden voice!! Manyata very well knew how to get the truth out of her. Oh man!!!! She was stuck! No way to escape!! Why the hell did she even need to speak out so loud!!! Gahhh!! Ashi thought.

"So bataa na"

"Kya kya bat ... Bataaon?? Huh?"

"Wahi jis ke baare mein tujhe batana chaiye"

"Kuch bhi toh nahi hain na"

"Ohh Ashi agar tune nahi bataya toh phir bua saa ko pata chal jayega ki tune unke manaa karne ke bavajood bhi fridge mein se gajar ka halwa kaya aur naam vijay banna par daal diya"

"Oh no u won't"

"Ya I will if u won't tell me"

"Ok I will tell but tomorrow I am tired"

"Pakka??"

"Pakka"

"Okay then"

And then manyata keeps thinking abt wat must be the thing Ashi was hiding from her. Thinking, thinking she fell asleep.

* * *

Manyata's pov

I felt someone shaking me like hell and yelling and me. But my eyes were too heavy to open and I could not see clearly who it was. Slowly I heard a voice calling my name and literally fell out of the bed on the floor with a thud.

"What is it man let me sleep na!!!!!"

"Ya right manya sleep now gone nuts or wat"

The way she spoke I could make out it was Ashi. I rubbed my eyes and yawned and stretched my self and got up.

"U are late"

"Late for wat Ashi?"

"Wat's the time?"

"Hmmm... Its 7 15"

"And today is which day??"

"Saturday" I say yawning. I realise wat she had actually told. I am freaking going to be late. Helll!!! Basketball practice at school!! How can I forget!!!

"GAHHH!!! I AM FREAKING LATE!!!! AHHH"

"Told you"

I quickly grab my clothes and run into the bathroom to change!! No tym to bath!! Or also I had a bath last night when this idiot wasn't there. I grab the sports deodrant and spray it all over. Wear my dress grab, my bag wear my shoes and was about to go out when I remember my phone!! Damnn!! No battery!!! Stupid phone!!

I remove the spare flip phone I had. Was a old one but would do the job. I grab it, put the sim in it and go down running.

"Manyata beta have breakfast"

"No bua I am late!!"

I gulp down the juice and put a toast in my mouth. I go out near my bike. I remember , my uniform. I didn't bring it. I run back inside storming towards my room. Go to the closet and remove the uniform which was neatly folded. I literally pull it and run out.

"BYEEE!!! EVERYONE!!"

I dump the uniform in the front basket and start biking!! I was biking very fast and I reach the school!! I look at the watch! 7:25!!! Five more minutes for the practice to start. I grab the uniform and literally storm in as if I am running in olympics.

I reach our sports locker room. The girls locker room was before the boys.

I ran in and threw my bag and was about to change I realise my jersey wasn't there. I realise that it fell in the hall at home. Wat to do!! I ask other for a extra jersey but no one has it!!! I see uday going to his locker. Maybe he has. Lucky me that sir said during practice any jersey would do. I put the shorts and run towards uday who was shirtless. Oh man he had a well maintained body. No time to admire. I forgot that was in my sports bra. I removed the shirt . How much more idiot can I get!! I came to meet him like this!! Stupid me!!

"UDAY!!! Abey tera extra jersey de abhi ke abhi" I yell at him.

He sees me with surprise and confusion in his eyes. Suprise to see me in that avatar and confused maybe because I was yelling at him.

"Abey ohh!! Dey na yaar"

"Okay okay"

He throws the jersey towards me. I catch it and wear it and run away yelling a thanks to him.

My hair. I have to tie it up. Lucky I had a rubberband to my wrist. Running towards the gym I tie up my hair and to my surprise no one was there she waited and waited till half an hour but no one came. I called jesse to know why no one had come.

"Hey jess "

"Hey manya"

"Hey no practice or wat"

"U don't know?"

"Don't know wat?"

"Dat no practice today"

"Wat??? But why??"

"Oh sir had a accident and so till they find a sub no practice."

"Okay"

I was fuming in anger. And I hear the gym door creak.

End of pov.

Manyata was very angry. A full bad day. She got up late. Was sweating, hungry and angry. She didn't know wat to do!! Upar se uday issue. But she had forgotten wat Ashi was going to tell or also it didn't bother her much.

She in frustration was shooting ball and was dribbling and was practicing until she sweat. She sat down and drank water, suddenly heard the gym door creak and saw Ashi coming with someone near her.

She was shocked to see the person who it was and exclaimed in happiness and ran to hug the person.

"DHRUVVV!!!!!

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THANKS FOR READING GUYSS!! HOPE U LIKED IT!! NAHI KIYA TOH BHI HIT THE LIKE BUTTON!! WARNA...!! JUST KIDDING!! I HAD TO SCRATCH MY HEAD A LOT TO WRITE THIS TOOK A WHOLE WEEK!! SO BETTER LIKE IT!!! OKAY SO NOW U MIGHT BE THINKING WHO THIS DHRUV IS!! LAST UPDATE HE WAS ARJUN'S FRIEND NOW MANYATA'S STRANGE NA!! I KNOW U ARE THINKING THAT ONLY!! OKAY SO JUST SOMETIME GUEST BUT I WANT U TO DECIDE WHO WILL PLAY THE CHARACTER WHICH ACTOR U HAVE TO DECIDE!!! HE SHOULD BE A BIT CUTE AND ALSO SHOULD MAKE UDAY JEALOUS SO THINK AND CHOOSE!!

XXX:| CHEERZ |:XXX

GOWRI...

gr8 update

Originally posted by: lilybabes

gr8 update

detective ashi holmes lol

oooh Uday has feelings 4 M . awww hes ready 2 wait 4 her so good .

Uday's doin all dis 2 make her jealous lovely . but after de precap i think Uday will b de 1

who ends up bein jealous .

de whole M and basketball prac fiasco was too funny .

and M boring UV's jersey damn gud .

poor M she came to de prac 1ly 2 find out thr's no practice

plz update soon 10x 4 PM

gr8 da👏..but pls dnt let dhruv b/w manveer...update soon

Originally posted by: snowdream

gr8 da👏..but pls dnt let dhruv b/w manveer...update soon

Originally posted by: Gowri05

Thanks krishna!!!

Wait and watch what happens

Ya will!!